The Legend of Avo

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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby MICrophone » November 21st, 2009, 8:00 pm

Fourinone?

All right, now this is getting interesting! :D
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Chaukai » November 21st, 2009, 10:02 pm

Whoa! It's like you took everyone's story and mashed it all together, and then put in a few of your own creative twists! I like I like! :) One thing that's weird is how people always seem to go home after a while... o.o
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Buff_ » November 22nd, 2009, 12:19 am

Yes, v. good story. Is anyone else going to be included?
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Avo » November 22nd, 2009, 6:41 am

Buffooner wrote:Yes, v. good story. Is anyone else going to be included?


Yes more people of course.

I don't know how many though.

We'll find out as the story goes along.
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Blablob » November 22nd, 2009, 8:06 am

Mt. Runouw? A mansion? Top security? Who does Suyo think he is? GOD?






Or, you know, Runouw?



Come to think of it, I think you should include Runouw in this story.
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Suyo » November 22nd, 2009, 8:19 am

blablob wrote:Mt. Runouw? A mansion? Top security? Who does Suyo think he is? GOD?


I had some issues with idea stealers and videogame thefts lately, some I'm up there. But being God would be cool, too

The story is well written. Good job.
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Avo » November 22nd, 2009, 10:43 am

Thanks for all the positive feedback everybody!

Here's Chapter 5.

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Chapter 5

Azn was in the forest along with the masked man who murdered alucard, who turned
out to be fourinone. Azn was in a state of shock and couldn't believe his eyes. Why
would fourinone do this? Azn had to get answers, one way or another.

"You see I joined this site only to hack it." four said."And when I became a Moderator,I knew it would be easier. I got everyone to trust me so when I did hack the site, no
one would blame me for it."
"It can't be...you were one of the nicest people on the site." Azn said.

"Yeah well I guess you were wrong about me. And now that I told you, I now have to kill
you."

"What?" Azn wasn't prepared for this. He completely forgot to take a weapon with him.
He just had to use martial arts, even though he doesn't know martial arts.

"I hope you're ready to die!" fourinone charged at Azn attempting to punch him. Azn
had to do something. But he didn't know what. Azn acted without thinking and said:

"STOP!!"

"What?" four responded looking confused.

Azn was also confused. How could four be the murderer? Azn didn't believe a word that
four said. But then he thought....four was sick with the flu the entire week and couldn't
move. Plus, four voice sounds WAY too deep to be his. He also had a british accent as
well! This didn't make sense to Azn, but then he thought...of course!

"You're a hacker aren't you?" Azn said.

"Hmm...you're a smart kid, aren't you?" four said....or the hacker said.

"Yes! And now you're dead!"

Meanwhile at blablob's house

"I'm so bored!" blab said. "I bet the others are having more fun then I am..."

Blablob was about to go to sleep when someone barged into his house, breaking his door down.
It was brandobrawl.

"Oh my god. I finally found you!" BRNDN said, out of breath.

"brandobrawl? What are you doing here?" blab asked.

"Spambots! Kidnapped 3 people! GalaxyMario, Zunar, and Niklaw. There keeping them held in Niklaw''s
Tavern! You have to help us!"

"Why me?"

"I couldn't find anyone else. Now hurry!"

Blablob followed brandobrawl to the Off-Topic Building where the Tavern was held. He couldn't believe
Spambots kidnapped three users! He had to prepare for anything.

When blablob and brandobrawl arrived at the Off-Topic building it was covered from top to bottom, with
dynamite.

"My god....what is this?" blab said, looking surprised and worried.

"This can't be good. We have to hurry." brandobrawl said.

When they entered Niklaw's Tavern, there was nothing there, literally nothing there, all the tables were gone,
the counter was gone. It was all gone. All that was left was a bottle lying in the middle of the floor. Blab
went over to pick it up but when he did, the spot on the floor where the bottle was opened up and blablob
and brandobrawl fell through.

Meanwhile at the forest

Azn ran at the hacker to try to land a punch but the hacker jumped up into the air. Azn was wondering where
he went and when Azn turned around, the hacker struck at him. Sending him flying.

"Give up?" The hacker asked.

"Are you kidding?" Azn said. "I'm just getting started!"

Azn threw several punches at the hacker and managed to knock him down. Azn then noticed his gun. If he wants
to beat this guy, then he has to get that gun.

"You sure are tough, aren't you?" The hacker aid, getting up.

"I still have a lot in me! Prepare to die...." Azn said.

The fight between Azn and the hacker went on for hours....days! Well, that's what it felt like but they were only
fighting for about 10 minutes now. Azn finally managed to grab the hacker's gun. The hacker pulled away to try
to get the gun back. Azn did so as well. They were both playing Tug-o-war with the gun until finally, the hacker
let go of the gun and so did Azn. The hacker quickly ran to get the gun. As he was on his knees to get it, Azn
came and grabbed it and pointed it at the hacker. The hacker looked at Azn with an "I know I'm gonna die" look.
Azn hesitated to shoot the gun, but then he said:

"...This is for Alucard."

BAM!!

The hacker was dead, he laid flat on the floor with his blood escaping from where he had been shot. Then suddenly,
rain started to pour. The kind of rain that pours when something tragic happens, like when somebody dies. Azn
dropped the gun and looked at the dead hacker. He then left. But where he went was unknown.

Meanwhile at the Off-Topic Building

Blablob and brandobrawl felt like they were falling to there death. They were sliding down a metal slide that seemed
to never end. When they reached the bottom, they saw the spambots and the hostages.

"Guys! You're here to save us right?" Zunar asked.

"No we're just delivering pizza that the spambots ordered." brandobrawl said sarcastically.

"Ha ha, very funny." Zunar said.

There were three spambots, a big one, a small one and a medium sized one. They were all saying random things so
blab and BRNDN couldn't tell who the leader was.

"OMG SOMEONE SET US UP THE BOMB." The big spambot said. Translation: On no! They found us!

"IT'S OVER 9000!!!! I WONDER WHAT'S FOR DINNER." The small one said. Translation: It can't be! Our hideout is perfect!

"MAMA LUIGIGIGIGIGIGI!!!!! KIDS. THERE'S NOTHING MORE COOL THAN BEING HUGGED BY SOMEONE YOU LIKE."
The medium sized spambot said. Translation:.......???

"This is sad..." blablob said.

"They may look weird but they could strike at any second! Get ready blablob." BRNDN said.

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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby nin10mode » November 23rd, 2009, 7:08 pm

:shock: Hackers!? Spambots!? ALUCARDX DIED!? :shock:
This is a GREAT story! It kept me interested, it kept me ROFL, and most of all... wait. That's all I really have to say! Oh... one more thing.
Attitude throughout the story:
Before: :|
A little later: :)
During: :D
Sometimes: :lol:
After: :mrgreen:

So many PLOT TWISTS!!!
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Blablob » November 24th, 2009, 4:33 am

Meh......the story is starting to get a little boring for me.

Sorry, but I'm just not getting into the story itself. I was into it before, and I can't wait to see what happens next, but for now, I'm just not that interested.

Don't get me wrong. I'm sure lots of people like your story, and I'm sure there are a few things wrong with my story (other than grammer). But please don't be a baby about it and start talking about my story just because your mad. Say it from your heart, like I am.

I'm not calling you a baby. I don't think you would do something like that, but I'm just making sure.


Despite all the above, I still can't wait until chapter 6.
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Avo » November 24th, 2009, 8:42 am

Chapter 6

Both Avolerators and Buffooner were standing in awe at what they saw. It was Superyoshi
in his closet and he........killed himself.

"We're too late..." Avo said.

"All that work...for nothing..." Buffooner said. "What do we do now?"

"I don't know, I guess we have to leave..."

Both of them left the mansion and took the elevator. The guards were still looking for the bear
Buffooner mentioned earlier.

"Where is it? Where did it go?" The first guard asked.

"Just keep looking. We'll find it." The second guard said.

Avolerators and Buffooner got of the elevator without even looking at the guards. They were
both very disappointed at what happened to Suyo. The two entered the forest without even
worrying if they got lost. They managed to escape and when they did, they saw the mysterious
man in the trench coat. He said:

"So boys? What did it go? How's Suyo?"

"What? How do you know we were looking for Superyoshi?" Avo asked.

"Well...I tell you...but not here, follow me." The man said.

The two followed the man into some strange alley in the west part of the city. They did not
know what the man was thinking, or what he was going to do.

"You see boys, everything was going great in this forum, but when today rolled in, it was all
going wrong." The man said.

"I don't know how this is happening, sir." Buffooner said. "But we're only kids, we can't fix it"

"Hmm, I should probably show you who I am, right?" The man said.

"Yes! Please! I want to know!" Avo said.

"Alright, then." The man said.

The man turned around and took his scarf and his hat off. Then he turned around.

"Oh my god." Avo said. "No way!"

The man in the trench coat with a scarf and hat turned out the one who created this site.
It was.........Runouw.

"I know exactly what's happening, it says it all in the prophecy." Runouw said.

"Prophecy? What prophecy?" Avo asked.

"The Secret Digital Prophecy. You see, the internet controls a lot of things, it helps planes
fly to there destinations, it keeps missiles and bombs from being launched. But all of that
doesn't matter. The prophecy states that November 26th, 2009 is when the computers will
all fail and not only will the entire internet fail, but the world will be destroyed due to this."
Runouw said.

"You mean..." Buffooner said.

"Yes." Runouw replied. "You're looking at Y2K all over again."

Avolerators and Buffooner were completely shocked about this. The end of the World? It
can't be! Weren't there enough doomsday theories already? Well that wasn't the problem.

"Is there any way to fix this?" Buffooner asked.

"Fortunately, there is." Runouw said. "There is a core somewhere past the walls of Runouw
City and into the Information Superhighway. It's called the Motherbrain. Viruses are approaching
the Motherbrain as we speak, and lot's of them. Enough to make the prophecy come true."

"Great! So there is a way to stop it!" Avo said.

"Don't get your hopes up, kid. The Motherbrain is next to impossible to get to. No one has ever
gotten to it." Runouw said. "It would take days. There won't be enough time..."

Runouw, Avolerators and Buffooner both stood there thinking. Then Runouw said:

"That's it! The Webship!"

"The whatship?" Avo asked.

"The Webship. A vehicle that only exists in the internet. It is seriously fast! Faster than Sonic
the Hedgehog!" Runouw said.

"So...where is it?" Buffooner asked.

"It's in the super secret garage. But what I know is that it's not that far from here." Runouw answered.

"Oh...this is sounding really complicated." Avo said.

"Don't worry about that now." Runouw said. "You boys need proper equipment. Meet me in my office at
11:30. In that time, I suggest that you recruit some users to go with you. It's gonna be rough."

Runouw left and took his hat and scarf with him. "This isn't gonna be easy." Avo and Buffooner thought.

"Who should we recruit?" Avo asked.

"I don't know. It's 10:00 right now. How about we split up to find more people." Buffooner said.

"OK Good idea!"

Avo already knew two people he was going to recruit. But Buff didn't know anybody. He had to think fast,
though.

Avo was planning on recruiting Azn and blablob to his team. But he couldn't find the both of them. Avo checked
their houses, the forum buildings, everywhere. But he couldn't find them.

"Uh-oh...this isn't good..." Avo said.

Meanwhile Buffooner was looking for recruits. He was thinking GalaxyMario, marioiscool254 and alucardx60.
GalaxyMario and Alucard were no where to be found. Neither was MIC. Of course! The tavern! MIC must still
be working! Buffooner went to Niklaw's Tavern buthe saw it. The dynamite that was hanging from the Off-Topic
Building.

"Geez! I'm not going in there!" Buffooner thought.

He was gonna recruit the moderators but Niklaw is no where to be found, fourinone is sick and Superyoshi hung
himself! This isn't good. Neither Avo or Buffooner had any recruits.

11:30 came quickly and Avo and Buffooner had no recruits. They both headed to Runouw's Office. When they arrived
Runouw said:

"So? Got any recruits?"

"...No, we got nothing. The people who we want to recruit are either dead or missing!" Buffooner said.

"Oh...that's not good...you guys look like you need to go alone." Runouw said.

Avolerators and Buffooner were worried. They were gonna travel to the Motherbrain? Alone?! This isn't good they thought.
But they have to save the internet, and the world.

"OK guys." Runouw said. "It's time to give you your equipment! Here we have a box full of guns, here we have a box full of grenades,
and here we have a box full of swords! Take your pick."

The two took as many weapons as they could. A bunch of grenades, 5 Guns, and 4 swords.

"OK boys, good luck on your journey." Runouw said.

The two were about to leave when Runouw said: "Wait! Take this, a map of the entire internet, trust me, you'll need it."

"Thanks!" Avo said.

The two finally left to save the internet, and the world. And they were prepared for anything.

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