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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby nin10mode » November 24th, 2009, 10:27 am

. . . Chapter 6 was... short. :|
Anyway, I hope Chapter 7 is even A LITTLE longer...
Still, good story!

One more thing... What is your legend/prophesy/destiny or whatever, and when is it going to be introduced?
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Avo » November 24th, 2009, 11:56 am

Due to the Story Arc coming up. Chapter 7 will be short.

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Chapter 7

Blablob and brandobrawl were in the middle of fighting the three Spambots. The big one, the little
on and the medium sized one. There was one problem, though. Neither blab or BRNDN had any
weapons! Fortunately, brandobrawl found some sitting in the corner. Both of them grabbed a gun
and were prepared to fight.

"I can't believe we're fighting SPAMBOTS!" blablob said.

"Like I said before, they could be really tough." BRNDN said.

"ALL YOR BASE R BELONG TOO US!!!!" The small spambot said. "CHECK OUT THE ENCLOSED INSTRUCTION BOOK."

It seemed as the small spambot was short circuiting. It ran around shouting random memes like:

"MAMA?? MAMA LUIGI?? HAHAHAHAHA!!!!"

After 2 minutes of running around. It finally exploded. Which left the big one and the medium sized one.

"That was...weird...." Blablob said.

"Well that makes it even now!" BRNDN said, smiling.

The big one was the first to charge. It charged at blablob with great speed. Blablob was caught off and was thrown threw the air
due to the big punch. BRNDN quickly fired his gun at the big one. But it wasn't working. He fired again but it still wasn't working!

"Uh-oh. This isn't good." BRNDN said.

Blablob recovered from the impact of the punch and got up. He saw the big one approaching the BRNDN as if he was going to kill
him.

"NO!!!" blablob shouted. But then he saw a water bottle in Zunar's hand. Blablob thought, how did the small one short circuit, water?
But from where? Blablob looked up to see a leaky ceiling, a drop of water must've fell on the small one.

"Zunar! Pass me that water bottle!" blablob said.

"But I'm thirsty..." Zunar said.

"*facepalm* I don't care! You're tied up anyway! You can't drink it!! Throw it over here!" blablob said.

Zunar threw the water botttle over to blablob. Blablob managed to catch it. He opened up and splashed some water on the big one.

"O.....M.....G.......SOMEONE.....SET US.......UP....THE....BOMB......" The big one said as he short circuited.

The big one ran around like the small one did. And in 2 minutes, the big one exploded. All that was left was the medium-sized one.

Blablob and brandobrawl weren't too worried about the medium sized one. Mostly because blablob still had some water left in the bottle.
Blablob was about to splash the spambot with water until he started to talk and said:

"IF YOU BLOW ME UP THE ENTIRE BUILDING BLOW UP."

What was blablob going to do? If we destroys the robot, the off-topic building will explode. But if he doesn't, he's most likely to kill the 3
hostages. Blablob thought for a while and said:

"Eat water Robo-scum!!"

Blablob splashed the robot with water, the robot ran around like the other two and in 2 minutes, he would explode. Blablob and brandobrawl
had to get the hostages out of the building. They found and exit and escaped. hey kept running until the building exploded! But the hostages
were all right.

"Whew, thanks boys!" Niklaw said. "You saved us! But for the Off-Topic building...I'm sure no one will notice!"

Blablob, brandobrawl, GalaxyMario and Zunar all laughed and then Niklaw joined. The 3 left leaving blablob and brandobrawl.

"Thanks man!" BRNDN said. "You saved them."

"Thanks!" blablob said.

Brandobrawl left and so did blablob. But on his way home blablob saw Avolerators and Buffooner with a bunch of weapons. Blablob quickly ran
over to them.

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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby MICrophone » November 26th, 2009, 12:57 pm

All right! Things are coming together! I'm likin' it, I'm likin' it! Can't wait for the next chapters…
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby zebtrestalala » November 26th, 2009, 7:38 pm

Interesting...I seem to have stumbled on a forum filled with a plethora of stories.

Despite the fact that I don't really "know" anyone on the forums, and really just post levels, I thought it was good. Keep it up. THe story line can be a little jumpy, and your endings could use a little work, but it's good overall
Signatures are silly little things.

With that in mind, check out my clever, well-thought, and generally amazing level series!
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Avo » November 27th, 2009, 12:12 pm

Since I'm about to start The Story Arc. Chapters 8-14...

Chapters will come much slower.

I will start Chapter 8 This Week or Next Week.
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby GalaxyMario » November 28th, 2009, 2:09 pm

Cool! The really funny part was the SPAMBOT voice! :D :lol: :) ;)
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Avo » November 29th, 2009, 10:05 am

Alright!! This is it!!!!!!!!! The Story Arc!!!! Hope you enjoy it!!!

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Chapter 8

Azn exited out of the forest, looking out at the city, it was completely quiet. Then again,
it was Midnight. He kept walking until he saw two figures carrying guns and other weapons.
Intruders? He didn't know, but he charged at them with full speed. When he bashed into them,
he shouted:

"DIE DEMON BEAST!!!!!!!!!!! DON'T MAKE ME USE FORCE OF THE HEAVENS ON YOU!!!!"

"Azn!!!!!!!!!!!" Avo shouted. "It's me!!! And Buffooner!"

""Yeah, besides that move doesn't exist. C'mon!!! It's only in your dreams!!!" Buffooner said.

Avolerators and Buffooner laughed a lot for a while. Azn grew angry and slapped them both on
the face.

"OW!!!! What was that for?" Avo asked.

"It's my invention. The laugh stopper. Now what are you two doing with weapons?" Azn asked.

"Oh well it's a long story." Buffooner said.

Avolerators and Buffooner explained the events that happened to them. The mysterious man,
how Suyo killed himself. Everything.

Meanwhile at the...blown up Off-Topic building.

"How are we gonna fix this?" Zunar asked.

"Well....we're gonna need a lot of money. Whaddya got, boys?" Niklaw asked.

'"Well I got 2 dollars." Blablob said.

"I got 5 dollars." brandobrawl said.

".....I got a MILLION DOLLARS!!!!!!" GalaxyMario said.

"GASP" Everyone said.

"No wait, this is money I stole from Zunar's Runouwopoly.

"HEY!!! When we're done with this, you give that back!!!" Zunar yelled.

"Well I guess we'll have to wait then. I'm home." Niklaw said.

"Me too" GalaxyMario said.

"Ditto" Zunar said.

"Yeah I'm going home, too." Brandobrawl said.

Everyone left but blablob. He looked at the wreck of the Off-Topic building, then headed
home. On his way home he saw three people. Avolerators, Buffooner and aznchau4ever.
He ran up to them.

"Hey!" blablob yelled.

"Hi blablob!!" Avo said. "Where were you?"

"I was fighting spambots in the Off-Topic building and now it's completely destroyed. Nothing special."

Avolerators, Buffooner and aznchau4ever looked at blablob strangely.

"Um...OK. Well we're going to save the world!" Azn said.

"Cool! From what?" blablob asked.

"Aw geez we don't have time to explain now!" Avo said.

"We got some extra guns and swords and grenades!!" Buffooner said. "Take your pick!"

After Azn and blablob chose there weapons the 4 headed out to look for the Webship. On the way out of
the city, Azn explained to blablob what was happening.

"So I'm guessing we don't know where the Super-Secret Garage is, do we?" blablob asked.

"Nope." Avo said. "But Runouw said it's somewhere around this area."

"...It's another forest." Azn said.

"OK guys! Let's split up and find the garage, alright?" Avo said.

"ALRIGHT!" Everyone else said.

Avo headed north, Azn headed south, blablob headed east and Buffooner headed west. They were determined to find
the Webship, it was there only hope to save the Internet, and the world.

Blablob was looking around until he found a weed, one weed.

"Aw man!! I hate weeds!" he said.

Blablob went over to pull it out. When he did, the entire forest rumbled. And behind a bunch of trees was the garage.

"Uh...guys! Come over here!" blablob said.

Everyone came and saw the garage. They all started in awe. Then Avo said.

"Good job blablob! Amazing!!! Come on! Let's go inside."

They all opened up the garage and saw the Webship. It was huge! It was the most amazing thing they saw in their life!
They approached it until Avo said:

"...Who's gonna drive it? I'm only 12!!!"

"Well me and Buffooner are both 14...."

Then everyone looked at Azn.

"...What? I'm 15!!! 15! I'm not old enough!!!"

"But you're the oldest of the group!!" Blablob said.

"......Fine!! I'll do it!" Azn said.

The 4 entered the Webship. Buffooner sat in the passenger seat. Avo and blablob sat in the back seats, and Azn
sat in the driver's seat. Azn turned it on and crashed into the back.

"That's the brake pedal!!!!" Buffooner shouted.

"Oops! I knew that!" Azn said, looking embarrassed.

"Something tells me you're not gonna pass Driver's Ed." Avolerators said.

"Whatever." Azn said. Azn finally got the Webship out of the garage and they headed for the Motherbrain. But
their adventure was just beginning!

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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby GalaxyMario » November 29th, 2009, 10:09 am

I said: "...I GOT A MILLION DOLLARS!!!"

My fav part of chapter 8!
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Blablob » November 29th, 2009, 10:55 am

Avolerators wrote: Azn grew angry and slapped them both on
the face.

"OW!!!! What was that for?" Avo asked?

"It's my invention. The laugh stopper.


That was the best part of the chapter! :D
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Buff_ » November 29th, 2009, 11:09 am

Yeah, good concept, but some things you don't explain very well. Like "they found an exit and went through it", I don't know if that's the wording but whatever. There is also the fact you contradicted yourself, like this

Avolerators wrote:But on his way home blablob saw Avolerators and Buffooner with a bunch of weapons. Blablob quickly ran over to them.


and

Avolerators wrote:Everyone left but blablob. He looked at the wreck of the Off-Topic building, then headedhome. On his way home he saw three people. Avolerators, Buffooner and aznchau4ever. He ran up to them.


I got a sense of Déjà vu. Déjà vu.
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