The Legendary Twelve Reunited *BRANDO'S TAKING OVER*

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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby MICrophone » November 30th, 2009, 5:12 pm

Well guys, I wrote Chapter 1. However, since I didn't have Zunar's powers yet and planned to introduce all of the new characters in Chapter 1, I didn't post it and instead copied it to put in a PM to myself until I was able to edit in Zunar's information. Sadly, in a state of complete stupidity, I then was distracted by somebody asking me how to make invisible blocks in the chat, so I immediately went and copied the link of the topic created by level4 on how to do this and pasted it in the chat. As a result, I lost all of Chapter 1. So, I now have to rewrite it but will probably not post it until tomorrow.

I also think I will change the contents of Chapter 1 due to a decision to have something more exciting happen than what was in the original Chapter 1. So, yeah…hang tight, guys. :x (I'm so mad at myself…)

EDIT: I have posted the short introduction section.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby zebtrestalala » November 30th, 2009, 9:07 pm

It happens. Hey, you already wrote part 1 once, so it should be easier now that you know what you're doing, right?
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby MICrophone » December 1st, 2009, 5:19 pm

All right, I have finished Chapters 1 & 2, with the exception of a short bit involving Zunar in the first chapter. I need him to PM me his powers though…so I'm not posting yet. If I don't here from him by Thursday, I'm just going to make something up for him…

EDIT: I changed my mind. I'm really impatient as a person, so that has compelled me to post the first two chapters today. Zunar…if you PM me soon I will edit in the powers you want, but for now I'm just leaving you out.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby zebtrestalala » December 2nd, 2009, 5:28 pm

It's just as awesome as I expected it to be! I like how you described my power, of course, but I also like the barfight and the strange new villains (i assume) who mysteriously counteract the Legendary Twelve. Also, who doesn't like Hold 'Em?

I can't wait for more!
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby Avo » December 3rd, 2009, 6:57 am

It's great so far!!

I can't wait for more!

And......I'm not that good at Hold 'em...
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby MICrophone » December 5th, 2009, 1:15 pm

zebtrestalala wrote:Also, who doesn't like Hold 'Em?


Brando didn't know what it was…that's why I added the link. But can you believe that? It's like the single most famous card game in the world…

Anyway…CHAPTER 3 POSTED PEOPLE!!!

Plus, I edited in Zunar's stuff into Chapter 1 since he finally PM'd me.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby zebtrestalala » December 5th, 2009, 1:28 pm

Noice! I like it, good to see that the mess didn't magically clean up and get forgotten about, it makes it real. Also, who is this Homeless Man? ???
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 5th, 2009, 4:27 pm

Good 3rd chapter, let's just hope Niklaw doesn't read it...
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby MICrophone » December 5th, 2009, 4:30 pm

Nah…Niklaw won't mind…though he might decide that I should mysteriously vanish from the forums without warning. ;)

Yeah, he's supposed to be frustrated in the story, that's all. It's not supposed to be a reflection of his character.

CHAPTER 4 RELEASED!!!
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *Chapter 4 Posted*

Postby zebtrestalala » December 5th, 2009, 8:55 pm

Oh crap! And MM was just trying to help out his fellow forumite, this is what he gets?
And I like that he had to use a tranquilizer on Blablob.
Anyways, those guys are a heck of a challenge for the heroes! I can't wait to see the Legendary Twelve all rally against them!
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