Super Runouw Galaxy Phase One

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Super Runouw Galaxy Phase One

Postby GalaxyMario » November 20th, 2009, 1:51 pm

A tale of Runouw users blasting out to the far reaches of the galaxy...

This is Super Runouw Galaxy.

The layout: This story is divided into six phases and each has two episodes, and each episode has three parts.

Begin Phase One!

Episode 1-1

"Wake up! Wake up!"

GalaxyMario yawned and stretched as he got to his feet and found himself staring into the eyes of a bunny with stars on the end of it's ears.

"Finally, you're awake! Let's play!" the bunny said.

GalaxyMario looked around and saw that he was in a spacious castle made of stars.

GM took fifteen minutes to wake up then started out the castle door and stepped out onto a floating space rock.

Far, far out, he could see the Earth.

Galaxy glanced at barren, flat ground with a few craters.

"Where could that starry-eared bunny thing be?" GM wondered aloud.

Then, he spied a hollow rock with a light shining from it.

"Yes, that could be where the bunny is hiding!"

At the end of a short tunnel a brilliant light came from a star picked down from the sky, while underneath the star lay the star-ear bunny.

Instantly, the rabbit leaped into the star and disappeared, along with the star.

Episode 1-2

Coming soon!
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Re: Super Runouw Galaxy Phase One

Postby MICrophone » November 20th, 2009, 1:53 pm

Um, OK. Way too short for me to get the slightest idea where this is going, and therefore I can't rate it.
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Re: Super Runouw Galaxy Phase One

Postby Buff_ » November 20th, 2009, 1:55 pm

Yeah, WAY too short. You need to add more to it, add some more description. And maybe you could come up with your own stuff rather than pinching the story line from Super Mario Galaxy.
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Re: Super Runouw Galaxy Phase One

Postby GalaxyMario » November 20th, 2009, 2:03 pm

I know, the first part does have a huge thing with SMG. But I promise, it'll go in new directions.
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