The Legend of Avo

[Avo]

Chapter 11

The following events happened at the same time as Chapter 10

Avolerators and blablob were walking through the desert desperately looking for a drink of water. When
suddenly, a figure came towards them, the 2 saw who it was and blablob said:

"What are you doing here, MIC?"

"Hi!! I thought I'd take a walk in the desert to see what's happening.....and here you are!"

".....no seriously, what are you doing here?"

"OK, I heard where you guys were going back at the forums and I wanted to come. So I followed you
guys but I knew it would take me a long time to get to the Motherbrain. I kept walking in the desert
and I found you guys." MIC said.

"Oh....that's surprising....anyway, we need to get to the Motherbrain.....can you help us?" Avo asked.

"Sure!! I know where it is! I've been through this desert a million times. I can walk through here in my
sleep." MIC said. "It's north from here. You guys go on, I'll be there in a sec."

Avolerators and blablob gathered their strength and ran north while MIC stayed there. MIC took a Walkie-
Talkie out of his pocket. He turned it on, cleared his throat, and in a deep voice he said in the Walkie-Talkie:

"Now you are gonna listen to me and follow my orders......"

"Huh? Who are you?" Azn said on the other line.

"No questions......." MIC said. "Follow my orders or I will destroy the entire planet. Understand?"

After Azn said that he and Buffooner will follow his orders, MIC told them what to do and hung up. He put the Walkie-
Talkie back in his pocket and quickly ran over to Avo and blablob.

"What were you doing back there?" Avo asked MIC.

"Oh....nothing....just catching my breath, that's all. Anyway, we're almost out of the desert, once we're out, we'll arrive
at a gigantic building, and in that building, is the Motherbrain, we have to hurry, viruses are attacking as we speak."
MIC said.

The three, MIC, Avo and blablob were heading for the Motherbrain. Unless you were hiding under a rock for the
past month you would know that. It took them a couple hours to get to the building, once it was in sight, someone
yelled out:

"STOP RIGHT WHERE YOU ARE!"

"Huh? Who are you? Where are you?" blablob said.

"I am Axem Green, the smart one!!"

"I am Axem Pink, the cute one!!"

"I am Axem Yellow, the strong one!!"

"I am Axem Black, the cool one!!"

"And I am Axem Red, the leader!!"

"AND WE ARE THE AXEM RANGERS!!" They all said.

"We are here to stop you from going any further. This is our territory!!" The red one said.

"We never fail at our work and we will destroy you!" The green one said.

".......You've got to be kidding me......you guys are video-game villains!! Why are you here?" Avo asked.

"We don't know......we were just ordered by Kingrus to destroy you intruders. And we never fail at our work!!" The black
one said.

"Hey! I already said that! We never fail at our work!" The green one said.

"Oh give it a rest, let it go, everyone knows I'm cooler than you!" The black one said.

"Why you little-----"

"ENOUGH YOU TWO!!" The red one said. "You can fight after we're done with these pests."

"Avo, blablob, get your weapons out, this isn't going to be easy...." MIC said.

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[Blablob]

This chapter seemed very rushed. It seems like it only took you 5-10 minutes (when it should've taken you like 30 minutes). What I mean by that is it was very short, and barely anything happened. You and me ran into MIC, and that was it. You can do better, Avo. I know you can. I've seen you do it.

[Avo]

This chapter seemed very rushed. It seems like it only took you 5-10 minutes (when it should've taken you like 30 minutes). What I mean by that is it was very short, and barely anything happened. You and me ran into MIC, and that was it. You can do better, Avo. I know you can. I've seen you do it.

Well first of all, this isn't all of it. It's just a part of it.

I post these in parts.

Second of all, it wasn't rushed. Took me 20 minutes or even more to get this out.

I appreciate the honest review but if you think that this part is the entire Chapter 11 then it's not.

More stuff will happen in the rest of this, blablob.

[MICrophone]

Huh…interesting…I'm the voice…cool! Yeah, it was a little short, but as you said its not the end of the chapter. Good work!

[Blablob]

This chapter seemed very rushed. It seems like it only took you 5-10 minutes (when it should've taken you like 30 minutes). What I mean by that is it was very short, and barely anything happened. You and me ran into MIC, and that was it. You can do better, Avo. I know you can. I've seen you do it.

Well first of all, this isn't all of it. It's just a part of it.

I post these in parts.

Second of all, it wasn't rushed. Took me 20 minutes or even more to get this out.

I appreciate the honest review but if you think that this part is the entire Chapter 11 then it's not.

More stuff will happen in the rest of this, blablob.

Ok, well, yeah. I understand that this isn't the entire chapter. I'm just saying that, for preview standerds, not much was going on. But that's just my opinion.

[Avo]

This chapter will be short. No reason. But the next 2 chapters will be good!!

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Chapter 12

Aznchau4ever and Buffooner took the guns that they found at the Headquarters of the Interarmy and
headed for the Motherbrain. They were told they're last order by the mysterious voice. That last
task was shocking, but they had to do it.

"You OK, azn?" Buffooner asked as azn looked down at the ground.

"I'm fine, I just can't believe we have to do this...." azn replied.

"Look, I know it's shocking but if we don't do it, the world will suffer. Now let's hurry!"

As they were running azn stopped and said:

"How do you think Avo and blablob are doing?"

"Oh...they're fine, I won't be surprised if they're already at the Motherbrain." Buffooner said.

"I don't know......I didn't give walkie-talkies...."

"They're fine!! It's not like they're fighting the Axem rangers or anything."

"Yeah....that's impossible!! Let's go......"

"What's wrong?" Buffooner asked.

"I'm just thinking about what that voice told us to do...."

Flashback Time!!

Now with those guns.." The voice said. "You go to the Motherbrain, wait for Avo and blablob
to come, and kill them with those guns!"

"What? No way!"

"Do it, or suffer the consequences." The voice said.

"But.....why do we need these guns?" Buffooner asked.

"These are special guns that can kill someone instantly! Once they're dead, I'll make you two my
servants and we can all rule the world!!" The voice said.

".....Who are you?" Azn asked.

"Fine, you wanna know that badly? I am Kingrus, i am the ruler of all viruses. I have destroyed
over 1 million computers with my powers. Now hurry to the Motherbrain!! It's not far from here.
I'll see you there! MWAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!"

End of Flashback Time!!

"It's insane..." azn said.

"I don't like this as much as you do, but we have to do it." Buffooner said.

".........Fine, I'll never forgive myself for this..."

"Look, there's the building that the Motherbrain is in. Let's go."

Aznchau4ever and Buffooner entered this strange building, it labelled: "ULTIMATE HEADQUARTERS".
Once they got in, to their surprise, it was completely abandoned. Everything was broken, the computers,
the TVs. Everything. The only thing that was not broken was an elevator that lead downstairs to the
basement, where the Motherbrain was held. When the two got in the elevator and arrived at the basement,
the sight was amazing, the Motherbrain looked exactly like the Motherbrain from Metroid.

"Wow.....look at this place....." azn said.

"It's amazing......" Buffooner said.

"Kingrus must not be here yet."

"We'll have to sit and wait, get ready for the viruses to come as well."

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[Avo]

Chapter 13

"So! You can surrender to us if you value your life!" The red one said.

Avolerators, blablob and marioiscool254 were on their way to the building where the Motherbrain was held,
but they were stopped by the Axem Rangers, No seriously, the Axem rangers. And they were in the mood
to fight.

"We won't back down!" Avo said.

"Very well then, green, black, go after the one on the left, blablob I think is his name." The red one said.

"Wait, I have to work with this idiot?" The green one said.

"IDIOT???? I SHOULD KILL YOU FOR THAT!!" The black one said.

"SHUT UP!! NOW IF YOU TWO DON'T COOPERATE I'LL KILL YOU MYSELF, SO ATTACK!!" The red one said.

".......Fine, whatever, you're going down bloblab." The green one said.

"HEY!! It's BLABLOB!! If you want to kill me you might wanna pronounce my name properly!" blablob said.

"Yellow, Pink, go after the one with the microphone on his shirt." The red one said.

"Right boss! I'll kill him so hard he won't feel any pain!" The yellow one said.

"I'll distract him with my charm!" The pink one said.

"Oh please." MIC said. "You're so ugly people kill themselves just to stay away from you."

"WHY YOU LITTLE BRAT!! CHAAAAAAAARRRRRRRGGGGGGEEEEEE!!!!!!" The pink one said.

"And I'll take care of you, Avolerators." The red one said.

"What? H-how do you know my name?" Avo asked.

".....It says it on your shirt. "Hello, my name is Avolerators." I mean seriously!! Did you not notice that?" The red one said.

"Don't underestimate me!" Avo said.

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"Alright you guys! You wanna fight?" blablob said. "Then come and get me!"

"I got him!" The green one said.

"No I got him!!" The black one said.

"I'm smarter! I get first shot!!"

"Well I'm cooler! I get first shot!! You're just a low-level geek!"

"Oh! You're gonna pay for that!! *punched black ranger*"

"OW!!!! Ooooh.....you're gonna regret doing that!!"

Instead of The green ranger and the black ranger attacking blablob, they were mad at each other much they started
fighting each other! "OK....This is weird" Blablob said as he slowly walked away from them.

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"You guys look weak! I'll kill you both with one shot of my gun!!" MIC said.

As MIC pulled out his gun, the pink ranger swung at it with her axe, cutting it in half.

"That's what you get for insulting me, jerk!!"

"Uh-oh.......uh.........hey, what's this? A mirror? Hmm.....Hey Pink!!"

"Hmm? What?"

"I found a mirror!! You want it?"

"Ooh!! Gimme!! Ooh....who's that in the mirror? I am beautiful aren't I?"

"Pink? C'mon! We have to fight this guy!" Yellow said.

"Yeah yeah just a minute!!" The pink one said, gazing in the mirror.

"Hey yellow!" MIC said.

"What?" Yellow replied.

"You're......FAT!!!!!"

"WHAT? No I'm not!! *sniff* I'm....I'm not!! WAAAAAAAAAHHHHHH!! MOMMY!!!!"

"Well...that was harsh but it worked." MIC said.

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"You better tell your family to get ready for your funeral, 'cause I am gonna kill you you son of a------"

KABOOOOOOOMMMMMM!!!!!

"What? What the....." Avo said in shock. "What happened?"

"Woah!" MIC said. "What the heck happened?"

"I'm wondering the same thing......" blablob said.

"Hello boys!" Niklaw said. "If you're wondering what happened.......I blew him up!!"

"NIKLAW?" Avo said.

"In the flesh!!" Niklaw said.

"What are you doing here?" blablob asked.

"Well...I'd tell ya, but I'm too lazy to talk about it, so let the narrator talk about it!!!" Niklaw said.

What? I'm not talking about how you got here!! I'm not your slave!

"Hey!! I'm one of the most important people on this site!! So start talking!!" Niklaw said.

SHUT UP!!!!! I'm on my break so I don't do anything!! You talk about it!!

".........Fine!!" Niklaw said. "I heard how you guys were gonna save the world or something and I thought I'd tag along!
Just in time, too! If I didn't come, the red dude would've killed ya, Avo!!"

".......I could've taken him....." Avo said in embarrassment.

"But.....how did you blow up that Axem ranger?" MIC asked.

"Well I used my Super Secret Moderator Gun, of course!!" Niklaw said.

"Cool!! Can I have one?" blablob asked.

".....What do you think?" Niklaw said.

".......No." Blablob said.

Everyone excluding blablob laughed for a while, then Avolerators said:

"Well, next stop is that building!! But before we go.......how did you guys beat the other Axem rangers?"

"Well." MIC said. "I gave the pink one a mirror and now she can't stop looking at herself, and I called the yellow one fat and
now he ran away crying shouting MOMMY!!!!"

"And the green one and the black one are fighting to the death back there and I think they killed each other." blablob said. "They're
not as strong as we thought...."

"OK then......well, without further ado, let's go to the Motherbrain!!" Avo said.

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[MICrophone]

Nice! Keep it up!

[Avo]

Chapter 14

Avolerators, blablob, MIC and Niklaw arrived at the building of the Motherbrain, they were
surprised to see that it was deserted, they entered the elevator, and Avo said:

"You think Azn and Buffooner are there?"

"Well.....unless they had to fight some weirdos like we did, I'm sure they're down there."
blablob said.

When they arrived at the basement, they were amazed just like zn and Buffooner were.

"Well, here they are..." Azn said.

"And MIC and Niklaw are here, too. Strange......" Buffooner said.

"Azn!! Buffooner!!" Avolerators said. "How are you?"

"We....well........" Buffooner said.

"Ah! Whatever! It's just good to see ya!!" Avo said.

"This place is amazing." blablob said in amazement. "It's......beautiful......the Motherbrain
looks just like the one in Metroid!! I love that game, hey Avo!! Have you heard about Metroid:
Other M?"

"Yeah!! I'm excited about that!!!" Avo responded.

"Avo....blablob...." Azn said. "We're.....very sorry we have to this.......

Aznchau4ever and Buffooner pulled out the guns they found at the Headquarters of the Interarmy
and pointed them at Avolerators and blablob.

"What the---- What are you doing?" Avo said.

"I'm sorry, guys. We were ordered by someone named Kingrus to kill you two....." Buffooner said.

Aznchau4ever and Buffooner hesitated a little and then MIC said:

"Well? What are you waiting for?"

"What?" Niklaw said.

"You two were ordered to kill them!! Now do as I say!!" MIC said.

"MIC.......what are you talking about?" Buffooner asked.

"Ah what the hell. I might as well tell you." MIC said as he stepped up to the Motherbrain. He pulled out
a cape, flipped it around him, and then he said:

"I am Kingrus!!"

Kingrus wore the cape he used to transform, he wore a crown on his head and he kinda looked like Superman...

"What? It can't be!! MIC....." Avo said.

"Don't call me MIC!! I am Kingrus!! Ruler of all viruses!!" Kingrus said.

"No way!! If you plan on hurting these people, then I'll kill you!!" Niklaw said.

"SHUT UP!!" Kingrus said as he shot a beam at Niklaw, killing him.

"NOOOO!!!' blablob said as he rushed to the dead Niklaw. "Y-y-you killed him..."

"HAHAHAHAHAHA!!!!! That's what he deserves for defying me!!!!" Kingrus said.

"You....you're a monster!!" Avo said. "Why are you doing this?"

"Because!! You stupid humans are misusing this planet!! I will destroy all of you! And make an empire built
especially for me and my virus minions!! And azn and Buffooner will be my new slaves!!" Kingrus said.

"You...you can't do this!!" Avo said.

"Too bad!! Now!! ATTACK, MY VIRUSES!!!" Kingrus said.

Millions and millions of viruses pop out of no where and began approaching the Motherbrain slowy, Kingrus was
laughing maniacally and said:

"Now azn and Buffooner!! Kill those pests and join me on ruling the world!!! MWAHAHAHAHA!!!!"

"...........No." Azn said as he dropped his gun.

"Azn! What are you doing?" Buffooner said.

"What? You dare refuse to follow my orders? I said kill them!!" Kingrus said.

"NO! I won't follow your evil orders!! I won't let you take over this planet and use it for your own plans!" Azn said
as he punched Kingrus.

"WHY YOU LITTLE-----" Kingrus said.

"Avolerators!! Blablob!! Buffooner!! Get out of here!! Quickly!" Azn said as he charged up an attack.

"What? What are you gonna do?" Avo asked.

"Just go!!" Azn said.

Avolerators, blablob and Buffooner all left the building as fast as they can. They forgot to take Niklaw's body with
them, though. As they were riding up the elevator, they all saw aznchau4ever, powering up an attack, which looked
to Force of the Heavens.

"What? He's crazy!! That'll never work!" blablob said.

"We're on the first floor!! C'mon hurry!!" Buffooner said.

As the 3 were running out of the building and into the desert, they aznchau4ever scream:

"FORCE OF THE HEAVENS!!!!!!!!"

BOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOMM!!!!!!!!!

The entire building blew up and everything went silent, all the viruses were killed, along with Kingrus. They did not
what happened to azn. After the explosion, Avo, blablob and Buffooner quickly ran over to the site of destruction.

"Is he OK?" Buffooner asked as he was running over to the building.

"I don't know....I hope so." blablob said as they arrived to the destroyed building.

"Uh guys..." Avo said. "I think I found him."

Azn was just lying there with his eyes closed and blood all over his body. Right next to him was Kingrus, and all the dead viruses
were scattered around the place, fortunately, the Motherbrain was intact and was working perfectly.

"Oh no......Azn." blablob said.

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[MICrophone]

OK…so I'm the villain, as I suspected. Yay! This is good, but I feel like it's a little rushed. I think the primary problem with this is that there is no description, only dialogue. Breaking the dialogue up with description makes it feel more in time, and thus less rushed. But other than that, good!