The Legendary Twelve Reunited *BRANDO'S TAKING OVER*

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On a scale of 1-10, 10 being the greatest, where do you rank this story?

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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby MICrophone » December 9th, 2009, 4:08 pm

Buffooner wrote:Chapter 7 seems a bit iffy, as though not propally put together. IMHO I think this is the worst chapter, no offense intended, but I hope you pick it up again. I think you are just playing with too many characters, split them up and add more variety.


WELL NOBODY CARES ABOUT YHO!!

Jk. :) Yes…sadly it is hard to keep track of so many characters. Which is why :o I'm planning on breaking it up soon…

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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby HyperSonic » December 10th, 2009, 4:43 am

Wow,awsome story MIC but i want to be in action too 10/10
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 10th, 2009, 12:59 pm

Hyper Sonic wrote:Wow,awsome story MIC but i want to be in action too 10/10


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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby MICrophone » December 10th, 2009, 1:53 pm

Yeah…I'm too far in to add any new characters, but Hyper Sonic is actually already in the story. He is one of the original Legendary Twelve. I just didn't give him a lot of action in the last story and not yet in this story…but don't worry, Hyper Sonic. I've got it planned…
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby Avo » December 22nd, 2009, 2:50 pm

Can't wait for Chapter 8!!

This is an awesome story!!

I'm glad to be in it!!
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby MICrophone » December 22nd, 2009, 2:55 pm

Thanks Avo!

Anyway, I am taking a short break from this to work on other things, but will pick it up again shortly after I return from my vacation (Dec. 24-31). I may make some revisions to Chapter 7 too…general story will be the same but I think I'm gonna clean it up a bit…
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby Demonik » December 23rd, 2009, 8:27 am

I'm loving it! :D One thing though... Am I really that mean??

I go out of my bloody way to cut back on my anger, and you still freaking complain? WHAT DOES A MAN HAVE TO DO FOR SOME RESPECT AROUND HERE!?!? I IS JOKEZ
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby Ayrayen » December 28th, 2009, 4:50 am

Niklaw wrote:I'm loving it! :D One thing though... Am I really that mean??

I go out of my bloody way to cut back on my anger, and you still freaking complain? WHAT DOES A MAN HAVE TO DO FOR SOME RESPECT AROUND HERE!?!? I IS JOKEZ


Lol niklaw your one of the nicest guy i know on this forum. Dont be afraid ;)
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby Demonik » December 29th, 2009, 4:58 am

Hahaha! Thank you, Ayrayen. :D

And just to let you know; I'm afraid of nothing. With the exception of numerous things.
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Re: The Legendary Twelve Reunited *CHAPTER 7 RELEASED*

Postby Ayrayen » December 29th, 2009, 5:08 am

Niklaw wrote:Hahaha! Thank you, Ayrayen. :D

And just to let you know; I'm afraid of nothing. With the exception of numerous things.


well i know how to scare ya :twisted:
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