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Welcome to OMG chat.
Where I make up a chat story everyday.

Story One: The Buff ManGirl

TBG: I like pioe.
Brando: Don't get too excited, you're still being watched.
TBG: By who?
Buff: THEM
TBG:Wow, sounds painful.
Ayray:Hey guys, just made another level. Who wants to check it out?
Buff: Not me.
Ayray: You...you makes me cry!
TBG: you dumby head!
Ayray: Not you TOO TBG!!!
TBG: No, I meant Buffy.
Buff: Buffy? The vampire slayer?
Brando: OMG BUFF IS A IT!!!
Ayray:
TBG: Whoa. I never knew.
Buff: Hey! I am NOT a man/boy!
TBG: Yeah, that's 'cuz you're neither.
Buff: I'm leaving...*moves to Hawaii*
Brando: You don't have enough money. *takes Buff back to Runouwland*
Buff: Well I'll get a job there and make money *moves to Hawaii*AGAIN**
MIC: Hey Buffy. Hey TBG. Hey Brando. Hey Ayray.
Ayray: H *sniff* hi..
TBG: See? You made him cry again.
MIC: What? No I didn't! He was like that when I came here!
Buff: Yeah. He was.
Ayray: Oh s/u Buffy! You made me cry!
Brando: Hey! Stop arguing! This is a nice place.
TBG: Pff, not according to what's happening here..
MIC: Whoa, I think I should leave this flame war.
TBG: *Rocket launches MIC*
Buff: Wtf? You don't have the money!
Brando: Hey! Don't take my sentence It!
Buff: Stop calling me names!!!
Ayray: I'm committing suicide because no one likes my levels...
Buff: Oh god no....
TBG: See Buffy? You killed Ayrayen.
brando: I'm leaving.
TBG: AND you made brando leave.
Ayray: *commits suicide*
MIC: Whoa! Oh no. *makes funeral topic*
Buff: What the heck1?! Why did you kill yourself Ayray?
Ayray: [Ayray's ghost] Because you hated my levels and makeded me cry....
TBG: Oh god. OH MY GOD A GHOST!!! *runs away*
MIC: TBG, you still owe me for rocket launching me in half.
TBG: *Gives MIC half the body of Ayray*
MIC: Ew....EW...EEEEEEEEWWWWWW!!!!!!!
MIC: I can't even control that part!!!
brando: Well he gave it to you now STOP COMPLAINING!!!
Ayray: [Ayray's ghost] goodbye friedns, I'm off to explore Paris....
Buff: Wtf? He gets to go to Paris but I can't go to Hawaii???!!?
brando: It, calm the ffff down. He's a ghost, you aren't.
Buff: *commits suicide*
TBG: Didn't work Buffy.
Buff: Why not?
brando: girls don't die. Unless they're ugly.
Buff: I'M A BOY!!!!
MIC: Pff, not from what I've seen.
TBG: Yeah. Stop flaming, It.
*five minutes go by*
brando: I think we got him.
MIC: Thank god.
TBG: Yeah. lol
MIC: Can you give me half of Runouw's body TBG?
brando: *donates half of his body to MOY*
MIC: NOT HIM!! MEEEEEE!!!!
MOY: WHAT THE?!?! EEEEEEWWWW!!!!!

----The End----

Pfft, you just faked those votes and tried to make it seem like people like it >.>
Lol joking, its okay, not great, not bad but okay.

EDIT: TBG, you baby. Sorry if thats flame, but you just get all mad at people for saying your work is not perfect. You expect everybody to say its perfect, when you still have stuff to fix it. You know how writers made their work perfect? Criticism. Critics can get annoying after awhile, but just one bad review makes you mad. Bad reviews help you find ways to fix it, or just let you know that it needs more work. I bet if you work on it, you can make it a great story. Nothing is perfect the first try!

Pff, not if the criticism has no point.

Ridder wrote:OMG chat isn't funny.

See?
USELESS.
No help at all.
What do i do to make it better?
I don't know!

And by the way.
If people write what critics want then it's not their story anymore!

TBG, don't double post, pleeze, we don't want you getting banned again....

TheBetterGamer wrote:And by the way.
If people write what critics want then it's not their story anymore!

TBG, you are just clueless, aren't you? (sorry if that was harsh)

Critics don't tell you how to write a story. They help you write a better one. You're supposed to learn from your mistakes. All a critic does is point out those mistakes. If something isn't perfect, respect, but more importantly, listen to other people's critisism. It will help you throughout life. But just because you listen, doesn't make it a bad thing. And that's the hardest thing, is to listen. And that's what you need to start doing.

blablob wrote:Critics don't tell you how to write a story. They help you write a better one.

Proving my point!

TheBetterGamer wrote:

blablob wrote:Critics don't tell you how to write a story. They help you write a better one.

Proving my point!

No. They aren't telling you how to do the story, they're simply aiding you along the way. Jeez, don't you understand?

People who help you change your story? The one YOU wanted WITHOUT help?

TheBetterGamer wrote:People who help you change your story? The one YOU wanted WITHOUT help?

...Wow, TBG...can't you just understand that no matter what you do throughout life you're ALWAYS going to need help? Not just you; everyone needs help with something. Nobody is perfect. Just face that. We aren't here to do the work for you, or provide you with word-by-word help (A.K.A cheating), but we give you advice. Just take the advice. The work is still 100% yours, and it was YOUR concept, but you just got a little push along the way.

If you still don't get it, here's something else. Remember the old days when you first learned to ride a bicycle? You couldn't figure out how to pedal, or to stop, or to turn, or whatever it was. Your parents/guardian helped you, though, and told you what to do, and how to do it, so you'd avoid doing it again. They gave you advice over time, and a few crashes into the neighborhood dumpster later, you had the hang of it.

My moral: You can't live life out without any help. It's impossible. Rather it's getting potty-trained, or feeding the fish, or learning in school. But it only counts as cheating if you don't help yourself.