The Legendary Twelve Reunited *BRANDO'S TAKING OVER*

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On a scale of 1-10, 10 being the greatest, where do you rank this story?

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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited

Postby Buff_ » December 6th, 2009, 8:14 am

I really like what you are doing with this. There's not much sense of rush trying to get a whole story into a post.

And the story so far is good. Great work.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *Chapter 4 Posted*

Postby MICrophone » December 6th, 2009, 8:20 am

Thanks guys!

Yeah…I'm intentionally taking this slowly in order to prevent things from being rushed.

I also think that this will be slightly longer than the Return of the TLT when all is said and done.

EDIT: Edited 24murph into the story because he is now a veteran…he now appears in Chapter 1 and is mentioned in Chapter 3.

DOUBLE EDIT: CHAPTER 5 RELEASED!!!
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 5 RELEASED!!!*

Postby zebtrestalala » December 6th, 2009, 12:17 pm

Heh. I Like the meaningful line delivered by yours truly in the latest chapter.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 6 COMPLETE*

Postby MICrophone » December 6th, 2009, 5:02 pm

CHAPTER 6 IS RELEASED!!! THE BIG PICTURE IS STARTING TO COME INTO FOCUS…
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 6 COMPLETE*

Postby zebtrestalala » December 6th, 2009, 5:29 pm

Oh man! Prophetic visions, crazy roadtrips, and "obnoxious" singing (I love journey too! :evil: )? This adventure keeps getting more and more interesting...Anyways, that little footnote has just grabbed my curiosity and throttled it like a lame puppy!

Err, scratch that. It just has my curiosity.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 6 COMPLETE*

Postby Chaukai » December 6th, 2009, 5:34 pm

Chapter 6 was interesting. I liked how the people talked, and I like the story. It's coming together. Although I DID see this coming, I don't know, it was kind of predictable.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 6 COMPLETE*

Postby MICrophone » December 6th, 2009, 5:41 pm

Don't worry…the twists are just beginning… :twisted:
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 6 COMPLETE*

Postby Buff_ » December 7th, 2009, 10:19 am

So far so good, but I don't really like the really modern take on it. The monorails, fine, but the cars and things I don't really like. I prefered the medieval/modern take on it without all the new shiny technology, but that's only my opinion. I dunno really, the car seemed too surreal for the story at the moment, but you could have it later.....(24murph crashes in with a sports car, carrying off people)

And can I have a suggestion, maybe you could make the New Legends a completely seperate group from the TLT.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 6 COMPLETE*

Postby 24murph » December 8th, 2009, 2:51 pm

Honestly, this whole series, including the first The Legendary Twelve, is becoming an epic story with everything that anyone can get interested into reading it.
( I will not be suprised if this get sticked someday, ^_^ )
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 6 COMPLETE*

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 8th, 2009, 2:53 pm

[quote=24murph]( I will not be suprised if this get sticked someday, ^_^ )[/quote]

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