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Re: Kympo

Postby Demonik » January 16th, 2010, 2:02 am

:O! Don't tell me I betray everyone!! I would never forgive myself.

Wonderful work so far, blablob. I really like the way these four chapters were written. I love the humour too. This is one of the few stories here (of the ones I've read) that actually made me laugh. :) The seriousness really adds to the comedy aspect, seeing as truthfully, we all act so laid-back and humorous at this forum.

Sorry for not checking this out earlier. Keep up the great work, blab. :D
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Re: Kympo

Postby Blablob » January 16th, 2010, 4:48 am

Thanks Niklaw! And thanks everyone else for the positive comments. Chapter 5 out sometime on the weekend, hopefully. Where I live, we have a 4-day weekend, so it's very likely I'll have it out by then. What can you expect from chapter 4? Let's just say the three heroes come face to face with their first actual enemy. See ya then!
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Re: Kympo

Postby Blablob » January 17th, 2010, 5:55 am

Chapter 5: Where's Brando and MIC?

It was only a black figure that he could see. It was bright and sunny, very warm and nice out today; not a cloud in site. Behind him stood a tall, red building, which he couldn’t place his name on what it was called; not at the moment. All he focused on, was the figure; the figure that seemed to be running straight at him.

“What is it you want?” He asked. No reply. The black figure just kept running, allowing him to make out what the black figure actually was.

He wasn’t all black, but he was wearing a black robe, with a hood to hide his face. He took no attempt at running from the figure; he only stood to defend himself.

“Who are you?” He asked.

The figure ran up to him—a run about a mile wide and he wasn’t even out of breath—and said in a voice deeper and scarier than Runouw himself, “It’s time.”


Superyoshi woke up from his intense dream; a dream that had once became a reality.

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It was daylight outside in the car, Kympo, about 7:30 in the morning Superyoshi guessed. The three were still stranded out in the middle of the ocean. Superyoshi’s stomach roared; he was hungry.

“Damn it!” Yelled Suyo, “How could we forget to bring food?”

“So what was all that about?” Said someone. Superyoshi turned; it was Niklaw.

“Jeez, Niklaw, you eavesdropper!”

“Shh, keep it down,” Niklaw whispered, “Blablob’s still sleeping. And anyway, I wasn’t eavesdropping. I’m in the same car as you, plus I’ve been awake for about 2 hours, and you’ve been up for about 30 seconds.”

“Why were you up so early?”

“I don’t know, I guess I just couldn’t sleep.”

“Now, what did you mean ‘what was all that about’?”

“About last night. You’ve never cried before; not around us.”

“Look. It really is nothing.”

“Then what is it?”

“I’m just a little home-sick from Runouw.com, okay?”

“You’re what?”

“I miss my friends. I miss the tavern. I even miss TBG.”

“Suyo, we’ve only been gone 1 day. Actually, we left last night so about half a day.”

“I know, but still.”

“And you’re the one always going strong at the forums. You’re the one who sticks up for yourself and for us, okay? You were the bravest guy I know at the forums. You defended Runouw.com even at the harshest of times; during the worst of spam attacks.”

“If you’re relating to that time we went together and attacked that underwater base, then you’re wrong.”

“I’m not. I’m talking in general. That’s who you are. You’re a brave little soldier, Christian.”

Suyo looked at him; nobody from the forums ever called him by his real name. “I know, Niklaw. The truth is, though, I do all that stuff because deep down I’m not that brave little soldier. I’ll get rid of a spammer here and there, but in the long run I don’t have courage to handle it on my own. I just can’t do it.”

Niklaw laughed silently.

“What?” Asked Suyo.

“Nothing, nothing.”

“What is it?”

“You just said ‘I just can’t do it’.”

“Oh grow up!”

“See? Right there, Suyo. You have it in you; you were born to put people in their place, to show them they’re wrong, just like you did to me.”

“I know, but…”

“Suyo, I’ve known you longer than anyone else in the forums. If I know anything right now, it’s that you’re not telling me everything.”

Superyoshi only responded by looking away slowly. “I don’t know what you’re talking about.”

“Neither do I.” Responded Niklaw.

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Back at Mcleodgaming.com...

“Rise and shine, fellas.” Yelled Runouw. “A brand new day, a new day to learn and such.”

Everyone sighed; the whole Runouw forums, who had to sleep in the basement of Mcleodgaming, while Runouw got a bed on the 7th floor that looked like it could only be found in a 5-star hotel.

“Why do you get a nice bed when all of us have to sleep on the floor in a cold basement?” Asked Avo.

“You ladies can’t handle it?”

“And why wake us up...” Avo stopped to look at the clock next to him, “At 7:45 in the morning, when we were up all last night? Can’t you let us sleep in?”

Everyone said “Yeah!” at the same time.

“Oh, so I guess you ladies can’t handle it.”

“What are you, our boot camp teacher?” asked TBG.

“I think I’m your guys’ teacher.”

“What’s your problem Runouw?”

Runouw was about to respond, when he noticed something. “Hey. Where’s MIC and Brandobrawl?”

Everyone looked around. Little did they know Brando and MIC had escaped last night.

“Dang it!” Yelled Runouw. “I’m sounding the alarm. We’ve got 2 runaways. You all know what happens if you run away.”

“Yeah,” said Avo, “You can’t come back. It doesn’t mean you have to go kill them.”

“Hey, you’re lucky I let YOU come back.”

The hunt was on. Runouw was going to go looking for MIC and Brandobrawl, who already had a mission; they had to go find the real Runouw.

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Back at the Bermuda Triangle…

“Hey. Look who’s finally waking up.” Said Niklaw, looking at Blablob as he rubbed his eyes from the sleepiness.

“Uh…morning guys.” Said Blablob.

“Man, Suyo. I know what you were talking about. I’m so hungry I could eat Blablob.”

Blablob looked at Niklaw, Niklaw just smiled as if to say “Just joking.”

Blablob turned to Suyo, who was just sitting there looking out into the ocean. “You know what I’ve noticed?” Said Blablob to Superyoshi. “You haven’t been talking that much lately. You didn’t talk at all last night; what’s up with you?”

“I talked with Niklaw this morning.” Said Suyo.

“What happened? Is something wrong? I can help.”

“Blablob, just leave it alone.”

“Okay.”

They all waited. “What do we do now?” Asked Niklaw.

Suddenly, there was a bubbling sound. Blablob was confused. “You guys hear that?”

They both nodded. The sound was getting louder. Blablob looked out into the ocean, only to be flabbergasted. “OH SHI__” He was cut off midsentence when a giant robotic-looking fish, about the size of an ordinary house, plowed right into them. They all flew out of Kympo, screaming, as the car blew apart. They all fell into the water, and huddled together.

“What is that?” Said Superyoshi.

As the parts of the car landed into the water behind it, the robot-shark swam right up to the three, face to face.

“It’s what we’ve been waiting for.” Said Niklaw.
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Re: Kympo

Postby MICrophone » January 17th, 2010, 7:19 am

Wow, this is really awesome! I like how you're developing all of the characters, Niklaw, Suyo, Runouw, and everyone. Keep it up! :P
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Re: Kympo

Postby Blablob » January 26th, 2010, 4:59 pm

Hey guys. I know I didn't update last weekend, but I had a lot going on; I had to finish up a project for school, not to mention my other story I'm working on, plus a few other things. I don't have an exact date for when the next chapter will be done, but I can say I'll try to get it in this weekend.
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Re: Kympo

Postby Blablob » February 12th, 2010, 4:41 pm

Well, guys. Here it is. Chapter 6 is out. I know, I know; it's not as long as long as my other chapters, but it's been a while since I released a chapter, so I needed to speed things up.

Chapter 6: A Lucky Find

“She’ll be comin’ around the mountain when she comes! She’ll be comin’ around the mountain when she comes! She’ll be comin’ around the mountain, she’ll be comin’ around the__”

“MIC!”

“Sorry.”

They were both cranky. Brandobrawl and MIC had both traveled over tall mountains and deserts of no water, no oases, and no hope. They had no clue where the real Runouw was. But they figured they could get some kind of clue if they went to the forums. One problem: Where the heck was that?

It had been nearly 8 hours since Brando and MIC had ditched. Without any sleep, food, or water, they were both tired. MIC slowed down once in a while, thinking he was unable to go on. But Brando had hope, and willed MIC to keep going. Brando was tired as well.

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Meanwhile, at Mcleodgaming.com…

“I’ll show you how to dig!” The fake Runouw hit Megamario with a shovel, and gave it back to him to continue digging. Runouw was making all the users dig a big hole, which they were planning to make a pool out of; Registered users of Mcleodgaming only, so no one of Runouw.com could use it when it was done.

Greg went up to Runouw. “So friend, what do you want me to do about those 2 runaway’s?”

Runouw tensed. “Your forums are located in the harshest of places, where if you don’t know how to take care of yourself, you’re out. I’m sure they’re dead, and after death, there’s nothing we can do.”

“So I should call of the search?”

“Yes.”

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Back at the Bermuda Triangle…

The three were panicking. How could they fight something 20X their size?

The shark made a dive under, because it was going to make an attempt at snatching them and dragging them under one at a time. They all knew it. “WHAT DO WE DO? WHAT DO WE DO?” Blablob tensed with fear.

“Calm down, Blablob,” Said Niklaw with calmness, “I’m a good swimmer. I’ll try to lure it away.” Niklaw swam the opposite direction of the shark; where it had plunged into the ocean, that is. Thank God there weren’t any strong currents or waves today.

“Niklaw! Swim faster!” Screeched Blablob.

“Thanks for the tip, mate!” Yelled back Niklaw, with a sarcastic tone.

Blablob himself was not a very good swimmer; he had to cling to Suyo while still paddling his feet. His shoes were weighing him down, so it was harder to swim than it usually was.

Blablob looked around. Where did the shark go? He looked into the big blue, seeing part of a reflection, but no shark. “Where did it go?”

By now, Niklaw was far enough where if the shark got him, the other two would be out of harm’s way. But…what if it does get Niklaw?

All three tensed for a second. There was a pause; not even the cricket of dramatic silence. They all waited. And then, it arrived.

The beast lunged out of the water—it must have gone at least 200 feet into the air—right in front of Niklaw. Niklaw himself was flabbergasted, and for the most part in absolute shock. He watched as the beast flew over him, and into the water again, creating a huge wave which demolished Niklaw.

And then, they were gone.

Niklaw was pushed under the ocean, but he hadn’t come up, and the shark simply vanished. They both had. All that was left were Blablob and Suyo.

“Where did they go?” Asked Blablob.

“Not sure.” Suyo and Blablob were both confused. Suddenly, Blablob reacted. “HOLY CRAP! SUYO, LOOK!”

Suyo looked into the direction in which Blablob was pointing. There lied an island. “I see, and….why are you reacting so loudly?”

“Because we’re gonna live!”

“I understand that. But instead of screaming about it, let’s go.”

“Wait, can I hold onto you while you swim there?”

“Err, whatever.”

Suyo swam over to the island, which was oddly shaped like a fist, with Blablob holding on for the ride. They arrived onto the shore of the island, and they both rested.

Miles and miles away from home, and with Kympo destroyed and Niklaw gone, and no way home; what were they going to do?

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Meanwhile at Runouw’s Forum...

“Finally, we’re here.” Brando sighed with relief. His first thought: They better have some food here.

“Yeah, we are here. It was easy. A little TOO easy, don’t you think?” MIC was a little suspicious.

“You got a point, MIC. What are the chances we’d run into this place, anyway?”

“Perhaps we just got lucky. Or maybe they wanted us to come here.”

“Well if they wanted us to come, then they’ve made a terrible mistake.”

The building didn’t look any different than before. A brick square, three floors tall. Nothing special.

They both snuck into the building. They figured the place was crawling with Spammers; that was what they did best, right? After passing by a few Spammers, unseen, they found a room which all users were prohibited from access.

Forum 23, was all it read on the door.

Brando and MIC looked at each other. Brando nodded. MIC slowly opened the door, and a dim blue light came from the room. The light lied above a chamber, with a window above it. MIC went over and looked through the window.

“Oh my God. Brando, get your buns over here and take a look at this.”

Brando, concerned, went over and looked through the glass. “Oh no. Not good.”

Runouw, the REAL Runouw, lied inside the chamber, asleep. How could they have captured him, they thought?

And suddenly, the alarm was sounded. Both of them were in trouble.
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Re: Kympo

Postby Chaukai » February 15th, 2010, 11:20 am

I like this story! :O It's very interesting, how you tie Mcleodgaming into this!
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Re: Kympo

Postby Blablob » February 15th, 2010, 1:23 pm

aznchau4ever wrote:I like this story! :O It's very interesting, how you tie Mcleodgaming into this!

Yeah. As of now Cleod is just a very basic enemy, but he will become a major part of this story later on.
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Re: Kympo

Postby MessengerOfDreams » February 15th, 2010, 6:38 pm

♥♥♥♥!!

You killed my favorite character!

Why does everyone want to kill Niklaw?

He rocks!

BTW Where the heck am I?

Anyways, nice work! One of the better fanfics on the site. Also, you may want to change the name since the real Kympo was around for a chapter.
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Re: Kympo

Postby Blablob » February 16th, 2010, 4:47 am

Oh, don't worry. Kympo is a MAJOR part of this story, that's only yet to come. And you haven't seen the last of Niklaw; that I swear ;)
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