Runouw's World

[*Emelia K. Fletcher]

This is going to be the start of my new project, Runouw's World. Each chapter will be a different day. Please give me advice on my chapters.

Introduction
It was a nice, average day in Runouw City. The News Studio was bustling, Foru was pasting up a new rule on the Rule Board, the Announcements Podium was deserted, people were selling their books, and everything was moving along.
Yes, moving along.
The mods were relaxing in Niklaw's Tavern, 'where the pros kick back and relax'. Blab had a giant smoothie, Suyo was swearing at Mega Man, Moy was snoring, and the whole city was up and about.
It was a nice day, and nobody was wasting it.

Chapter 1
'Grumble... and I had to pick the short straw...' Foru was grumbling as he went to the shops for more glue to stick the rule up. It was tiring. And then he'd have to clean off all the graffiti that cheeky users had sprayed on. And all while the others were chatting and having a good time in the Tavern.
'They owe me at least twenty dollars now.' He went back to the Board to find that somebody had wrecked his ladder.
'That's it. Screw this. I'm gonna tell Moy to do it.' He stomped off to the tavern, and three minutes later, a hungover Moy was thrown onto the street.
'And I'm not helping! I've had enough!' With that, Foru stomped into the Tavern.

Moy sighed as he staggered over to the Rules Board. He'd had a bad night, and now he was being chucked out by another mod.
'Besides, it won't take long to paste up the new rule.'
*snap* *crack* *SMASH*
'It won't, but replacing the actual board WILL.' With that, he walked off, and out of the city to get some more wood.

'Hello.' 'Hi.' 'How ya doin'?' 'Not bad.' 'How's Garcia?' 'He said me and Camilla fit.' 'Nice.' 'See ya.' 'Bye.'
Myst walked to the Arcade, while Usu sat down on a bench and rested, thinking about Andrea.

MK was sleeping in. Perfectly normal.
SMX was slamming anybody who dared to face him in Street Fighter. Nothing wrong.
Oranj was in the Grocery. As usual.
Doram was on vacation. Like always.
Zunar was writing stories. Just like ever.
Jelloman was approving stories. All well and good.

Moy had just come back to Runouw City with his wood, when he discovered Foru who had made a brand new board, put it up, and pasted all the rules. 'If you want something done, do it yourself.' He chanted. 'Oh, hi Moy, I found some junk and made it into this. Like it?
Moy just fainted, and the wood he'd bought fell out of his grip and landed on him. 'I hate my life', he thought.

Suyo was playing in the new Virtual Reality game. He'd been on Fighting mode, and anybody who wandered into the VR Machine left with a bloody nose.
Blablob was looking out of his Blaboculars, spying on the whole town.
Penguini was repeatedly trying to sneak through the entrance to the City, and was repeatedly thrown out.

That was an average day.

[MessengerOfDreams]

oh yay I'm the comic relief who's an idiot and always fails... again. The story?... it's average, or just below. 4/10