The Legend of Avo

[Chaukai]

Amen! Runouwopoly? That sounds like a BA game!

[MICrophone]

Azn grew angry and slapped them both on
the face.

"OW!!!! What was that for?" Avo asked?

"It's my invention. The laugh stopper.

That was the best part of the chapter!

I concur.

Good story, but watch your contradictions, especially the one that Buff noted. Keep it up!

EDIT (Upon the completion of the chapter): Watch your tenses boi! The last sentence of Chapter 8 is in the present tense when most of the story is in the past tense. Also…I kind of am feeling left out…I sort of vanished after the beginning. But it's still good!

[Chaukai]

Lol I'll have you know I'm an excellent driver! *Walks away and gets into a car to leave.* Oh wait... o.o I forgot the keys.... No matter! *Grabs soap bar and whittles a key. Then proceeds to shoving soap key into car ignition. Car blows up.* Okay... Maybe not... x.x

[Avo]

Azn grew angry and slapped them both on
the face.

"OW!!!! What was that for?" Avo asked?

"It's my invention. The laugh stopper.

That was the best part of the chapter!

I concur.

Good story, but watch your contradictions, especially the one that Buff noted. Keep it up!

EDIT (Upon the completion of the chapter): Watch your tenses boi! The last sentence of Chapter 8 is in the present tense when most of the story is in the past tense. Also…I kind of am feeling left out…I sort of vanished after the beginning. But it's still good!

Well like I said. I never proofread it.

I jut shove it out there!

[spookyghost]

Very good boi! Keep it up!

[Avo]

Chapter 9

Avolerators, Buffooner, blablob and aznchau4ever were on their way to the
motherbrain in the center of the internet. They found the Webship in the
garage in a forest and blasted off.

"So....who wants to listen to some radio?" Azn asked.

"Sure." Avo said.

"Alrighty! Let's see what's on! Um...this button!!" Azn said as he pressed the 4 button.

"IN OUR SOULS!!!! SO FAR AWAY! WE WAIT FOR THE DAAAAYAAAAAY!!!
FOR THE LIVES ALL SO WASTED AND GOOOOOOOONE!!!!
WE FEEL THE PAIN OF A LIFETIME LOST IN A THOUSAND DAYS!!
THROUGH THE FIRE AND THE FLAMES WE CARRY ON!!!!" The radio blasted as it played Through the
Fire and the Flames.

"Yeah!! Now this is real music!!" Avo said.

"Not for me." Azn turned the radio off.

"Hey!!! That's my favourite song!!" Avo said.

"Uh-oh..."Azn said.

"What??" Everyone else said.

Apparently the 4 forgot to fill the Webship with enough fuel. It was going down into a lonely desert.

"YOU FORGOT TO FUEL THIS THING??" Avo shouted.

"Hey!!! No one warned me about this!!!"

"WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!! WE'RE ALL GONNA DIE!!" blablob shouted.

".......Are you crying??" Avo asked.

"I'M GONNA DIE!! OF COURSE I'M CRYING!!" blablob shouted.

"Everybody hang on!!" Buffooner said.

CRASH!!!!!

Everybody was knocked out. It took 20 minutes until blablob woke and said:

"We are officially dead..."

"Oh man... What the hell happened?" Buffooner said.

"....We crashed...." Avo said.

"Oh my god! Really?" Buffooner said sarcastically.

"Hey! Don't start this! I not in the freakin' mood!" Avo said attempting to threaten Buffooner.

"What's wrong? Can't take a joke?" Buff said."

"THAT'S IT!" Avo ran at Buffooner and Buffooner ran at Avo. But they were both stopped by Azn.

"You two!! We already have enough problems!! We don't need anymore!! Alright? Cool off!"

"Where are we?" blablob asked.

"We must be at the Rasada Desert..."

"Wh-where??" blablob shuttered on the spot. He had heard about this place and how no one had ever
returned if they had ventured in this place. They had to walk to the Motherbrain. They knew which way
they had to go but they didn't know how long it would take.

"If we have to get to the Motherbrain we have to split up. Me and Buffooner go west and blablob and
Avo will go east." Azn said. "We'll take these Walkie-Talkies with us to communicate with each other.
Hopefully we will all end up at the same place. Good Luck, guys!"

Azn and Buffooner headed west to get to the Motherbrain. Both Avolerators and blablob just stood there
for a couple minutes until Avo said:

"......Kinda dumb of Azn to not give us Walkie-Talkies......or a map......."

"This is sad." blablob responded.

"I guess we just have to go with our instincts and head east."

What felt like 3 days without food or water was actually 5 minutes, then Avolerators said: "L-l-look!"
Avo pointed at what looked like a Coca-Cola Machine.

"We're saved!!" blablob said.

They both ran up the hills of sand not taking their eyes off the machine, when they finally got to the
machine they found out it was just a mirage. Avo said:

"Crap! It was a mirage!!"

"Aw man!! We're doomed Avo! DOOMED!!!!" blabolb shouted.

As blablob was crying Avolerators spotted a strange man walking towards them. "Hey Blablob, look!"
blablob saw him as well, he slowy walked towards them.

"Who are you?" Avo asked the man.

The man laughed a little and said: "Hi Avo! Hi blablob!"

"What the--?? It can't be....."Avo said.

"What are you doing here, MIC?" blablob said.

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[MICrophone]

I'm back! Yesh! That automatically makes this story so much better…

OK, now my serious review. I feel like Chapter 9 was a little rushed, though the story is still good. Perhaps you could have gone into a bit more detail about the trek through the desert from when you and blablob leave azn and Buff to when they see the Coke machine. Also, I'm confused about the walkie-talkie thing. Did azn and Buff take them and not give you and blablob one? But other than that, it's good.

[Avo]

I'm back! Yesh! That automatically makes this story so much better…

OK, now my serious review. I feel like Chapter 9 was a little rushed, though the story is still good. Perhaps you could have gone into a bit more detail about the trek through the desert from when you and blablob leave azn and Buff to when they see the Coke machine. Also, I'm confused about the walkie-talkie thing. Did azn and Buff take them and not give you and blablob one? But other than that, it's good.

I'll admit I rushed it a bit.

And the Walkie-Talkie thing. Azn and Buff took them all.

Not the smartest move in the world...

But thanks for the review!!

[Chaukai]

Yeah, I'll go with Microphone on this too, it did feel a bit rushed, especially when they crashed. It went from, everybody on the ship and then CRASH they just get there like that. Uhh, It's still good though! But...

What felt like 3 days without food or water was actually 5 minutes, then Avolerators said: "L-l-look!"
Avo pointed at what looked like a Coca-Cola Machine.

"We're saved!!" blablob said.

They both ran up the hills of sand not taking their eyes off the machine, when they finally got to the
machine they found out it was just a mirage. Avo said:

"Crap! It was a mirage!!"

"Ew....an RC Cola Machine." blablob said. "Aw man!! We're doomed Avo! DOOMED!!!!"

Stolen joke from Family Guy, >:( -1 for originality.

[Avo]

Chapter 10

"Oh....crap....I forgot to give Walkie-Talkies.......Ah they'll be fine." Azn said.

aznchau4ever and Buffooner were heading west to try to find the Motherbrain.
After finding out that Azn forgot to give Avolerators and blablob Walkie-Talkies,
things could get bad.....

"YOU FORGOT TO GIVE THEM WALKIE-TALKIES??" Buffooner shouted.

"[sarcasm]NO!! I only said that to worry you!![/sarcasm] Are you deaf or something?"

Suddenly one the Walkie-Talkies azn had started to speak. It was a strange voice.
It said:

"Now you are gonna listen to me and follow my orders......"

"Huh? Who are you?"

"No questions......." The voice said. "Follow my orders or I will destroy the entire
planet. Understand?"

Azn and Buffooner huddled up and talked this over. Is this a prank? Is he a Spam-
bot? They didn't know. They had to figure it out soon. They came to an agreement.

".....Fine. We'll follow your orders." Buffooner said.

"Good. Your first order is.....go to the Secret Headquarters of the Interarmy. Once
your at the entrance. I will tell you more." The voice said.

"The secret HQ? I've heard of it but I don't know where it is..." Azn said.

"No problem." The voice said. He made two glasses appear. Sunglasses. They had a
built in GPS system. "Now go!!"

"Well...we have no choice...." Azn said. "Let's go."

It took a few hours until they could see the headquarters of the Interarmy. When they got to the entrance
they told the voice that they were there. The voice responded and said:

"Good. Now, go inside and get to the basement, there you will find a box of guns. Go!"

"OK." Azn said as he turned off the walkie-talkie. "We have to follow his orders, Buffooner."

"I know, I just don't know why this is happening. Who is that person?"

"I don't know, maybe we'll find out. But for now....let's go."

They both entered the building, they turned on the Camoflouge so no one could see them, they got to the
elevator and arrived at the basement. The voice said:

"Well done. Now to open the box, you need to enter a code, the code is 12 23 7."

Azn opened the box to see guns, not just guns, special guns, used only by the Interarmy.

"But....we already have guns, why do we need more?" Buffooner asked.

"Oh...you'll see. Now listen to this order and listen closely..." The voice said.

The voice told Azn and Buffooner their final order. After he finished, Azn said:

"WHAT? Why?"

"No questions" The voice said. "Now hurry!"

The voice ended the conversation. Azn said:

"We can't do this!! We...can't!!

"Azn we have to!! If we don't........the world will end. Now come on!!" Buffooner said.

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