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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 4 POSTED!

Postby nin10mode » December 26th, 2009, 5:19 pm

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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 27th, 2009, 12:19 pm

Two words- Chapter 5!
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby Buff_ » December 27th, 2009, 12:32 pm

Pretty bloody isn't it?
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 27th, 2009, 12:34 pm

LOL! You mean Niklaw, right?
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Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
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The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-The Chapter 6-ito.

Postby Ridder » December 27th, 2009, 12:56 pm

MoY has requested someone do a good version of Chapter 6, here's the theme:

Interrogation of Suspects

That's right, me, Sam, and Mic, with the absence of Buffy, shall interrogate the following

  • Nicolas Locke (Niklaw)
  • Avo Richards (Avolerators)
  • Brock Lee (aznchau4ever)
  • Elwood Armin (Lrmaster132)
  • Dan Zeb-terra (Zebtrestalala)
  • ???

NOTE: Anyone can make a chapter 6, till MoY decides on a winner and then, stuff happens. It can happen from many points of views, or if you're a suspect, yours.
Suspects, get your alibis ready.


MY CHAPTER 6

December 23, 2009, 8:14 AM.
Police Station

I got up early to get to the station, for it was that day, THE day. I did my usual things, get up from my bed, brush my teeth, slay pigs, cook the breakfast, I don't want to bore you with the minor details that is my house life. Then when I was good and ready, I got dressed and left my small house sandwiched between the Train Station,several other small houses and the back of the university I go to.

A light blanket of snow covered anything not protected by a wall of brick or wood, so I had to wear a Muffler, a big poofy jacket, and a snow cap, yeah,it was kind of freezing. My boots left footsteps and hardly made any sound at all as I made my way towards that place,leaving only small footprints and cracked leaves behind, my breath clearly visible as a puff of white cloud.
I soon come to the station's doors. I turn my head towards the sun just barely climbing over the edge of the horizon. "Man, w-w-why can't it come faster?" I was shivering, I know, I was there. I pushed the glass door on the left and smiled as a flood of sound came from the inside, and a wave of heat, oh, how good it felt, But today, I had to try and be as cold as possible. I walked pass all the people, the warm feelings, and found myself outside a single black door with a brown door far from it on the other end of building. I pushed the black one open and heard the eerie sound of nothing as I walked into the room.
It felt even colder inside that room than outside the station.

December 23,2009, 8:21 AM.
Interrogation Room

I was leaning in my disposable chair, having a little chat. That's when Ema came into the room, I could tell she thought the room was cold, 'cause she was shivering.
"So, how was Alaska?" I asked her, trying to pull a laugh out of her.
"Oh, haha, very funny, could we get this started soon?" Was her response, not much for jokes in the middle of winter anymore.
"Get Started? Ema, we're already in the middle of talking to the first suspect." I pointed to the other kid on the other end of the table I had my feet on.
"MIC, get your feet off the table." Ema noticed too. Okay, so I HAD my feet on the table. "Okay, "Mommy". You'd do the same if you were sitting here listening to this kids poor excuse for an alibi."
The kid being interrogated was a sobbing mess, jeez, I've been sittin' here for an hour listening to him whine like an alarm.
I scratched my head and thought about what to do.
"Okay son, what's your name?" Ema rested her hands on the table and tried to be friendly with the kid.
"I didn't do anything....I swear....." The kid wasn't even being accused yet, and he is blabbering on about how he's innocent.
"You aren't being accused, you don't have to worry, if you didn't do it, then there isn't anything to fear." Ema used that corny line to make the kid calm down, and you know what? I was surprised it actually worked.
"Alright.....I'm sorry I cried like that......It's just.....you know...." Yeah, like I'd know how it felt to cry for an hour without stopping.

December 23,2009, 8:30 AM
Interrogation of First Suspect

"Okay kid, tell Ema here your name, I've already read it on your file." I told the whimpering kid.
He wiped away his last tear, and with a calm composure, said this,"......My name is Elwood Armin, I'm a 14 year old."
"Okay, tell us yer relation with Runouw.com." I told him, finally appreciating the quiet after an hour of Non-stop crying.
"My name on Runouw.com is Lrmaster132, I was a good user there, with a Tyranitar and everything, But then I got banned for a month by Runouw for starting a fight with another guy called Zebtrestalala." That we pretty much already knew.
"Did you want to take revenge on Rob Stevens for this?" Ema asked him, dangit, I was about to say that.
"No, I mean, I don't like how I got banned, but I didn't want to kill the man, he was a great man he was." Elwood held his head down as if in honor of this Runowch guy.
"Why did you have the Flame War anyways?" Ema asked him politely."Look, I didn't start it, Zebtrest did, I was only talking about the new Mod thing."
I didn't buy it, something was fishy about all of this. I decided to pull out my tazer out of my pocket and wave it around menacingly around that guys face, And so I did!
"Mic! Stop!" Ema obviously didn't approve of this, but nonetheless, I did a fake thrust at Armin with my Tazer, okay, so Ema grabbed me in time so that only a sparkle hit Armin's nose, what happened afterwards was actually kind of funny. It was dead silent when she stopped me, nothing but the sound of roaming electricity and the trickling of a 14-year olds pants wetting.
Elwood shrieked out in terror and held his arms out in self defense, But I sat down and Ema took the tazer away from me, while it was saddening for me, it was a wise choice for her, I would have started complaining, and you don't want to hear me complain about my tazer.
Ema turned her head towards Elwood, who resumed Crying, oh gosh. "ALRIGHT, ALRIGHT, OKAY I ADMIT IT!!!!" hah, my Tazer Tactic actually worked, I'm going to coin that.

Elwood's Confesssion Gotta love this stuff huh? &D

"In actuality, I think I provoked him to start the war with me." Elwood's confession was strange.
"How exactly did you provoke him?" Ema was about as confused as I was. I could tell.
"I said that I should be the new Mod, seeing as how I help around the site, sort of." That last bit made me Ting. yes, Ting, I just made it up.
"Sort of?" I was pondering about why a "Sort of" instead of a definite.
"Well, I don't really do that much, but I just wanted to feel like the other mods, what with fourinone saying how great it was...."
"What's this Fourione's relation with Rob Stevens?" Ema was getting excited on a possible new lead.
"Well, a few days ago, Four was fired as a Mod for lacking the right skills, or something." Elwood was a tree that was out of the sap we needed.
"Alright, you check out right, I think you're free to go, and when I mean go, I mean GO." I pointed towards the door, clearly telling Elwood to leave.
"Okay....umm... can I get a new pair of pants here?" Elwood asked as he got up and walked awkwardly over to the door. I chuckled.

Intermission or whazitcalled.
December 23,2009, 8:50 AM
Break

After directing Elwood to where he could get his pants, I heaved a sigh of relief. "Well, that's one string tied up. Only a few more to go." I unzipped my jacket and threw it on the floor, it was nice, because during that Interrogation, it actually started to feel hotter again.
I unwound and looked around, the clock on the wall read 10 minutes to 9, man, I woke up at 8:10, and this all happens in forty minutes.
"So, where's Sam?" I asked Mic. Not noticing he wasn't here just now. Mic walked around the table, and looked around as well.
"Oh, he's behind the glass, he's been recording everything we just did here."
"hmmm....." I couldn't help but feel that Sam wasn't doing enough work, I just kept "Mr. Good People Skills" here away from Taze-ing a 14-year old.
That's when it happened.
I forgot to pick up my jacket and leave it in a more favorable spot, so Mic unluckily slipped on it when he didn't see, and well wouldn't you know it? He fell on me, and that only made me fall too.
"Oof!!!" Man, the floor hurt when you just got hit with an acoustic guitar yesterday. Oh well, I'm sure I'm going to have some nice dreams, probably.
The last thing I remember before I went out cold was Mic's warm body on top of mine. Yeah, not a good thing to remember last.
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 27th, 2009, 12:58 pm

Bravissimo!

Edit: Besides the fact that I can't quite tell if she lives where I put her ( The College is a bunch of high-rises and larger buildings) the narration from Ema, I presume, is terrific! Good job!
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The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby Ridder » December 27th, 2009, 8:11 pm

ME CHAPTER 6 IS UP, TRY TO BEAT TAHT.
WARNING! ME STORY HAS TAZERS AND A PANTS GETTING WET.

Yeah, once I get in the zone, my work drops to crud quality.
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby nin10mode » December 27th, 2009, 8:19 pm

XD Poor Lr...
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby MessengerOfDreams » December 27th, 2009, 9:12 pm

The only negative aboutn this chapter is that it makes me look bad! Way to go!
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Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
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lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
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Re: The Runouw.com Connection-CHAPTER 5 POSTED!

Postby spookyghost » December 28th, 2009, 10:57 am

I am okay without it now, at least Ema is nice :lol:
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