The Legend of Avo

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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby GalaxyMario » December 23rd, 2009, 8:06 pm

It seems like some characters don't get a lot of action. *coughcoughmecoughcough*
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Blablob » December 24th, 2009, 5:06 am

Hm..am I actually going to get in a fight soon? I like the idea that you keep me as a nice guy, but I'd like some action! Other than that, pretty good.
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Avo » December 24th, 2009, 10:42 am

Epilogue

Avolerators, blablob and Buffooner found the dead body of azn and Niklaw after
that devastating attack in the building, they quickly rushed them over to the forums,
after they arrived there, everyone was there, they knew what happened to azn and
Niklaw, they proud of our heroes, but upset of those deaths.

A few hours went by after Runouw told everybody that there was going to be a funeral
for the deaths of alucardx60, Superyoshi, Niklaw and aznchau4ever, everybody in the
entire forum, even their families, went to that funeral.

It started out with the coffins carrying the dead bodies with 4 men carrying each, after
they were all laid under their graves, Runouw went up to a pedestal, he opened up a sheet
of paper, he read from it and said:

"May I have your attention, please. I would like to say thanks to all of people who have died
in this terrible week. Alucardx60, Superyoshi, Niklaw and aznchau4ever were a great part of
our forums and without them, this forum wouldn't have been successful, it would've been taken
over by hackers and spammers that even I couldn't deal with, and we thank all of them. And
now Avolerators will say something."

"Thank you, Runouw." Avolerators said. "Now, these 4 people that died, like Runouw said, the
forums wouldn't been successful. These 4.....everyone looked up to them. Now that day yesterday,
if Niklaw and aznchau4ever weren't there....I'm afraid me and blablob and Buffooner wouldn't be
here as well. If it wasn't for them.....no one would be here, the world would've been destroyed by
the hands Kingrus, who threatened to destroy the Motherbrain. Everyone of these people, we will
never have anyone like them again.....thank you."

Everyone started to clap and then some people brought out the weapons that the 4 heroes, Avolerators,
blablob, Buffooner and aznchau4ever used on their journey. They buried them all in azn's coffin. Everyone
said a prayer for the 4 who died and then proceeded to putting roses on everyone's coffin.

After the funeral was over, everyone left except for Avolerators, he found a sword that the people forgot
to bury in azn's coffin, Avolerators knelt down, placed the sword on top of azn's grave and said:

"Thank you, azn. You did well...."

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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby nin10mode » December 24th, 2009, 11:47 am

WHAT!? Its over!? :cry:
14 chapters? It doesn't seem like alot...
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Blablob » December 24th, 2009, 11:54 am

It feels like the ending was rushed...
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby GalaxyMario » December 24th, 2009, 11:57 am

Yeah, it does seem short. But, I am getting excited for the Runouw Chronicles.
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby MICrophone » December 24th, 2009, 12:32 pm

Good…but I did feel like the ending was a little anticlimactic. You got us all worked up in the earlier chapters and then the final battle took like a second! Wasn't as epic as I had expected and hoped. But in the end, pretty good! Nice work. :)
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby Chaukai » December 25th, 2009, 7:04 pm

*Sniff Sniff* Aww I died. :( Wait, if I'm dead, how did I read the story? :O Ahh!!!!

Anyways, I disagree, the ending was good! How you got to the ending, ehh yeah that was very rushed. Bit anticlimactic but I do like the epilogue. x.x Well good story Avo, :D
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Re: The Legend of Avo

Postby MICrophone » December 26th, 2009, 2:36 pm

I should rephrase. The ending was fine, with azn sacrificing himself and all. It was the build-up that I didn't like. It just wasn't…epic, I guess. Maybe I was looking for more of a battle or something, I don't know, but it just felt like it was missing something. And to be fair, to end with Force of the Heavens isn't exactly original… :?:
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