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Re: Kympo
by MICrophone » January 1st, 2010, 2:54 pm
I like this. It's the same old spambot plot but told in a different way. Also written well. I like it!
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Re: Kympo
by Blablob » January 1st, 2010, 5:44 pm
MessengerOfYahweh wrote:Okay, I really dislike my charachter.
Hm....I'm glad you told me that. I'll make something out of you in the future.
Edit: On second thought, I might just make you a villain.
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Re: Kympo
by Chaukai » January 1st, 2010, 6:12 pm
Good story. I like how you end your chapters, it's very nicely done. Keep on going brah, you gotta keep us entertained the whooole way.
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Re: Kympo
by Blablob » January 8th, 2010, 5:01 am
The next chapter will probably be released on the weekend; I've started on it, I'm about half-way done. But I'm gonna tell you guys a few spoilers, nothing to ruin your excitement or anything, but just enough to allow you to keep guessing. This is what you can expect in the future of this story:
--What a Kympo actually is (This will actually be revealed in the next chapter)
--A secret about Runouw
--A mysterious villain
--A bonding of 2 lifelong foes (I'm sure you already know who)
--A betrayel of one of the members (NOT Runouw)
--A new virus, which almost kills off our three heroes
--At the arrival of one of three locations, our heroes sing a song to distract bots from destroying them.
All this and more, you can expect. Not much of a spoiler, but try to guess until these chapters come out. Again, chapter 4 on the weekends. See you then.
--What a Kympo actually is (This will actually be revealed in the next chapter)
--A secret about Runouw
--A mysterious villain
--A bonding of 2 lifelong foes (I'm sure you already know who)
--A betrayel of one of the members (NOT Runouw)
--A new virus, which almost kills off our three heroes
--At the arrival of one of three locations, our heroes sing a song to distract bots from destroying them.
All this and more, you can expect. Not much of a spoiler, but try to guess until these chapters come out. Again, chapter 4 on the weekends. See you then.
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Re: Kympo
by Blablob » January 9th, 2010, 6:14 am
Chapter 4: Intro To Kympo
“Try to realize what we’re up against,” Niklaw said to Blablob and Superyoshi as they walked around the front of the cold, small building, leaving sanctuary; leaving their home. “It’s three of us versus an army. An army of stupid, rotten, retarded, mentally challenged, clueless but strong, metal, gay__”
“Okay, we get it.” Said Blablob. Niklaw mumbled silently to himself as he gave Blablob an awkward look.
They approached the car: it was nothing they’d ever seen before. It didn’t look customized; no paint or custom wheels. But it looked fast. Really fast. It was blood-red, and it had that new-car smell to it.
“Ever seen one of these before, mate?” Niklaw asked Blablob and Suyo.
Blablob shook his head. “You have?”
“Nope. Let’s try it out.”
As Niklaw proceeded to open the door, the three of them heard a loud scream.
“What was that?” Said Blablob.
“A scream.” Said Niklaw. Blablob turned and gave Niklaw a look that said “Duh!” Niklaw smirked.
“We don’t have time to deal with it. Let Runouw handle it. TACO!” Niklaw yelled.
Suddenly the car roared to life as if it had a mind of its own. The car seemed to be….alive. The windows rolled down, and the engine was on. The car had started itself.
“Welcome to Kympo,” A voice in the car said, “What is your destination?”
Blablob blurted “Kympo? What’s Kympo?”
“I’m guessing it’s the name of the car. Kind of a weird greeting, ‘Welcome to Kympo’, what does he mean by that?”
“No time.” Blablob said. The three huddled into the car for four, Suyo and Niklaw sat up, Niklaw as the driver, and Blablob sat in the back.
The car repeated itself. “What is your destination?” Niklaw gripped the wheel. He seemed unconfident in himself, as to which of the three locations they should go first.
“The Bermuda Triangle.” Niklaw said.
“Thank you” Said the car. Then the engine roared even louder. The sound it made was like the sound of a jet plane right above you, or two shotguns, each as close to your ears as possible, going off at the same time. It was scary loud.
Then something happened they weren’t even expecting. On the sides of the car, they could see bright red lights coming from the car. The car began to lift high into the sky until, not even a minute later, they were almost plane-height. They realized the bright red lights were flames, coming from the underside.
“Wow! Where can I get one of these cars?” Said Niklaw.
Suyo held onto his seat, he knew what was about to happen. Niklaw looked at him, nodded, and turned to me. “Hold on.” He said.
“Location ‘The Bermuda Triangle’ set for destination.” The car said. “We take off in 3...2...1__”
“HOLD ON!!!” Yelled Niklaw. They all held on for life.
Then the car blazed in hot red flames. Everywhere seemed to be nowhere. The inside of the car was hot. The world seemed to be disappearing. The three heroes were screaming, at the top of their lungs. Not until a second later did they realize, they were going forward.
The car began to slow down a little, and our heroes settled down. “Wow. I REALLY want one of these.” Niklaw said.
“Slowing down, for entertainment of the view” The car said. They looked. Thousands of feet below were water. Miles and miles of water. “We’re here.” The car said. It began to lower. A destination of about 600 miles, reached in less than 5 seconds.
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Meanwhile, at Runouw.com…
“GET HIM, RUNOUW!” Yelled GalaxyMario.
“YEAH, RUNOUW! KICK HIS BUTT!” Yelled fourinone. Those 2 and the rest of Runouw.com formed a circle around the fight that had taken place. Runouw vs. McLeod.
The 2 fighters said nothing. They walked around each other, and held their fists up. They were fighting for unobvious reasons. But nobody cared why. They watched as their leader defended them.
Runouw got a punch in, but Cleod blocked it. “Why are you doing this? I’ve done nothing to you!” Said Runouw.
“You’ve done everything. Taken everyone. Your fancy website. Your fancy games."
"You tried to get Avolerators to join by kidnapping him!”
“I did no such thing!” Cleod said as he pointed towards Avolerators, who had joined the circle. He only looked frightened.
“And?” Runouw asked. “You obviously just released him, to make it seem like you have a heart.”
The two kept walking around in circles, eye to eye, and neither had even broken a sweat.
Cleod went for a punch, but Runouw jumped back, and returned with a kick to a jaw, making Cleod bite his tongue. Not hard enough to make blood come, but enough to get Cleod angry. The two ran for each other, and Runouw tried to punch, but Cleod grabbed Runouw’s fist, twisted it, and pulled as hard as he could, nearly breaking Runouw’s elbow. Cleod held onto the fist. He bent his arm more and more, until Runouw knelt onto the ground in pain.
“It’s over!” Said Cleod.
But Runouw kicked from behind Cleod in the shin, and Runouw got his hand free. They began fighting some more. But then Brandobrawl stepped in.
“Wait a minute. What are you guys even fighting about?” Said Brando. Runouw and Greg stared at each other. “You both have fascinating websites, and games. Is it really worth this much trouble just to prove something to each other? And even still, what are you trying to prove?”
Cleod looked into the sky. “He’s right. Come, friends. Let us take a walk into the night, away from this place. I am sorry I attacked. Until things settle down, you are all welcome as guests over at my forums.”
They all stared at Cleod, some at Runouw, and they broke the circle. Cleod and Runouw stood side by side, and Runouw said “Okay, guys. Let’s go.” They all started to walk down the road, in a line. A few talks here and there, but for the most part, everyone was quiet. The middle of the night; everyone was a bit tired.
As they all walked down the street, someone grabbed Brando from behind, and dragged him to the back of the line. “Hey, what are you__”
“Shh, shh, shh” Said Mic. They both stood at the back of the line.
“Dude, what gives?” Said Brando.
“I don’t like this” Replied Mic.
“What are you talking about? Everything’s fine. They made up, and we’re all going to be fine.”
“Something’s going one around here, Brando. You of all people should see that.”
“What do you mean?”
“I don’t know, but I think Runouw and Cleod are messing with us.”
“What makes you say__”
“Look at how fast the two made up. Do you really think it could’ve been that sudden?”
“Well, the two obviously forgave each other for fighting. Maybe__”
“That’s another thing. Why fight? Brando...think about it. Does Runouw fight?”
Brando thought hard. “Oh my gosh, you’re right.”
Mic nodded. “Remember when Runouw said he doesn’t fight?”
“Then we only have one conclusion. This isn’t the real Runouw.”
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Back at the Bermuda Triangle…
“Wow. Great plan.” Mumbled Blablob. The three had been stuck out in the middle of the ocean for the past hour.
“Well, Runouw said one of the destinations is the Bermuda Triangle. Well, here we are.”
“Hallelujah! Did he also mention this car breaks down once it REACHES the destination?”
“I’m sure it’s not broken. It’s just….waiting.”
“TACO!” The car didn’t move at all. “See? It is broken.”
“Maybe it just can’t go in the water. Maybe it has something to do with the Bermuda Triangle. You’ve heard those crazy stories.”
“Well, even still.”
“So what do we do now?”
“I don’t know. Swim?”
“How are we gonna swim? We don’t even know where this damn base is! Maybe it’s on an island. Maybe underwater. The Bermuda Triangle is really huge. How would we ever find something that__” Niklaw stopped in midsentence. He looked at Suyo, whom was doing something nobody had ever seen him do before. It was a rare occasion, even in the saddest of times. Suyo had his eyes closed, and lied down, emotionless, but even Blablob could tell.
Suyo was crying in silence.
“Try to realize what we’re up against,” Niklaw said to Blablob and Superyoshi as they walked around the front of the cold, small building, leaving sanctuary; leaving their home. “It’s three of us versus an army. An army of stupid, rotten, retarded, mentally challenged, clueless but strong, metal, gay__”
“Okay, we get it.” Said Blablob. Niklaw mumbled silently to himself as he gave Blablob an awkward look.
They approached the car: it was nothing they’d ever seen before. It didn’t look customized; no paint or custom wheels. But it looked fast. Really fast. It was blood-red, and it had that new-car smell to it.
“Ever seen one of these before, mate?” Niklaw asked Blablob and Suyo.
Blablob shook his head. “You have?”
“Nope. Let’s try it out.”
As Niklaw proceeded to open the door, the three of them heard a loud scream.
“What was that?” Said Blablob.
“A scream.” Said Niklaw. Blablob turned and gave Niklaw a look that said “Duh!” Niklaw smirked.
“We don’t have time to deal with it. Let Runouw handle it. TACO!” Niklaw yelled.
Suddenly the car roared to life as if it had a mind of its own. The car seemed to be….alive. The windows rolled down, and the engine was on. The car had started itself.
“Welcome to Kympo,” A voice in the car said, “What is your destination?”
Blablob blurted “Kympo? What’s Kympo?”
“I’m guessing it’s the name of the car. Kind of a weird greeting, ‘Welcome to Kympo’, what does he mean by that?”
“No time.” Blablob said. The three huddled into the car for four, Suyo and Niklaw sat up, Niklaw as the driver, and Blablob sat in the back.
The car repeated itself. “What is your destination?” Niklaw gripped the wheel. He seemed unconfident in himself, as to which of the three locations they should go first.
“The Bermuda Triangle.” Niklaw said.
“Thank you” Said the car. Then the engine roared even louder. The sound it made was like the sound of a jet plane right above you, or two shotguns, each as close to your ears as possible, going off at the same time. It was scary loud.
Then something happened they weren’t even expecting. On the sides of the car, they could see bright red lights coming from the car. The car began to lift high into the sky until, not even a minute later, they were almost plane-height. They realized the bright red lights were flames, coming from the underside.
“Wow! Where can I get one of these cars?” Said Niklaw.
Suyo held onto his seat, he knew what was about to happen. Niklaw looked at him, nodded, and turned to me. “Hold on.” He said.
“Location ‘The Bermuda Triangle’ set for destination.” The car said. “We take off in 3...2...1__”
“HOLD ON!!!” Yelled Niklaw. They all held on for life.
Then the car blazed in hot red flames. Everywhere seemed to be nowhere. The inside of the car was hot. The world seemed to be disappearing. The three heroes were screaming, at the top of their lungs. Not until a second later did they realize, they were going forward.
The car began to slow down a little, and our heroes settled down. “Wow. I REALLY want one of these.” Niklaw said.
“Slowing down, for entertainment of the view” The car said. They looked. Thousands of feet below were water. Miles and miles of water. “We’re here.” The car said. It began to lower. A destination of about 600 miles, reached in less than 5 seconds.
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Meanwhile, at Runouw.com…
“GET HIM, RUNOUW!” Yelled GalaxyMario.
“YEAH, RUNOUW! KICK HIS BUTT!” Yelled fourinone. Those 2 and the rest of Runouw.com formed a circle around the fight that had taken place. Runouw vs. McLeod.
The 2 fighters said nothing. They walked around each other, and held their fists up. They were fighting for unobvious reasons. But nobody cared why. They watched as their leader defended them.
Runouw got a punch in, but Cleod blocked it. “Why are you doing this? I’ve done nothing to you!” Said Runouw.
“You’ve done everything. Taken everyone. Your fancy website. Your fancy games."
"You tried to get Avolerators to join by kidnapping him!”
“I did no such thing!” Cleod said as he pointed towards Avolerators, who had joined the circle. He only looked frightened.
“And?” Runouw asked. “You obviously just released him, to make it seem like you have a heart.”
The two kept walking around in circles, eye to eye, and neither had even broken a sweat.
Cleod went for a punch, but Runouw jumped back, and returned with a kick to a jaw, making Cleod bite his tongue. Not hard enough to make blood come, but enough to get Cleod angry. The two ran for each other, and Runouw tried to punch, but Cleod grabbed Runouw’s fist, twisted it, and pulled as hard as he could, nearly breaking Runouw’s elbow. Cleod held onto the fist. He bent his arm more and more, until Runouw knelt onto the ground in pain.
“It’s over!” Said Cleod.
But Runouw kicked from behind Cleod in the shin, and Runouw got his hand free. They began fighting some more. But then Brandobrawl stepped in.
“Wait a minute. What are you guys even fighting about?” Said Brando. Runouw and Greg stared at each other. “You both have fascinating websites, and games. Is it really worth this much trouble just to prove something to each other? And even still, what are you trying to prove?”
Cleod looked into the sky. “He’s right. Come, friends. Let us take a walk into the night, away from this place. I am sorry I attacked. Until things settle down, you are all welcome as guests over at my forums.”
They all stared at Cleod, some at Runouw, and they broke the circle. Cleod and Runouw stood side by side, and Runouw said “Okay, guys. Let’s go.” They all started to walk down the road, in a line. A few talks here and there, but for the most part, everyone was quiet. The middle of the night; everyone was a bit tired.
As they all walked down the street, someone grabbed Brando from behind, and dragged him to the back of the line. “Hey, what are you__”
“Shh, shh, shh” Said Mic. They both stood at the back of the line.
“Dude, what gives?” Said Brando.
“I don’t like this” Replied Mic.
“What are you talking about? Everything’s fine. They made up, and we’re all going to be fine.”
“Something’s going one around here, Brando. You of all people should see that.”
“What do you mean?”
“I don’t know, but I think Runouw and Cleod are messing with us.”
“What makes you say__”
“Look at how fast the two made up. Do you really think it could’ve been that sudden?”
“Well, the two obviously forgave each other for fighting. Maybe__”
“That’s another thing. Why fight? Brando...think about it. Does Runouw fight?”
Brando thought hard. “Oh my gosh, you’re right.”
Mic nodded. “Remember when Runouw said he doesn’t fight?”
“Then we only have one conclusion. This isn’t the real Runouw.”
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Back at the Bermuda Triangle…
“Wow. Great plan.” Mumbled Blablob. The three had been stuck out in the middle of the ocean for the past hour.
“Well, Runouw said one of the destinations is the Bermuda Triangle. Well, here we are.”
“Hallelujah! Did he also mention this car breaks down once it REACHES the destination?”
“I’m sure it’s not broken. It’s just….waiting.”
“TACO!” The car didn’t move at all. “See? It is broken.”
“Maybe it just can’t go in the water. Maybe it has something to do with the Bermuda Triangle. You’ve heard those crazy stories.”
“Well, even still.”
“So what do we do now?”
“I don’t know. Swim?”
“How are we gonna swim? We don’t even know where this damn base is! Maybe it’s on an island. Maybe underwater. The Bermuda Triangle is really huge. How would we ever find something that__” Niklaw stopped in midsentence. He looked at Suyo, whom was doing something nobody had ever seen him do before. It was a rare occasion, even in the saddest of times. Suyo had his eyes closed, and lied down, emotionless, but even Blablob could tell.
Suyo was crying in silence.
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Re: Kympo
by megamario126 » January 9th, 2010, 1:43 pm
Wow! Cool, chapter. So, that's what 'Kympo' is. You guys are glad I didn't spol, because I was going to...
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me.
<--...wha??????
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me.
<--...wha??????-
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Re: Kympo
by MICrophone » January 9th, 2010, 2:15 pm
Huh. Interesting. Good. Original. Keep. It. Up.
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Re: Kympo
by MessengerOfDreams » January 10th, 2010, 11:34 am
I cannot wait to find out who betrays them *coughit'smehuhcough*
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