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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby NanTheDark » June 18th, 2011, 11:38 am

Continued...

Chapter 8: Chaos and Disaster(Master1.0)

...Suyo was warding off about 200 spambots.

Suyo: DAMMIT!!! Where the hell are all of these damn thing coming from?
Hybrog: Probably from Limbo.
Suyo: Master apparently fell unconcious once I left, so I have no idea what happened there. Whatever it is, it probably has to do with You Know Who.

The Hospital:
AwesomeJRFD: Master, what the hell happened when you were in Limbo?
Master1.0: ...I was... captured by a spambot... after hearing a faint cry... from JSX.

I'm still crying, I still can't bear what had happened in Limbo.

Master1.0: After being brought to Ray... I saw him. J Slayer was dead... on the ground. Ray was atop his lifeless body. He laughed, he didn't... care about anybody's life.
AwesomeJRFD: Dear god... (SEGMENT END)

JSlayerXero's House:

NanTheDark: Now, where would JSX hide a large package?
MarioX64: Hmm... Try his secret loose floorboard!

They approach the loose board, and carefully pulled off 3 wood planks. Ther it is, the package, sitting in tape and everything.

NanTheDark: That was almost too easy.
MarioX64: Let's open it now, alright?

Mario and Nan start to pull off the tape. After pulling it all off, they open the package. There it is, a large mass of crimson. A note is also attached.
(Play the soundtrack until the end of the note)

Dear Fellow Friends,

This mass of crimson will help you, if you know how to use it.
You sadly must discover the secret to it, for even though you
are a close friend, I can't have somebody like Raymond or a
spambot reading on how to use it. However, if you can create
a liquid from this, let's just say you may finally be able to defeat
this ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ once and for all.

Master will know something about how to do it, so ask him if he
comes back. The liquid is a secret matter, however, it isn't the
scarlet matter you think it is. It is a special thing called red water.

MarioX64: Master knows something about the special red liquid, eh?
NanTheDark: Never expected this.

A spambot blows a hole in the wall.

Spambot: Yes! Learned about secret liquid!!!
Mario and Nan: CRAP!!!

The spambot sends a wireless siginal to all the other spambots. Their goal is to avoid Suyo and capture Master.

NanTheDark: Why the hell did I read that out loud?!
MarioX64: Just shut up, we need to save Master!!! *Suyo runs in*
Suyo: The hospital! NOW!
Mario and Nan: RIGHT!!!

It's now a man hunt, Suyo, Nan, and MarioX64 run as quickly as possible to the hospital. They all dodge what seems to be endless amounts of laser beams. The entire General Forum is in pieces. The Hospital is now in view. Just a little farther, and-

MarioX64: Gah!!!
Suyo: Go get Mario! I'll continue to the hospital!

NanTheDark: MARIO!!! WHERE ARE YOU!?!?

Nan runs through an endless crowd of spambots, and finds Mario lying in a pool of blood.

NanTheDark: NO!!! Please Mario! Don't leave us!
MarioX64: *in a fain voice* Nan... Please help...
NanTheDark: No... THAT ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ KILLED MY BEST FRIEND!!!

Nan starts to cry uncontrollably, just like Master had after JSX's death.

NanTheDark: Why him?! Why him?!
Spambot: You're right where I want you to be!

Nan is shot by the spambot, and starts bleeding.

NanTheDark: You... Merely grazed me, you little jackass!

Nan starts going out of control. He somehow rips the head off the spambot like a cracker.

NanTheDark: YOU KILL MY FRIEND, YOU PAY!!!

The Hospital:

Suyo: C'mon... I need room 204 already!!!

Suyo approaches my room, to see a spambot cornering me while Awesome lies unconsious on the checkerboard floor. Suyo beats his way through the spambot, to find Master unconcious as well.

Suyo: Damn... He must've been trying to get away. Why were they here anyway? Were Mario and Nan okay?

More crowds of spambots enter the room and start aiming at Suyo.

Suyo: DAMMIT!!!

Suyo has been shot 6 times, and he starts bleeding. He's not dead, but he's unconcious.

The spambots take me back to Limbo, the place where my death is sure to come.

Chapter 9: Crimson Hawk(Xero)

In Limbo, Master 1.0 is thrown next to JSlayer. Master 1.0 couldn't bare the sight. But, for some reason, JSlayer's body started moving once the spam-bots left.
"NNnggggh, I can't believe I just went though all that."
"JSlayer! I can't believe it, your alive!" Master said happily
"Believe me, SKule torture is much worse than this. As they don't kill you, they drive you insane to the point of wanting to kill yourself, and then force you to live. I knew a guy that fell to SKule torture, lemme just say he's not with us anymore."
Both of them got up.
"How, how are you alive?" Asked Master.
"Well, I was doing some experiments on what happens when you put Crimson and Scarlet into the blood stream of living beings." JSlayer said, "Turns out if something is near death, a combination of a specific proportion of Scarlet and Crimson will put its owner in stasis until it can heal it. Sadly, it only works once though. But every subsequent time it'll keep me in stasis for about 3 days.

By the way, back at my lab I have some Crimson formed from what I've un-originally labeled, "Red Water." The key to using it is, it's sentient, and anything that forms from it will share a hive mind. Remember? You helped me make it."
"Oh yeah, that!" Master replied.
"Still," said JSlayer, "I've got things to do here, I managed to fool Raymond into believing I only had one ball of Crimson on me." JSlayer passed a ball of Crimson to Master. "Use it to get out."
"What are you going to do? " Asked Master.
JSlayer replied with a large exhaling of air, "Raymond's been cloning himself, someone's gotta blow up where he makes them before they reach the light of day. Also, my research shows that after having Crimson and Scarlet flowing through someone for long enough, they can form their own Crimson to some small extent. It'll take some time to get used to, but I'll be able to pretty much form farms of the stuff for a while and then attack his cloning factory once I've gathered enough."
"Okay, I'm going to head back," said Master, "Wish me luck, it's a nightmare in there."
"Raymond's got a larger army, no surprise. Still, with Requiem missing, I can only imagine how bad it's gotten. Oh, before I forget, that's been processing a little, let me split it a bit."
JSlayer breaks off a small part and hands it to Master. Master then uses the big part to go back to Runouw.com
"Man, I thought that last wars on Mars was bad, if this keeps up, all of Earth is going to bow before Raymond. Still, I really wish this wasn't just some cliche pseudo death I just went through." *sigh* "Still, that factory is still afoot"

Meanwhile... Back at Runouw.com

Raymond: So this is it, this is Crimson made from "Red Water." MWAHAHAHAHA, what are you going to do NOW? Suyo's down, and your last hope is RIGHT here. MWAHAHAHAHA.

Just then Master 1.0 shows up right in front of Raymond
"Oh, hi. I'll be taking that." Master swipes the cube from Raymond and runs off.
"YOU *******!"
Master takes the small bit of Crimson he had left and formed a sword, prepped to fight off Raymond. Just then, he had the idea, he threw the cube onto the ground, and it formed a gigantic column of Crimson.


And then, from that column, humanoid bodies made of Crimson burst out. These then started attacking the nearby spam-bots. The Crimson wouldn't break though, they just charged through, encasing anything and everything they wanted in Crimson. They just skated along, leaving trails of Crimson on the ground. Wolves also formed, and they lunged at any nearby spam-bots. Some of the humanoids took parts of the pillar that had formed, and stuck them on roof-tops. Crimson fragments started falling all around, these forming a larger army by the minute. The rate was so fast that the Crimson Beings were forming faster than the spam-bots could arrive from limbo.

After several minutes, the gigantic Crimson Hawk formed in the air. It started raining Crimson, nobody could get away from it. Civilians were safe as the Crimson formed barriers around them. The spam-bots were absolutely getting slaughtered. Raymond was prepared to fight back, but before he could the Crimson Hawk swooped down on him, and pick him up in its mouth. It flew 22,000 feet up, then exploded with Raymond still in its mouth. The Crimson on the ground formed a barrier. Then, when the explosion reached ground, it formed Mountain Ranges of Crimson all around the city. These went on for miles.

Then, all the shattered, it started raining Crimson confetti. "We are Crimson," the various beings said in unison, "We will not tolerate anyone or anything that tries to destroy our home."

Chapter 10: Darker Spear(NanTheDark)

NanTheDark was next to Mariox64's dead body. He still couldn't believe he was actually gone.
-It's just not fair...-Nan whispered.
Suddenly, a spambot appeared near him. Nan prepared to fight.
-Why do you do this? Why do you search to destroy all things?
-Life's only purpose is to end...-answered the spambot, as it prepared to kill Nan.
Nan got really mad at him.

Darker Spear!

The spambot exploded in a million pieces with this new attack. Nan left the building and went outside.
He saw the raining Crimson.
-If I remember correctly, Scarlet has curative powers!
Nan grabbed some Crimson and used Dark Flames to melt them into Scarlet. Then he went to Mario and used the Scarlet on him.
-I hope this is enough...
-Nan, I don't think you know very well how to use it.
-Huh?
Nan turned around to see JSlayerXero.
-Xero! You're alive!
-I'll take care of Mario. You go make sure Raymond is dead.
-What?
-He exploded along with a Crimson Hawk in midair.
-Alright...
Nan ran around the city. He found Master.
-Master! I'm glad you're okay!
-No time to talk now. He's moving!
-What?
-Look! Under the crimson!
From beneath a huge amount of crimson, Raymond came out with a crimson sword and jumped on the duo. Nan used Shadow Cloak
to block the attack.
-Raymond! You monster!-Nan took Master's Crimson Sword, and swung it towards Raymond. Raymond blocked it and threw Nan away. Nan then started throwing Dark Spears at Raymond, but he just blocked them all.
-You fool...-said Raymond-You think you stand a chance against me?
-You have caused too much damage! Now die!
Nan imbued the crimson sword with his dark energy and started to fight with Raymond. Nan wasn't able to hit him, Raymond dodged really fast. Suddenly Raymond disarmed Nan.
-You pathetic human... You will die, just like everyone else in this planet will!
-Shut up!-A voice behind Raymond said.
Raymond's head exploded, and he fell to the ground. Behind him was Mario with a crimson gun and Xero.
-Mario!!!!!!!-Nan ran towards Mario and hugged him-My friend! It's so good to see you're ok!
-Don't worry Nan. Everything's okay now.
Everyone looked at Raymond's body.

-Are you sure about that?-Nan said.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 18th, 2011, 12:09 pm

GREAT! We've got two copies of the chapters after 7. :lol: :lol: :lol: :lol:
This would be funny if it wasn't so serious. Also, Master 1.0 is very good at dramatics. I'm rather good at writing epic battles. You, are good.

Also, I like some of your names, and some of mine. Some of mine fit better, some of yours fit better. The battle with all that Crimson share's two good name.

Edit: I also happened to break that one chapter into two chapters, seeing as they don't really relate as a single chapter (I had three chapters in one post once)

Edit: I tend to correct grammar.
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 18th, 2011, 12:44 pm

You know, the only thing I DON'T like about using the never ending story topic is, it doesn't end, ever. Unless of course we make an ending outside of the never-ending topic.

Chapter 12: The Wrath of Destruction

Next thing we know, Raymond's body starts moving again.

All: There's... no way...
Raymond: Surprised friends?

Ray's head slowly reforms into its original state. He stabs me in the heart, and sneers at me.

Raymond: Did you really think I was dead, you little ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥? You know, that DID kind of hurt.

I drop to the ground, dead. Blood continues to ooze out of my veins and arteries, and I`m already turning white. Well, at least I THOUGHT I was dead, but nobody knew it yet.

Suyo: You... ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!

Suyo starts dashing toward Raymond.

Raymond: Fool. *Raymond slashes Suyo, breaking his skull in half*
Who's next then?
MarioX64: No... Even Suyo is lifeless?!
JSlayerXero: I can't believe I didn't see this coming...
Raymond: You're still alive?

Raymond stabs JSX repeatedly, until he`s sure JSX is dead.

Raymond: Hmm... I wonder how many civilians I can kill in an hour?

Thousands fell from Raymond's power. First was Star king, caught off guard when talking to Destroyer in the tavern. Then MOD. Next went nin10mode. Hybrog and Nan.

Could anybody save us? Down went the strongest of us. 5 moderators were caught in a trap and burned to death.

Meanwhile...

Master1.0: Huh? Am I... alive?
???: Yes Master, you are.
Master1.0: Who the hell are you and where am I dammit?!
???: I am you. I am one. I am everything around you.
Master1.0: Really, because all I see is white!
???: Let me finish! I am the old Raymond, before I lost it.
Master1.0: SHOW YOURSELF SO I CAN KILL IT THEN, ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!!!
Raymond: Calm down! Now, you are not dead, only near death. I`m trying to help you save everybody!
Master1.0: Explain to me then.
Raymond: Okay then, here you go then...

Back at Runouwopolis...

Raymond: Well, it seems I've killed 329 members in an hour. Impressive!
Runouw: Look who came back from the dead...
Raymond: Well, if it isn't my favorite ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ Runouw!
???: Run...ouw...

JSlayer somehow manages to regain life.

JSX: Runouw... Runouw! Wow, it`s quite amazing what red water is capable of!

JSX slowly stands. A sword is still skewered in his body.

JSX: I think I'll keep this.

JSX sprints toward Raymond in a matter of seconds. And the fight is on.

Runouw: Get out of there!!!
JSlayerXero: NO!!! This is personal, Runouw!
Runouw: ...Fine then...

Meanwhile...

Master1.0: Orly?
Raymond: I swear I don't lie.
Master1.0: Why should I trust you?
Raymond: Because I'm gettiing you out of here.
Master1.0: ...Fine.

The Battle...

JSX: Damn it... Time to get rid of you once and for all...

JSX pulls out a secret vile of red water and combines it with scarlet. This created a chain of events starting with the blood magically being drawn back to their respective bodies. First came Suyo, then MOD, Star king, and so forth. Using more power of the miracle combination, JSX used the matter to blow up Raymond, bit this time for good.

.....I regain my train of thought. The hospital is crowded, and I realize that JSX did it.

Wait... OH ♥♥♥♥!!!

I run off to Forum 23, aware Runouw needs to hear about something. We had completely forgotten about the clones, which were designed to be exactly like Raymond...

Chapter 13: The Clones

Master 1.0 burst into the building.
"Runouw, I can't believe I never told you about this"
"Calm down, what is it?"
"Raymond, he's cloning himself in Limbo! And they are at the same level of power"
"No. Heaven help us."

More epic music:

Xero is fighting with Raymond get's tense.

"You FOOL! You really think you can take one ME?!"
"Not by myself, Crimson, I need your help!"

Just then, the Crimson pillars start reacting, and a Crimson Hawk forms flying above JSX and Raymond. It started raining Crimson.

"AHAHAHA, I am not affect by your stupid Crimson anymore."
"Maybe not, but it WILL NOT OBEY YOU!"

Just then, Raymond clones started falling in.

"I'm sorry, but your trump card, is useless now."
"No it isn't, you just need to watch, I managed to get Requiem into Limbo without getting him banned, he'll be able to do it."
"MWAHAHAHA, that wimp? I remember beating him until YOU shot me."
"Requiem is different now, he's STRONGER than you now!."
"Regardless, he's outnumbered."
"Wrong, whilst you were gone, I sabotaged your factory, it'll produce a cap of 70 clones."
"Ha, even then, can you really take out 70 clones, when your DEAD?"

Raymond stabs Xero through.

"Well," remarked Xero, "seems your sword didn't hurt much"

Just then, that "Xero" exploded, as it was actually a dummy made from Crimson.

"XEEEEEEEEEEEEERRROOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO!"

Chapter 14: Crimson Army
Just then, JRFD runs out of the hospital. He's holding something. It's a package. Raymond throws his sword at him, and JRFD dodges. He throws the package at the Raymond clone while running. The clone tries to dodge, but the package opens. It's another Red Water cube, but bigger then the other one. It starts homing in on the Raymond clone, who couldn't run away. The real Xero (not the dummy) runs out from an alley and yells to JRFD, "Where did you find that?!"
"I made it."
"How?!"
"While you were fighting Raymond, I went to your lab, and read all your notes."
"What?!"
"I then learned how to create the Red Water. After I used my Time-Freeze machine, I had forever to learn how to make it more powerful."
"You had a Time-Freeze machine?!"
JRFD was about to answer when the cube hit the Raymond clone.

Epic music time:

Red lightning started coming from the sky. It was epic. There was a huge explosion. More Crimson humanoids appeared. More wolves appeared. Another Crimson Hawk appeared. More mountains came up. The entire planet was encased in Crimson. At the center of it all, a portal opened. From the portal came huge bolts of Crimson lightning, that spread over the earth. From space, the entire planet was a big ball of Crimson. There were huge pillars going up indefinitely into the sky, which had turned red. Every Raymond clone exploded. The portal opened wider. Nan and the rest who were still alive looked into it. Then the portal ripped open and exploded. An army of Crimson marched out from the portal. It was obvious that these beings were from another universe. Yet unknown even in the far vast reaches of space. The Crimson being said in unison: "We are Crimson. Where is the evil one you call Raymond? He has destroyed our home. We will not tolerate this. He must die."

The Crimson humanoids started taking out Crimson weapons. Some were riding huge Crimson horses. There were even gigantic Crimson tanks. Even Xero was surprised by the power of his creation. One of the Crimson humanoids fired a gun at a wall. Another portal opened. This was a portal into limbo. Everyone looked in. They saw Raymond standing over Requiem, holding a sword over his head. Neither seemed to notice the portal. "Hey! Requiem! Watch out! Behind you!" Yelled Mariox as Raymond brought the sword down onto Requiem's head.

"NOOOOOOO!!" Yelled the group. Raymond heard them and turned to see the giant Crimson army. Raymond started running around in circles screaming like a little girl while the army attacked him. They trampled him with their Crimson hoses, ran over him with their Crimson tanks, Stabbed him with their Crimson swords, shot him with their Crimson guns, until they were sure he was dead. He might not be affected by crimson anymore, but it was enough to kill anyone. Even Raymond. "Yay! More overkill!" implied Mariox. "Wait," said Nan, "that wasn't the only one."

Then the ground started shaking. Trillions upon trillions of spambots made their way out of the ground. The shaking caused the portal to open wider. "I thought I sabotaged the factory!" Yelled Xero. "Idiots," said one of the Raymond clones, "Did you really think I would have only one factory?!"

"JRFD, Call Runouw." commanded Xero.
JRFD tries. "I can't. there's no connection."
"What?!" replied Xero.
"Looking for this?" asked one of the Raymond clones. He points to one of the factories. The cellular tower is on top of the factory. JRFD uses his Awesome Stare to look closer. On the top, he sees Runouw, tied to the tower. "Runouw's up there." he says to the rest of the group.
"We have to save him!" Replied Xero.
"The tower's very unstable. It's only safe for one person to be on at a time. Who here's the lightest?"
"I am. Let me go up." Said a voice coming from behind. The group turns around and sees Bread. "Let me go." Repeated Bread, "You guys stay here and help the Crimson army fight Raymond."

Bread leaves for the tower, while something odd happens with the spambots. They seem to grow bigger until they match the height of the Crimson army. "We're outnumbered." implied Master. "Well duh." replied Mariox.

And so the battle in limbo began. Crimson army + Runouw.com members vs. Spambot army + Raymond Clones. Even with their epic extraterrestrial powers, will the Crimson army be any match for the massive and now just as powerful (and maybe more) spambot and Raymond clone armies?
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby AwesomeJRFD » June 18th, 2011, 2:59 pm

We've got a title format:

The Raymond Wars
The Power of Crimson
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby NanTheDark » June 18th, 2011, 3:22 pm

Wow.

JSX's Crimson is way too overpowered :awe:
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby Master1.0 » June 18th, 2011, 3:51 pm

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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby JSlayerXero » June 18th, 2011, 4:02 pm

Yeah, Crimson is overpower, I admit. But it was mostly a way to cheaply form mass. Once Red Water was introduced, totally different level of mind-rape. Still, even normal Crimson could cover Earth if you have enough of it.
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The Raymond Wars: Chapters 15+

Postby JSlayerXero » June 18th, 2011, 4:11 pm

Chapter 15: It can't be
All the meanwhile, Xero went on to heal/revive. Requiem as fast as possible. It was going smoothy...

Back in Limbo...

Real Raymond: Damn, I can't believe they took down my perfect clone... Well, at least I've found a way... to destroy their precious red water supply!!!
Spambot: Raymond, we`ve Runouw captured. Explosives are set up around the tower he's tied to. If anybody dares him rescue, they will blown be up, along Runouw with!
Real Raymond: PERFECT!!! Now, to finish the device to make the red water backfire. It will make crimson rain on the members, giving us the upper hand, and the rule over the city!

The Tower...

Bread: Well, I guess this is it.
Master1.0 I hope Bread can really do this. Wait... What`s sticking out of the ground? ♥♥♥♥!!! BREAD! DON'T GO ANY FURTHER!

It`s too late. Bread steps on a land mine, causing a chain reaction of explosions around the tower. The tower is falling; Bread is nothing but blood and guts, and our leader is about to die as well. I can't watch anymore.

JSX: NO!

He throws a vile of red water at the tower, but Runouw isn`t saved. Instead, the red water`s power has turned Runouw into crimson, and it somehow makes his body discentegrate into the air, never to be seen again.

Master + MarioX64: What the ♥♥♥♥ just happened?!?!
JSX: I... Don`t know...
Suyo: JSX, do you realize what you did?!
JSX: No... I`ve experimented with the matter a thousand times... How did it happen?
Raymond Clone: I can tell you. But only if you relinquish the member there. Master1.0.

Master1.0: No... I`m not coming, you ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥!
Raymond Clone: Well then. *the clone is in front of me in what seems like an instant, and he drags me back to Limbo.

Limbo:

Raymond: Got him?
Clone: Of course sir.
Raymond: Good. Give him the SKule torturing. We'll send him back mad; the ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ will never know what hit them.

Chapter 16: Insanity
Cue the epic music:

"This can't be possible..." Xero said in despair, "GrrrrrRRRRRRR. RAYMOOOOOOOOONNNND!"

All the Crimson covering the Earth headed inside Xero.

"You are going to get it!" His voice echoed, but it sounded as if someone else was speaking with him in unison.

"Requiem, do you have a map with the locations of the factories?"
"Sure do, your here." Requiem handed Xero the map and pointed to their current location.
"Thank you, Raymond has been two steps from hell lately. I say it'd be a nice Idea to make him walk forward a bit more."

Xero, went off, leaving a large trail off Crimson in his wake.

"I've got a bad feeling about this," Mariox said, "Xero isn't the one to go head hunting. He might be going insane."
Suyo looked worried, "Could it be, could Raymond have had this entire thing planned out?"

A spam-bot rushed up to Raymond, "Raymond, sir, two of our factories are dead."
"WHAT!?" Raymond was speechless.
"Yes, they are going one-by-one. And fast."
"Impossible!"

Just then, Xero busted through the wall. His eyes had an evil look to them, and they were glowing Blood Red. He was surrounded by a Crimson glow. He was slowly losing it. "Raymond, it's time you understand what Hell really is."

Master 1.0 was rescued earlier, but he still could not believe his eyes. "Xero, what the-- what happened to you?"
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Re: The Raymond Wars

Postby AwesomeJRFD » June 18th, 2011, 4:31 pm

Chapter 17: The Chase

Xero raised his hands up in the air. The base started turning into Crimson. Raymond smiled and mumbled to himself, "Yes. It's working."


"WHAT ARE YOU SMILING ABOUT! I'M ABOUT TO KILL YOU AND THE REST OF THOSE PITIFUL THINGS YOU CALL SPAMBOTS!!" Yelled Xero. The ground started shaking. giant pillars of solid Crimson started raising up from the ground.

The spambot transformed into a helicopter and Raymond jumped inside. The helicopter took off.

"WHERE ARE YOU GOING?!" Screamed Xero with enough force that the ground shook, "GET BACK HERE SO I CAN TORTURE YOU LIKE YOU DID TO ALL MY FRIENDS!"
"I'm going to finish what I started!" yelled Raymond while laughing. He headed for the portal back to Runouw.com.

Xero extended his arms out like wings, and he transformed into a Crimson hawk. He flew after Raymond. He opened his mouth and fired Crimson lasers at him.

The helicopter transformed into a jet, and flew toward the portal at supersonic speed, with Xero hot on its tail.

They flew over the battlefields of the Crimson army and spambots. Surprisingly, the Crimson army was losing. While he flew over, it started raining Crimson over the battle field, exploding when it touched a spambot and growing into new humanoids when it touched the ground.

Raymond was almost at the portal. Xero was closing in on him. If Raymond got through the portal, then almost all hope of saving Runouw.com will be lost. They approached the portal, faster and faster, Raymond dodging Xero's laser beams. Xero was just about to hit Raymond when they flew through the portal.

Chapter 18: More Insanity
Luckily, the portal somehow rejects Raymond`s copter! The plane crashes back down into the mill, and Raymond uses his power to merely float down to safety.

Raymond: Meh, at least I`ve worked things out. You see...

I`ve worked out an entire plan. I created the device that forced the red water to backfire. That is why Runouw was killed by its power. My device.
JSX: You sick ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥. What do you aim for by doing this?
Raymond: Why it`s quite simple. I don`t just want to rule Runouw.com. I want the world to be mine!
JSX: I can`t believe what happened to you. What happened to the Raymond that made firiends wi-
Raymond: SHUT IT!!! Now, take your friend and leave.
JSX: You would never say something like that. What the hell did you do to Master?
Raymond: *snickers* Isn`t it oblivious? What did I do to your old friend that made him kill himself?
JSX: No... You...

JSX is up to Raymond in seconds, and slashes. The fake discintegrated into nothing.

Raymonds: Where am I? *Raymond laughs* FIND ME IF YOU CAN!!!
JSX: Where the hell is he?!
???: Runouw.com, of course.
JSX: Master?

Driven mad from SKule, I sprint from out of nowhere. Raymonds Crimson sword is in my hand, and I slash madly in a desperate attempt to kill JSX.

Master1.0: What`s the matter my friend? Scared?
JSX: Master! SNAP OUT OF IT!!!

It`s sadly no use. I can`t control my actions still, and I start swiping at JSX again.

JSX: Master! Please, it`s me!

But I still can`t help myself. Can anything really keep me under control, or am I stuck in my mad condition?
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The Raymond Wars: Chapter 19+

Postby JSlayerXero » June 18th, 2011, 4:49 pm

Chapter 19: Time Distortion
JSX dodges Master's attacks.
"Sorry Master, but it's the only way." Xero encased Master in Crimson, stopping him from moving entirely. "Seems I've regained some of my sanity back, but at what cost?"
Cue the epic music:

Xero thought for a moment on what to do when got back to Runuowopolis. "That's it, that's the only way." Xero rushed outside the portal, disaster ensues as in spite of all the Crimson still lying around, Runouw.com was losing the battle. Xero ran back to his lab. Chaos appeared as the spam-bots were flooding the place. "Hmm, I could use a few spare parts." Xero started ripping everything into useable pieces. He then started building a machine out of spam-bot parts and regular Crimson. Spam-bots attempt to interfere, but Xero was too powerful for them. "Done, now, to use it." Xero headed back to Runouwopolis, the place is nearly annihilated. "Here goes nothing."

He fired up the machine. A translucent pink barrier glowed over the wrecked city. It slowly reverts back to a previous time, far enough for it all to be rebuilt. People rose up again, Runouw was rebuilt, and so was Bread, and all the others. Master was back in his right mind, and out of Crimson. Raymond couldn't believe his eyes.

"YOU! That should be IMPOSSIBLE!"

"It is," Xero responded, "Normally. Also, you can now feel the full effects, of all the Crimson I've zapped into you. Raymond was suddenly encased in Crimson.

"NO! IMPOSSIBLE! I. AM. IM, MOR. TAL!" Raymond completely solidified into a Crimson-colored silhouette of what he used to be.

"Too bad, I won't be here, for, the... par... ty...." Xero collapsed. All the Red Water used cause him to lose health. Without Scarlet, Crimson, or anything but blood going through his body. Xero, died.

And this time, there would be no bringing him back anytime soon. As the entirety of his Crimson, and Scarlet reserves, were gone. They were totally, empty.

Chapter 20: Rewind
What? I'm normal again? How was Runouw.com restored? Am I hallucinating? I must. SKule had gotten the best of me, I must.

Time has rewound, but I haven`t found out yet. How did he- I gasp. The redo backfired. I watch as time fast forwards in front of me. There I am again, back in the crimson encasing.

JSX: Sorry Master, this is the only way. JSX falls dead to the ground, just like he did in the new past. Crimson had poisoned him.

I can`t even move. Madness has fallen upon me again. Can somebody help me?

Runouw.com...

JSX`s efforts had failed, and the city is back in ruins.

Suyo: Raymond! This will never succeed!
MarioX64: Suyo, grasp the truth already!

Limbo...

A Raymond clone approaches my crystal like structure. It ruptures the compound of the crimson and I am set free.

Master1.0: Thank you my kind master!
Clone: We need you in Runouw.com. We plan to have you get rid of the wretched Suyo.
Master1.0: Yes sir.

I am transported to Runouw.com. I can`t overcome the SKule. If somebody can help, it would be Suyo.

Runouw.com...

Suyo: Master!
Master1.0: THERE YOU ARE!
Suyo: Master, what are you...

Suyo nearly dodges a metal shuriken hidden in my pocket.

Suyo: Of course. Torture. SKule torture.

Suyo runs for me with a banhammer. It`s not operational, because he only means to try to cure me. I`m knocked unconscious, and several tests are done on me while I slumber.

Suyo: I believe he`s cured.
Aro: Geez... Master is in a mess.

I wake up. I no longer long to kill, and I feel normal.

Suyo: Okay, he definitely is.
Master1.0: Suyo... Thank you.

A spambot blows an entire fourth of the hospital off. It slowly wisps toward me, and malfunctions.

AwesomeJRFD: Suyo! God, where can we get help when we need it most?

Chapter 21: Awake
A Crimson soldier walked forward. "Master, do you remember the time reversal?

"What are you--- wait, yes I do, why?"

"Because it was not supposed to back fire as it destroyed the reversal device in the process."

"Wait, what do you mean?" JRFD put in?

"I saw Xero, he reversed several events, I lost my madness, but then it all re-happened, and he died instead," Master explained.

"This is bad," Suyo put in, "if that failed, then there should be a reason why."

The Crimson Soldier input, "His calculations show that it would've affected Limbo as Runouwopolis and Limbo are connected, like two alternate realities of a sort. In other words, the question is, what made it backfire. Unfortunately, we're running low on regular Crimson, and Red Water Crimson is very poisonous as opposed to normal Crimson, which actually heals unless it explodes."

"Hey question," JRFD asked, "can you make normal Crimson"

"It'd take some effort, but yes, we could," the Humanoid responded.

"Well then," Suyo interrupted, "If we can revive Xero without all the Red Water Crimson in his system, maybe he can cook up something. Should that fail, at least he has contacts that could probably help out."

"I should mention, "the Crimson replied, "He had a lot planned out, but he simply miscalculated how fast Raymond can work."

"Well, he tends to be isolated from people, but I can imagine he'd have a backup plan," JRFD put in.

"Let's just hope his lab is still around," Master put in, "those spam-bots have been gung-ho for 15 hours now."
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