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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 17th, 2011, 5:36 pm

Hmm Darker? Wow, original.

Let's try this for size, each higher level of Darkness is differently named.
The first set of four levels is dark of some form.
Dark Level 1: Dark
Dark Level 2: Darker
Dark Level 3: Darkness
Dark Level 4: Dark End
Then at slightly different form of it is Shadow, this can be learned ahead of Darker, etc. But that's because it's a different form of darkness. Shadow has 2 levels.
Shadow Level 1: Shadow
Shadow Level 2: Overshadow
Dark Shadow is a combined form of the two. And finally Nightmare is the Strongest form, but is severely draining. You don't have to follow these rules, but it's one way to do it.

Spear of course, is the first offensive move you learn the Shadow version of. And, we can say Shadow abilities get stronger near light, as if there's a Shadow, there's a light, ya know? Dark Shadow Benefits from both nearby darkness, and nearby light, but it's a level one so it needs both to be really effective. Nightmare is it's own thing as it deals both a crushing blow physically, and distorts who it hits mentally. But it nigh fully drains its user should they use it.

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If we ARE going to go into background, we might need help from Mariox64 and Bread.

For the story of the sequel, I'd imagine you would go and train for a higher level of Darkness Powers.
AwesomeJRFD would get even MORE awesome.
Bread and Mariox64, I wouldn't know what to do with them honestly.
And I would do some experimenting with Crimson.

After about 10 Chapters Raymond's clones are revealed. And it would take at least 5 chapters to get them all over with.

Lemme see, at least 3 Chapters related to Nan getting stronger, at least one Chapter of me experimenting. And at least 4 chapters dealing with Bread and Mariox in total. And, the entire time it's rubbed in our faces that JRFD is getting more awesome than us as a running gag put at the end of the first 8 or so chapters. Sounds like a plan?
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Re: Teh most wepic story evar! :3

Postby AwesomeJRFD » June 17th, 2011, 5:42 pm

JSlayerXero wrote:Lemme see, at least 3 Chapters related to Nan getting stronger, at least one Chapter of me experimenting. And at least 4 chapters dealing with Bread and Mariox in total. And, the entire time it's rubbed in our faces that JRFD is getting more awesome than us as a running gag put at the end of the first 8 or so chapters. Sounds like a plan?

That would work better as a prequel. And I'm still waiting for Chapter 3 to be approved. *looks at watch* :|
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby NanTheDark » June 17th, 2011, 6:29 pm

I had also thought of the darkness levels idea, but I think it would be just Dark, Darker and Darkest. Dark End just doesn't sound good to me...

And the idea of Shadow Energy seems good, but I'm not sure about it... Some of my attacks are named "Shadow" to don't abuse the Dark prefix :awe: but using Shadow as something different could work...

Also some of my abilities could have different names related to darkness, for example my Negation of Light.

Also I forgot these:

Dark Laser: A concentrated beam of darkness which can pierce through things the spear can't. However it's way slower and not suitable for many combat situations.

Shadow of Paralysis: Prevents target from moving. Can't do anything else while restraining target.

All the abilities I have listed are abilities I know already. In the story I could get more :D

Also, this doesn't need to be a prequel. We can always have flashbacks, or talks like "The reason I'm so dark is X", I don't know.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby AwesomeJRFD » June 17th, 2011, 6:39 pm

We can use the current Never Ending Story story. It's getting epic again. We can make a new topic and this one will be for discussing our plans.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 17th, 2011, 6:46 pm

Yeah, I admit, me and Master 1.0 were doing our best to make it epic again. Not sure how it'd fit as a story, but your edits to part 1 were good so I'm sure we can do something.

Edit: Yeah, I think we could use what's currently in the never ending story, it's pretty good. And, it makes Crimson look awesome. I have encased most everything in Crimson, so I have my bets Master 1.0 could get me out. And besides, you edited this this one to help our needs. We'll just edit this new one a bit, and make a new topic if MK or someone else decides to ruin us.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 17th, 2011, 7:43 pm

AwesomeJRFD wrote:
JSlayerXero wrote:Lemme see, at least 3 Chapters related to Nan getting stronger, at least one Chapter of me experimenting. And at least 4 chapters dealing with Bread and Mariox in total. And, the entire time it's rubbed in our faces that JRFD is getting more awesome than us as a running gag put at the end of the first 8 or so chapters. Sounds like a plan?

That would work better as a prequel. And I'm still waiting for Chapter 3 to be approved. *looks at watch* :|


JSlayerXero wrote:Edit: Yeah, I think we could use what's currently in the never ending story, it's pretty good. And, it makes Crimson look awesome. I have encased most everything in Crimson, so I have my bets Master 1.0 could get me out. And besides, you edited this this one to help our needs. We'll just edit this new one a bit, and make a new topic if MK or someone else decides to ruin us.


Well, we could always write the prequel next, or write it later after writing part 2 or part 3. And, we've got something going in the Never Ending Story, we can use, and edit that to our needs once some body cuts us off. It will happen, and if it doesn't, just because we ended one story, doesn't mean we can't continue from that.

Also, we can still have that chapter about Nan, he hasn't grown to a full master of Darkness yet, but he is pretty good as is.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby AwesomeJRFD » June 17th, 2011, 9:26 pm

This is now the official part 2 story post.
Some of the story is first person Master1.0's point of view.
Alright: this is part 2 so far:

Chapter 1: Resurrection
It had been 3 years since the first War with Raymond and his spam-bot armies. It the meantime, his spam-bots were up to something. something evil.

They had done it. Raymond sat up and looked around.
Raymond: It's amazing how loyal you morons are to me. This last invasion will be the success!
Spambot 1: What- do you think will we do?
Raymond: Fix your damned speech program god dammit!

Raymond blows off the Spambot's head, and starts doing programming. It's about 5 seconds before he seals another head on using the force powers of evil. *cheesy much?*
Back on Runouw...
Suyo: *clenches fist* DAMMIT!!!
Master1.0: Suyo, what the hell?
Suyo: Ugh... I think I'll check something out... *pulls out banhammer*
Master1.0: Suyo! What the hell are you doing now!?
Suyo: Giving MYSELF a week ban. Raymond must be building again, and I at the point that I feel somebody needs to go there.
Master1.0: Dude. Send me. You're pretty much the only one that could stop a massive spambot invasion, and I'm just a Veteran. I don't know any fighting ♥♥♥♥, so just do it to me.
Suyo: ...Are you sure? *Master nods his head* Fine... I might as well do something for you in return, once you get back, at least. Now... Limbo is the evilest place you'll ever be. Members with more than a day ban often go mad. If you return, you will become what you dreamed of becoming. A Level Moderator.
Master1.0: Suyo, be sure to tell everybody what happened.
Suyo: Okay, now here it goes.

Suyo swings the banhammer, and Master is sent to Limbo for 1 week.

Chapter 2: Limbo
I plummet down to the ground from the power of the banhammer. Crumbled pillars lie everywhere, and I don't remember a thing about Runouw. My mind has been wiped clean. I can't tell where the hell I am. The dark landscape causes me to tremble.

???: Ugh, my head.

Damn, it seems I can't even remember my name. All I can think about is how I ended up in this place. What happened? Am I already going insane? Thousands of questions seem to pop into my head, and I am smacked with something, and I hit the floor.

When I awake, I'm no longer where I had lost it. 5 people surround me, with torn clothes and a mad look on their faces. Are they aware of where the hell they are? Things don't make sense anymore.

???: *in a scratchy voice* ...What the hell?
Banished Man: Welcome to Limbo!
Shady Guy: So, what did you do to end up here? *snickers*
???: I... Can't remember.
Shady Guy: You hear that R? He can't remember! *laughs uncontrollably*
???: R? Who is this R? OF COURSE! I've regained some thoughts. My name is Master1.0. I'm a Runouw.com member. I still don't know where I am, but I have some sort of lead at the moment.
Banished Man: Get up.
Master1.0: I still feel weak. I still don't know who R is. Ugh... *I clumsily get to my feet*
Banished Man: Now... do you know what this object is? *pulls out a peculiar hammer-like object*
Master1.0: !!! A... A banhammer? Of course! This is Limbo, the opposite side of Runouw.com, where all banned members are sent. But why am I here?
Banished Man: This here object was used in order to rid of us notorious ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥! Fix it, and you won't die of starvation!
Master1.0: But... I don't know ho-
Banished Man: DAMMIT! GO SAVE YOURSELF!!! I HARDLY BELIEVE YOU COULD SAVE YOURSELF! DON'T EXPECT ME TO PRY YOUR COLD DEAD BODY BACK TO RUNOUW.COM DURING THE INVASION!!!
Master1.0: Okay... I'll try...

Tears start streaming down my cheeks.

Master1.0: I'll fix it dammit!!!
Shady Man: Good. I guess you could live after all...

The Shady Man chains me and throws me on a gurney. I strangle. I'm completely helpless. We finally arrive at the broken down mill.

Shady Man: Now, get to work you b@$t@rd!
Master1.0: ...Okay.

I start working on the peculiar hammer. It seems hopeless. How the hell does it work? I tinker around with it. I think I fixed it.

R: Let's see. *examines it* Perfect! You designed the exact opposite of what I wanted. Now we can escape my friends!!!
*R removes his cloak* I, Raymond, now will destroy Runouw.com! *Raymond snaps his fingers*

About a bajillion spambots make their way out of the dirt.

Master1.0: No... There is no way. Runouw.com is going to be destroyed! YOU ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!

I feel a burst of energy, and I punch Raymond in the face. He staggers back from the blow, and I could see the slightest hint of blood on his face.

Chapter 3: Xero's entrance
Master1.0 is surrounded by spam-bots. Just then, a flash of Crimson appears, and Xero emerges. "Man, I really need get used to this," Xero said, "1.0, get behind me."

1.0 got behind Xero

"What do you plan on doing by yourself?" Raymond asked, commanding all spam-bots to point their rifles at them.

"Well, we were able to fabricate two balls of twelve-year Crimson. I used one to get here. We also made one that's about fourteen-year. All Martian years." Xero pushed Master 1.0 back a bit and threw the remaining twelve-year Crimson ball at him. Master 1.0 disappeared into a Crimson silhouette. Then that faded. "Twelve years is powerful enough to warp a man between Limbo, and Runouw.com."

At that Raymond commanded his spam-bots to attack Xero.

But Xero said, "It can also do this, CRIMSON NIGHTMARE!" Xero, threw it at the ground. Crimson light engulfed Xero, Raymond, and all the spam-bots. CRSSHA! The sound of shattering glass, and everybody was encased in Crimson…

Chapter 4: Discussion with Suyo
Meanwhile, back at Runouw.com, Master 1.0 had just finished warping back from Limbo. He quickly ran through the streets of Runouw.com to the staff building, forum 23. He waited outside for Suyo, as he was not allowed in. Suyo came out, and Master told him about what happened. Suyo started getting angry.
"Doesn't he ever give up?! He just keeps on coming back with new plans of destroying Runouw.com! What does he have against us? Other then banishing him to limbo and making him go insane beyond human endurance?!"
"I wasn't done telling you yet. I think I saw something, but I'm not sure."
"What did you see?"
"I saw… clones. Raymond clones."
"This is bad. This is very bad…"
"I know. JSlayer is in there too."
"How did he get there? He wasn't banned."
"Actually, I think he was. He asked Blab to give him a six hour ban to rescue me."
*Checks Ban log* "Why didn't he tell me?
"I don't know. JSlayer must've told him to keep it a secret."
"So he'll be out in six hours?"
"Not if Raymond gets to him first."
"We have to rescue him! But who'll have the guts to go in?"
"I'll do it."
"What?! You were just there! You have to have at least a couple hours to relax before you are able to go back in."
"Raymond would be able to kill JSlayer by then!"
"I know. That's why we need someone else."
"I can do this!"
"Are you sure?"
"Yes. If We're not out in six hours, then something went wrong."
Suyo set his banhammer to six hours, then raised it above his head. "Are you ready?"
"Yes." Replied Master.
Suyo swung the banhammer down onto Master's head, banning him, and sending him into limbo.

Chapter 5: Death
I fly face first into the ground. I'm back in Limbo. J is somewhere for a 6 hour rescue mission, and I need to help him. I have nothing to defend myself. I wonder if anybody from Runouw.com can hear me; I start shaking.

Not again... But I can't crash in the middle of Limbo. I came back to help the guy dammit! I clumsily search the area. How the hell can you not figure out where about 3 trillion spambots are hiding?

???: *in a faint cry* No...
Master1.0: ? Oh no... was that-

A spambot manages to catch me offguard.

Spambot: Again Back? Raymond Master!

The spambot must have sent a siginal, because it flashed a beam of light into the air twice. I fight to try to escape the hold of the spambot, but its cold metallic hands are in a grasp like stone. I can't help but scream as the spambot starts dragging me to his master, who is probably about 10 miles away. It seems the spambots have merged into the ground again, because only Raymond remains. Wait, only him?!?! Where is JX??? Could he be dead? Is the crimson member really dead?

(Play this music until the end of the segment. ->


I can finally see JX's bloody lifeless body atop of the Earth Raymond stands on. Raymond laughs, like he doesn't care about anybody but himself.

Master1.0: You... You ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!!!!
Raymond: Let's not squeal now kid. After all, life is only meant to be killed.
Master1.0: No Raymond. That's where you're wrong. God created you and I for a purpose. It doesn't make junk, it creates a blessed living creature, with some meaning to the world.
Raymond: That's where you're wrong, you ♥♥♥♥ idiot! I was created to kill all of the miserable little ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ of mankind. That's why you don't often see people with week bans ever again. I find and kill, sometimes recruit. This little moron got himself banned to rescue you, and made one pitiful mistake that lost his life.
Master1.0: .....No.....
Raymond: You're lucky I let you live. Release him.

The spambot drops me, and I fall to the floor, unconsious again.

Raymond: You'll be dead next time we meet, got that you fool?

Chapter 6: Awakening
The torture has ended after 6 hours. I wish I hadn't listened to Suyo. I don't want to go back there. Ever. I regain life. I'm still queezy, and I can see Suyo out of the corner of my eye. I'm obliviously in the hospital.

Suyo: Are you awake? Take a good look at yourself.
Master1.0: Ugh... Wait... What?! Level Moderator clothes?! No! I don't deserve to wear these! I don't deserve this job! I couldn't save JXSlayer, and I had to keep staring at his cold dead body!

Tears are streaming down my face. I can't control myself I'm so ashamed of myself.

Suyo: Master... *kneels down* I'm sorry about JX. We couldn't save him.
Master1.0: I'm lucky I'm alive. Why couldn't that ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ killed me there and then?
Suyo: Get a hold of yourself!
Master1.0: ...I can't help it...
Suyo: Just calm down Master. Try to suppress your grief. *JRFD walks in*
AwesomeJRFD: Suyo!!!
Suyo: What?!
AwesomeJRFD: We have a serious problem. Spambots are appearing out of thin air. About a 100 of them have been conjured!
Suyo: Awesome, I'll take care of it. Stay with Master, he can barely get a hold of himself.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby Master1.0 » June 18th, 2011, 4:50 am

Well, it seems you need to create chapter 5. I just posted to The topic. ;)

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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 18th, 2011, 8:22 am

Yeah, this story is good. I'm dead in the never ending story though. Ah well, I actually have it planned out where it goes from there. I don't come back alive, but something even more epic happens.

Edit: If I do come back, it'll be later on in the story.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 18th, 2011, 11:30 am

Continued from JRFD's last post.

Chapter 7: Xero's Notes
NanTheDark heard the news about Xero's death.
"They can't be serious," Nan said.
"Seems so," Bread said, "Supposedly Master 1.0 was sent in, but he didn't get to him in time."
"Well," Mariox said with a sigh, "I know for a fact he did something before leaving. I have this note addressed to Nan."
"Lemme see that," Nan said.
It reads:
"Dearest friends of mine,
Master 1.0 was sent to limbo, I'm going to try to get him out.
Raymond is in there planning something, I know it.
Should I not return, go to my place, I have something there for you.

Your friend,
JSlayerXero"

"Well, seems like we've got something to do," Nan said.
"Well then, what are we waiting for," Bread declared, "Let's go!"

JRFD was busy fight off spam-bots, so the three of them set off towards JSlayerXero's home.

Meanwhile, back at Runouwopolis....

Chapter 8: Tears & Red Water
(Some of this is from Master 1.0's perspective)
...Suyo was warding off about 200 spambots.

Suyo: DAMMIT!!! Where the hell are all of these damn thing coming from?
Hybrog: Probably from Limbo.
Suyo: Master apparently fell unconcious once I left, so I have no idea what happened there. Whatever it is, it probably has to do with You Know Who.

The Hospital:
(Play this music until the end of the segment. ->
AwesomeJRFD: Master, what the hell happened when you were in Limbo?
Master1.0: ...I was... captured by a spambot... after hearing a faint cry... from JSX.

I'm still crying, I still can't bear what had happened in Limbo.

Master1.0: After being brought to Ray... I saw him. J Slayer was dead... on the ground. Ray was atop his lifeless body. He laughed, he didn't... care about anybody's life.
AwesomeJRFD: Dear god... (SEGMENT END)

JSlayerXero's House:

NanTheDark: Now, where would JSX hide a large package?
MarioX64: Hmm... Try his secret loose floorboard!

They approach the loose board, and carefully pulled off 3 wood planks. Ther it is, the package, sitting in tape and everything.

NanTheDark: That was almost too easy.
MarioX64: Let's open it now, alright?

Mario and Nan start to pull off the tape. After pulling it all off, they open the package. There it is, a large mass of crimson. A note is also attached.
(Play the soundtrack until the end of the note)

Dear Fellow Friends,

This mass of crimson will help you, if you know how to use it.
You sadly must discover the secret to it, for even though you
are a close friend, I can't have somebody like Raymond or a
spambot reading on how to use it. However, if you can create
a liquid from this, let's just say you may finally be able to defeat
this ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ once and for all.

Master will know something about how to do it, so ask him if he
comes back. The liquid is a secret matter, however, it isn't the
scarlet matter you think it is. It is a special thing called red water.


MarioX64: Master knows something about the special red liquid, eh?
NanTheDark: Never expected this.

A spambot blows a hole in the wall.

Spambot: Yes! Learned about secret liquid!!!
Mario and Nan: CRAP!!!

The spambot sends a wireless siginal to all the other spambots. Their goal is to avoid Suyo and capture Master.

NanTheDark: Why the hell did I read that out loud?!
MarioX64: Just shut up, we need to save Master!!! *Suyo runs in*
Suyo: The hospital! NOW!
Mario and Nan: RIGHT!!!

It's now a man hunt, Suyo, Nan, and MarioX64 run as quickly as possible to the hospital. They all dodge what seems to be endless amounts of laser beams. The entire General Forum is in pieces. The Hospital is now in view. Just a little farther, and-

MarioX64: Gah!!!
Suyo: Go get Mario! I'll continue to the hospital!

NanTheDark: MARIO!!! WHERE ARE YOU!?!?

Nan runs through an endless crowd of spambots, and finds Mario lying in a pool of blood.

NanTheDark: NO!!! Please Mario! Don't leave us!
MarioX64: *in a fain voice* Nan... Please help...
NanTheDark: No... THAT ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ KILLED MY BEST FRIEND!!!

Nan starts to cry uncontrollably, just like Master had after JSX's death.

NanTheDark: Why him?! Why him?!
Spambot: You're right where I want you to be!

Nan is shot by the spambot, and starts bleeding.

NanTheDark: You... Merely grazed me, you little jackass!

Nan starts going out of control. He somehow rips the head off the spambot like a cracker.

NanTheDark: YOU KILL MY FRIEND, YOU PAY!!!

The Hospital:

Suyo: C'mon... I need room 204 already!!!

Suyo approaches my room, to see a spambot cornering me while Awesome lies unconsious on the checkerboard floor. Suyo beats his way through the spambot, to find Master unconcious as well.

Suyo: Damn... He must've been trying to get away. Why were they here anyway? Were Mario and Nan okay?

More crowds of spambots enter the room and start aiming at Suyo.

Suyo: DAMMIT!!!

Suyo has been shot 6 times, and he starts bleeding. He's not dead, but he's unconcious.

The spambots take me back to Limbo, the place where my death is sure to come.

Chapter 9: Revival of a Lost Friend
In Limbo, Master 1.0 is thrown next to JSlayer. Master 1.0 couldn't bare the sight. But, for some reason, JSlayer's body started moving once the spam-bots left.
"NNnggggh, I can't believe I just went though all that."
"JSlayer! I can't believe it, your alive!" Master said happily
"Believe me, SKule torture is much worse than this. As they don't kill you, they drive you insane to the point of wanting to kill yourself, and then force you to live. I knew a guy that fell to SKule torture, lemme just say he's not with us anymore."
Both of them got up.
"How, how are you alive?" Asked Master.
"Well, I was doing some experiments on what happens when you put Crimson and Scarlet into the blood stream of living beings." JSlayer said, "Turns out if something is near death, a combination of a specific proportion of Scarlet and Crimson will put its owner in stasis until it can heal it. Sadly, it only works once though. But every subsequent time it'll keep me in stasis for about 3 days.

By the way, back at my lab I have some Crimson formed from what I've un-originally labeled, "Red Water." The key to using it is, it's sentient, and anything that forms from it will share a hive mind. Remember? You helped me make it."
"Oh yeah, that!" Master replied.
"Still," said JSlayer, "I've got things to do here, I managed to fool Raymond into believing I only had one ball of Crimson on me." JSlayer passed a ball of Crimson to Master. "Use it to get out."
"What are you going to do? " Asked Master.
JSlayer replied with a large exhaling of air, "Raymond's been cloning himself, someone's gotta blow up where he makes them before they reach the light of day. Also, my research shows that after having Crimson and Scarlet flowing through someone for long enough, they can form their own Crimson to some small extent. It'll take some time to get used to, but I'll be able to pretty much form farms of the stuff for a while and then attack his cloning factory once I've gathered enough."
"Okay, I'm going to head back," said Master, "Wish me luck, it's a nightmare in there."
"Raymond's got a larger army, no surprise. Still, with Requiem missing, I can only imagine how bad it's gotten. Oh, before I forget, that's been processing a little, let me split it a bit."
JSlayer breaks off a small part and hands it to Master. Master then uses the big part to go back to Runouw.com
"Man, I thought that last wars on Mars was bad, if this keeps up, all of Earth is going to bow before Raymond. Still, I really wish this wasn't just some cliche pseudo death I just went through." *sigh* "Still, that factory is still afoot"

Chapter 10: The Crimson Hawk
Meanwhile... Back at Runouw.com

Raymond: So this is it, this is Crimson made from "Red Water." MWAHAHAHAHA, what are you going to do NOW? Suyo's down, and your last hope is RIGHT here. MWAHAHAHAHA.

Just then Master 1.0 shows up right in front of Raymond
"Oh, hi. I'll be taking that." Master swipes the cube from Raymond and runs off.
"YOU *******!"
Master takes the small bit of Crimson he had left and formed a sword, prepped to fight off Raymond. Just then, he had the idea, he threw the cube onto the ground, and it formed a gigantic column of Crimson.

Cue epic music:

And then, from that column, humanoid bodies made of Crimson burst out. These then started attacking the nearby spam-bots. The Crimson wouldn't break though, they just charged through, encasing anything and everything they wanted in Crimson. They just skated along, leaving trails of Crimson on the ground. Wolves also formed, and they lunged at any nearby spam-bots. Some of the humanoids took parts of the pillar that had formed, and stuck them on roof-tops. Crimson fragments started falling all around, these forming a larger army by the minute. The rate was so fast that the Crimson Beings were forming faster than the spam-bots could arrive from limbo.

After several minutes, the gigantic Crimson Hawk formed in the air. It started raining Crimson, nobody could get away from it. Civilians were safe as the Crimson formed barriers around them. The spam-bots were absolutely getting slaughtered. Raymond was prepared to fight back, but before he could the Crimson Hawk swooped down on him, and pick him up in its mouth. It flew 22,000 feet up, then exploded with Raymond still in its mouth. The Crimson on the ground formed a barrier. Then, when the explosion reached ground, it formed Mountain Ranges of Crimson all around the city. These went on for miles.

Then, all the shattered, it started raining Crimson confetti. "We are Crimson," the various beings said in unison, "We will not tolerate anyone or anything that tries to destroy our home."

Chapter 11: Darker Spear
NanTheDark was next to Mariox64's dead body. He still couldn't believe he was actually gone.
"It's just not fair..."Nan whispered.
Suddenly, a spambot appeared near him. Nan prepared to fight.
"Why do you do this? Why do you search to destroy all things?"
"Life's only purpose is to end..." Answered the spambot, as it prepared to kill Nan.
Nan got really mad at him.

Darker Spear!

The spambot exploded in a million pieces with this new attack. Nan left the building and went outside.
He saw the raining Crimson.
"If I remember correctly, Scarlet has curative powers!"
Nan grabbed some Crimson and used Dark Flames to melt them into Scarlet. Then he went to Mario and used the Scarlet on him.
"I hope this is enough..."
"Nan, I don't think you know very well how to use it."
"Huh?"
"Nan turned around to see JSlayerXero."
"Xero! You're alive!"
"I'll take care of Mario. You go make sure Raymond is dead."
"What?"
"He exploded along with a Crimson Hawk in midair."
"Alright..."
Nan ran around the city. He found Master."
"Master! I'm glad you're okay!"
"No time to talk now. He's moving!"
"What?"
"Look! Under the crimson!"
From beneath a huge amount of crimson, Raymond came out with a crimson sword and jumped on the duo. Nan used Shadow Cloak
to block the attack.
"Raymond! You monster!" Nan took Master's Crimson Sword, and swung it towards Raymond. Raymond blocked it and threw Nan away. Nan then started throwing Dark Spears at Raymond, but he just blocked them all.
"You fool..." said Raymond "You think you stand a chance against me?"
"You have caused too much damage! Now die!"
Nan imbued the crimson sword with his dark energy and started to fight with Raymond. Nan wasn't able to hit him, Raymond dodged really fast. Suddenly Raymond disarmed Nan.
"You pathetic human... You will die, just like everyone else in this planet will!"
"Shut up!" A voice behind Raymond said.
Raymond's head exploded, and he fell to the ground. Behind him was Mario with a crimson gun and Xero.
"Mario!!!!!!!" Nan ran towards Mario and hugged him, "My friend! It's so good to see you're ok!"
"Don't worry Nan. Everything's okay now."
Everyone looked at Raymond's body.

"Are you sure about that?" Nan said.
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