The Raymond Wars Discussion Topic

[AwesomeJRFD]

Chapter 18 was already posted… but with a different title.

[JSlayerXero]

Mine has a few grammar fixes. Other than that, I agree. I really hate the fact we each have our own title, and constantly ninja each other.

Edit: Man, Raymond Wars is getting uploaded to the portal so slowly. It only has 4 chapters submitted an we've ALREADY finished NINETEEN chapters of the sequel. We really should use this topic to end it soon. I reckon we could use the search to revive me as a new plot device or something. With hardships etc. being another thing.

[AwesomeJRFD]

Mine has a few grammar fixes. Other than that, I agree. I really hate the fact we each have our own title, and constantly ninja each other.

I agree. The person who writes the chapter should be able to post it here. We should also discuss our ideas here before we submit the chapters.

Man, Raymond Wars is getting uploaded to the portal so slowly. It only has 4 chapters submitted an we've ALREADY finished NINETEEN chapters of the sequel. We really should use this topic to end it soon.

Yeah. I upload a new one every time the previous one has been approved. Should I submit them all at once? We just need the Rescuing Runouw chapter, the Raymonds Secret Weapon chapter (the Crimson controller), the Making the weapon turn against him chapter, the Spambot Reprogramming chapter (where the spambots turn against the Raymond clone except one clone who is good), and the Aftermath chapter (where the Crimson army goes back to their dimension and Xero comes back or there's a funeral and stuff). That's how I think the story should go. You guys can share your own ideas too.
Also, new chapter:

Chapter 22: Plans for a Rescue
JRFD: "Suyo, There's something I forgot to tell you."
Suyo: "What is it?"
"Back in limbo, I saw Runouw. I think he's still alive."
"Impossible! He's dead!"
"I know what I saw. We have to go back."
"It's too dangerous! It's like a war zone in there!"
"It is a war zone. With the whole Crimson vs. Spambot thing going on in there, but it's the only way to save Runouw!"
"Remember what happened last time someone tried to save him? We can't risk it."
"So you're going to let the founder of our city die just because you're afraid that you'll step on some landmine or something?! Well I'm going back whether you like it or not."
"You are very brave. If you succeed, I'll reward you."
JRFD runs off toward the portal without saying anything more. Suyo turns around to Master.
Master: "I'm going with JRFD. Runouw might know something about what happened with the time reversal."
Suyo: "Are you sure? I thought you never wanted to go back there ever again."
"I'm sure. It's to dangerous for JRFD to go alone."
Master ran off to catch up with JRFD.

[Master1.0]

Chapter 23:
Awesome's New Powers

Play music until end of chapter:
Limbo...

Master1.0: Fuuuuu...
AwesomeJRFD: Ouch!
Master1.0: Damn... It is a war zone...

Both Awesome and I stare at the scenery. Crimson warriors are beating the crap out of the spambots. Sadly, they are producing faster than the crimson warriors can fight. It seems the've been drained of energy!

AwesomeJRFD: Jesus Christ...
Master1.0: Grrr...

Negative reactions from the treatment make me give in. I fight off trying to attack Awesome, but just barely.

Master1.0: Awesome... Get... Out...
AwesomeJRFD: Huh?
Master1.0: Leave before... I try... to kill you.

Awesome runs out of my sight. I can't well be trying to kill him in the middle of a war.

Runouw.com...
The Lab:

Suyo: Well, if there is anything left here, I better scavenge for it.

Suyo looks everywhere for some material. He finds a note I had on the table I made the last time I visited the lab.

Fire Techniques

1 oz. vinegar
2 gm. sodium
5 cp. water
1 awesome face
Sunlight
12 oz. calcium

Suyo: What does this note mean?
Spambot: I fo- *Suyo slashes the spambot's head off*
Suyo: Damn. These things are everywhere.

Limbo...
The Battlefield

Awesome has apparently really been studying in the lab. He puts gloves on ans snaps his fingers. The fingers creates a spark and he blows on it. This pretty much creates a flamethrower, melting the spambot until it's nothing but hot metal.

AwesomeJRFD: HOW DO YOU LIKE ME NOW RAYMOND?!?!

He throws what is unmistakibly a ball of crimson. Awesome snaps his fingers and turns it into a grenade. Spambots are so close to each other it causes a chain reaction of explosions. About a hunderd thousand spambots had exploded due to it.

AwesomeJRFD: Damn, I'm awesome...
Raymond Clones: Really?

About a thousand clones surround Awesome. Can he really handle all of them?

Limbo
Secret Bunker:

Raymond: And the real Runouw is strapped to a table in front of a table in front of me. Now, let's send you back mad, shall we?
Runouw: ...

[AwesomeJRFD]

Chapter 24: Return of a Friend
Mariox jumps in the middle with Awesome and uses his spinning fireball attack to destroy the clones. With Mariox's help, they were able to make there way to the building where Runouw was being held. "Where were you?" Asked JRFD when they got into a safe area.
"I was captured when the fake Runouw was tied to the signal tower. You know it was just a trap to lead you into the minefield, right?" replied Mariox.
"Not until it was too late. Poor Bread."
"There's something I should tell you."
"what is it?"
"When I was captured, I saw Raymond. He had this weird device that controlled Crimson. I think that's what's draining the Crimson army's strength."
"Do you know where he got it?"
"I think he stole it from a captured Crimson soldier."
"Did you see Runouw?"
"Yeah. I think Raymond's gonna give him the SKule torture."
"Oh, no. We have to find a way in, fast!"
"There's a hidden entrance behind the big rock around back."
The two make their way around to the back of the building. JRFD uses his awesome strength to move the rock to the side. "How did you know about this entrance?" asked JRFD.
"That's how I escaped. It's pretty obvious from the inside." replied Mariox.
"Wait, Runouw is two people. Was the one on the tower the other one?"
"No. I told you already. It was a dummy. The other one must still be somewhere in the city."
The two crawl through the secret entrance toward the inside, where they see a spambot carrying Runouw through a door on the other side of the room.

[Master1.0]

Chapter 25 id ready, only I can`t post it her because I`m on my DSi right now, and it has no copy + paste function -_-

Not to mention it takes about 2 minutes to properly load, even though I always clear out my history and I have strond internet connection. V-V

[AwesomeJRFD]

Alright. I'll do it for you then.

Chapter 25: Problem
AwesomeJRFD: Shut up for a minute.
MarioX64: Why? Wait, I hear it too...

Basement...

Spambot: Raymond, 2 fools their made way in.
Raymond: Damn... It seems they were a moment to late!
Runouw: Argh! Take this damned blindfold off!
Raymond: Not now, now shut up! *Raymond duct tapes Runouw`s mouth shut to block out his cries of pain*
Spambot: I`m sending waves of spambots to take care of those ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥.
Raymond: Good, I need just a little more time okay? Also, Master should be of help. I`ve sensed his presence here.

Basement Maze...

AwesomeJRFD: What? This place looks completely different!
MarioX64: Damn... you`re right.
???: Awesome... He-lp!

Limbo seems to have had a negative effect on me. My torture seems to kick into effect when I make way into Limbo.

MarioX64: Master?
AwesomeJRFD: Mario, run. He can`t take the negative effect of Limbo anymore.
Master1.0: Please... Leave before I... Attack ag-ain...
AwesomeJRFD: Just run! Worry about Master later! We need to get Runouw first, before he really gets it!

The man hunt has restarted. Spambots start pouring out of hallways as our current heroes attempt to crack the secret of this maze.

Back ar Runopolis...

Suyo: DAMMIT!!!
Aro: What`s wrong now?
Suyo: I completely forgot... Master will go back into his crazed mood whenever he returns to where he was tortured. Mario and Awesome are in danger. It`s already bad enough that 80% of the city is nothing but dust, and now more members are dying by the second!

The Basment...

Raymond: I`ve finally done it... Runouw is the strongest of all Runouw.com. Now, he does my bidding!

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Yeah. We should really be wrapping up the story now. For Part 1 in the story portal, should I keep posting chapters one at a time like I've been doing, or should I post them all at once and wait for them to be approved?

[Master1.0]

Y`know, we really should end part 2 off here. We have 25 chapters, and Runouw has finally fallen under Raymond`s control. Inform JSX, Awesome, and everybody that is contributing to story.

Part 3 will start when somebody posts a new chapter. Sound good?

[AwesomeJRFD]

Chapter 26: Light and Darkness
Meanwhile...

Nan opened his eyes.
-Where am I?-He said. He looked around and saw nothing but darkness around him. Nan ran for some time trying to find something, but to no avail.
-Am I dead? What happened?
Nan couldn't figure it out. He started to get scared.
-What is this place? What happened to me? I wish someone would come and answer me!
Suddenly, a shadowy figure appeared.
-Who are you?-Nan asked to the shadow.
-My name is Umbra. I'm the source of all darkness in the universe. I'm the one who gave you your power.
-You...?

Nan then remembered that night...
He was really sad that night. He was sad because he had no friends. Everyone is school did nothing but make fun of him for not being like the rest. And that night he just couldn't resist it. He started to cry. Cry and scream to the four winds.
-Why am I like this? Why am I so different?
Then suddenly, everything went dark. He started to float and spin in a tornado of dark energy. And he heard a voice say:
-Let the darkness in your heart become power... power you will use for the well-being of the people...
And for the first time, he released his darkness in a explosion, what he later called a Dark Shockwave.

-When you got the power to control the darkness inside you, your confidence increased, and you managed to have friends and have a better life. Now your friends are in danger. The entire universe is in danger. You must help them overcome this threat.
-...what is Raymond?-Nan asked.
-Raymond is a being made of pure Darkness. He isn't even human. All he desires is chaos and destruction. He will bring unbalance to the universe, and we can't let this happen.
-How can we defeat him?
-Raymond is a unbalanced being. To stop him, we must bring balance to him.
-How do we do that?
-Raymond once had a balance of light and darkness inside him, just like every human being. However, a strange event caused him to split into two. A light side and a dark side.
-You mean... we need Requiem?
-Yes. They must once again become one. That is the only way to bring balance back into the universe.

Umbra then created a strange looking sphere of darkness.
-Use this portal to return to Earth. Find Requiem and use your power to fuse them together.
-And how do I do that?-Nan asked.
-You will know how.
-Ok...

Nan went to the portal. However, before leaving, he asked:
-Umbra, why did you give me my powers?
-For there to be balance, there must be light and darkness. Across the universe there are others like you, able to control light or darkness. The darkness in your heart, combined with your good nature, made you a good candidate to help keep the universe balanced. You are very special, Nan. You're necessary. Now go.

Nan jumped into the portal to return to Earth.

The planet was completely ravaged. The cities were destroyed. Many corpses on the streets.

Then Nan began to wonder how was he going to find Requiem.
But suddenly, he noticed something.
His power had increased. He could feel the power running through his body.
And he noticed he could also feel the power inside the people around him.
He decided he would use his new powers to find Requiem. He felt a strong power of light, many miles to the west of his location. He started to run in that direction to find him.

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Y`know, we really should end part 2 off here. We have 25 chapters, and Runouw has finally fallen under Raymond`s control. Inform JSX, Awesome, and everybody that is contributing to story.

Actually I have something epic planned out, in which we can finish by Chapter 30 (if it goes well).

So a summary of what I have planned:

Spoiler: show

Runouw comes out and attacks Me and Mariox in the maze. We try to help him out, but it's no use. Me and Mariox trying to survive attacks from the crazed Runouw and Master while Raymond is watching and laughing. Suyo runs in and tries to warn them about Master, but he sees it's too late. He runs back and gets the other Runouw (Runouw is actually two people on one account). The other Runouw attacks Raymond, and they fight. JRFD and Mariox escape the maze and find Nan with Requiem. They tell him what happened and he uses his darkness to hold Master and bring him back out. Suyo promises to never send him to limbo again unless he does something really bad. JSX is in the hospital back in Runouw.com. Nan, Mariox, Requiem and I go look for Raymond. The real Raymond, hoping to find that Crimson controlling device. They see him fighting Runouw on the roof of the building. They go up, but they encounter the crazed Runouw. After a long speech about good and evil, light and darkness, they bring him back to sanity. They climb to the roof where they battle Raymond. Raymond threatens to use the Crimson controller on them. He kills all but Requiem. For some reason he just couldn't kill him. Raymond uses the device to destroy the Crimson army in one big wave. The spambots close in on them. Requiem runs at Raymond, grabs the Crimson controller, and runs away. He gets shot by a spambot, and is knocked to the ground. Raymond then shoots him. Requiem is almost dead. With his last ounce of strength, he pushes the button, reverses time, back to when Xero reversed time, back to when Raymond was solidified to a Crimson silhouette of how he used to be. Requiem is now healed. He presses another button on the controller preventing the anti-reversal. Runouw comes and smashes the now-crimsonified Raymond into tiny Crimson dust. Nan wonders how Requiem can exist without Raymond (foreshadowing of part 3). End.

Now we just need to imply that in the story.

[Master1.0]

Raymond Wars Part 3
Saving Runouw.com At Last...

Chapter 1:
Runouw Gives Over. . .

Basement... (Win soundtrack: )

Raymond: Now Runouw, have a look around you. The exact opposite of this place is what you mast destroy.
Runouw: ...N- Yes.
Raymond: YES! I FINALLY DID IT!!! RUNOUW.COM WILL BE MY NEW EMPIRE!!!

Awesome and Mario burst into the room. The have completed the maze, but what stands before the is far worse than they could ever imagine. Raymond has done it. He now has taken control of Runouw using the SKule torturing.

AwesomeJRFD: No... It can't be! RAYMOND!!!
MarioX64: It's not possible... Runouw?! Please, say something positive or something! This a complete mistake!
Raymond: ...But it's not. Runouw, attack.
Both: NO!!!

Runouw easily takes down both of the futiles with not a single scratch on him.

Runouw.com...

???: Hybrog, let's get through the portal before it closes!
Hybrog: Okay, okay Star king!
Star king: Hey, he's my friend and I need to get him out of there. Master still fails to keep himself together in Limbo. You know what happened!
Hybrog: I know... Now, you have defense, right?
Star king: Of course I do! 2 of JSX's finest crimson swords are in my hands, for the love of god!
Hybrog: Okay, ready.
Star king: Yes. I am.

Star king and Hybrog step into the portal in order to retrieve me, but sadly cannot risk an attempt to rescue Runouw. He must've been saved already, or tortured. Sadly, they know the answer was oblivious...

Meanwhile, Blab and Suyo have a discussion in Forum 23.

Blablob: Suyo, listen to me! Somebody more experienced needs to go in there! *Nan busts the door open*
Suyo: Man, the way Runouw.com is, I don't really care if regular members get in here. *sigh*
NanTheDark: Suyo. Blab. We have a problem. Nan whispers so nobody but Blablob and Suyo can hear him. ~~~ ~~~~~~~ ~~ ~~~~ ~ ~~~.
Both: Dear god...
NanThDark: Wait! Listen, we need to find Requiem! He is the answer to our problem! (2 + 2 = Requiem )
Suyo: But he's dead! We can't possibly get him back unless we get back JSlayer!
NanTheDark: Sadly, I know. Now, if I remember correctly, members killed have their bodies moved to the Graveyard. Now, we have to find his grave. We need to find JSX's grave, and retrieve his body before it rots into the Earth.
Suyo: You know how I feel about digging up other people's graves, you know.
Blablob: SUYO!!! He is required if we ever want to win the war! Runouw is already under Raymond's control, dammit!!!
Suyo: Sigh, okay... But if this place wasn't a war zone, you would have been back in Limbo yourself...

Graveyard...

Hundreds of spambots surround the graveyard, along with about a hundred of Raymond's finest clones. The spambots sadly look really powerful; they must be high class as well. How will they ever retrieve JSX's body?

The Bunker...

Raymond: It's sad... You idiots just don't learn, do you?

Mario and Awesome are dead on the floor.

Raymond: Now, thank you for your help Runouw. If you keep doing what I ask, I don't have to do it again.
Runouw: Of course, my dear Raymond...

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Chapter 26: Light and Darkness

Y`know, we really should end part 2 off here. We have 25 chapters, and Runouw has finally fallen under Raymond`s control. Inform JSX, Awesome, and everybody that is contributing to story.

Actually I have something epic planned out, in which we can finish by Chapter 30 (if it goes well).

So a summary of what I have planned:

Spoiler: show

Runouw comes out and attacks Me and Mariox in the maze. We try to help him out, but it's no use. Me and Mariox trying to survive attacks from the crazed Runouw and Master while Raymond is watching and laughing. Suyo runs in and tries to warn them about Master, but he sees it's too late. He runs back and gets the other Runouw (Runouw is actually two people on one account). The other Runouw attacks Raymond, and they fight. JRFD and Mariox escape the maze and find Nan with Requiem. They tell him what happened and he uses his darkness to hold Master and bring him back out. Suyo promises to never send him to limbo again unless he does something really bad. JSX is in the hospital back in Runouw.com. Nan, Mariox, Requiem and I go look for Raymond. The real Raymond, hoping to find that Crimson controlling device. They see him fighting Runouw on the roof of the building. They go up, but they encounter the crazed Runouw. After a long speech about good and evil, light and darkness, they bring him back to sanity. They climb to the roof where they battle Raymond. Raymond threatens to use the Crimson controller on them. He kills all but Requiem. For some reason he just couldn't kill him. Raymond uses the device to destroy the Crimson army in one big wave. The spambots close in on them. Requiem runs at Raymond, grabs the Crimson controller, and runs away. He gets shot by a spambot, and is knocked to the ground. Raymond then shoots him. Requiem is almost dead. With his last ounce of strength, he pushes the button, reverses time, back to when Xero reversed time, back to when Raymond was solidified to a Crimson silhouette of how he used to be. Requiem is now healed. He presses another button on the controller preventing the anti-reversal. Runouw comes and smashes the now-crimsonified Raymond into tiny Crimson dust. Nan wonders how Requiem can exist without Raymond (foreshadowing of part 3). End.

Now we just need to imply that in the story.

Nah, part 2 is getting seriously big... Besides, my new chapter pretty much cancelled out a bit of that thought. Now, the members are trying to find a way to REVIVE Requiem. Sadly, they would need help from JSX. The must now go on a mission to retrieve his body from the graveyard.