The Raymond Wars Discussion Topic

[NanTheDark]

To stop Raymond, we must somehow fuse him with Requiem (that's what my part said).
Maybe after that, someone else decides to separate them again (another sequel?)

[AwesomeJRFD]

Chapter 28: Grave Digging.
The three made their way to the Graveyard, only to see the massive spambot army. Suyo and Blab held off the spambots while Nan looked for the right grave. Upon looking, he saw four new additions with familiar names. Xero, Requiem, Mariox, and JRFD. They expected Xero and Requiem, but they didn't expect to see JRFD and Mariox dead. He started digging. In about ten minutes, he had all four unearthed. The spambots were surrounding them. there was only one way to get out. The "Jump to Forum" option. They all selected forum 23 and pressed "Go". They teleported out of the graveyard and back to safety.

Blab and Suyo laid the bodies down on four separate tables. Suyo put metal caps on all them. They were hooked up to this huge radiating machine. What is that? asked Nan. You'll see. Get behind the window if you don't want cancer. There's going to be a lot of radiation. Suyo started typing in lines of code.The machine powered up. He pressed a button, and there was a huge flash of red light. Nan felt the power surge through him. He could tell it used Crimson as a power source. He realized it must've belonged to Xero. The light faded, and he could see them sit up on the tables. Suyo came from behind the window and took of the caps. They were alive, and perfectly healthy. "Mariox, JRFD, what did you see?" asked Suyo.
"What? You're not surprised that four people just came back from the dead?!" asked Nan.
"We've done it before. Mariox, JRFD, what did you see?" repeated Suyo. They both started talking at the same time. "Whoa," interrupted Suyo, "one at a time. You first, JRFD"
"It's Runouw. Raymond has him under his control." said JRFD.
"Which Runouw? Rob or Steven?"
"I dont know. I can't tell the difference."
"What about you, Mariox, do you know which one?"
"I don't know either," replied Mariox.
"Is there anything else we we need to know?" asked Suyo.
"Yeah. Raymond had this weird device that controls Crimson." said Mariox.
"Well that explains the reversal of my time reversal." Interrupted Xero.
Nan turned to Requiem. "We need your help," he said "you're the only one who can help us." Nan explained everything that had happened to them.
"Does anyone know where the other Runouw is?" asked JRFD.
"Let's check his house."
The seven ran across the city, dodging spambots and stuff, to Runouw's house. When they got there, they found a note:

Dear Rob,

I'm going on vacation until the 23^rd.
I cannot tell you where I'm going in this note, in case someone else reads it.
If I'm not back by the 23^rd, call me.

Your brother,
Steve.

"So that was Rob who Raymond captured." Said JRFD
"Why wouldn't he tell him where he was going?" Asked Mariox.
"Runouw has always been a little secretive." replied Suyo.
"Raymond has gone too far," said JSX. "We have to stop him."
The seven jumped back to site discussion, where the portal was opened. They entered limbo.

Chapter 29: Balance
Raymond saw them. He was angry. Very angry. Right away, some of the spambots turned away from the Crimson army and focused on the group. Suyo took out his banchainsaw. "This is going to be a long night." he said. JRFD took out 128 of them with his awesomeness. Blab gave the spambots the evil eye and they malfunctioned. Mariox used his spinning fireball attack. JSX took out his custom-made Crimson sniper-rifle and started shooting. Nan, as he was twice as powerful as before, used his darkness powers to destroy hundreds of spambots. Requiem touched the spambots and made them malfunction. The battle raged on, as the seven made their way to Raymond. The seven broke through the wall into Raymond's base. Hybrog and Star king were already there. They were too late. Master was dead on the ground. Raymond looked surprised, but he took out a round coin-shaped object. He pressed a button on it and Xero's gun exploded, severely injuring him. "That's the Crimson controller!" Yelled Mariox before he was shot by Raymond again. Hybrog shot lasers at Raymond, who deflected them with the controller back at Hybrog, killing him. Star king used his star power to fire a gigantic blast at Raymond, who dodged. The blast hit the pillar that was supporting the roof above SK, and he got crushed. Suyo attacked Raymond with his banchainsaw but missed, and Raymond stabbed him. "Five down, four to go." he mumbled, and shot Blab. Nan used his darkness shield to block the bullets, but Raymond turned the shield into Crimson. It shattered into a hundred pieces, which all stabbed him. Raymond called in Runouw, who tackled JRFD (Who was deflecting Raymond's bullets with his awesomeness), and stabbed him with a Crimson knife. Only Requiem was left.

Requiem ran at Raymond, dodging bullets. he was shot a couple times, but he kept running. He had to achieve balance in the universe. He ran, Raymond made a Crimson shield, but Requiem jumped, did a backflip, and kicked a hole through the shield, all in slow motion. Raymond kept shooting, spambots fired their lasers, but Requiem dived in midair and hit Raymond head on. There was an explosion. The Crimson army, the spambots, and the Raymond clones looked up. They were witnessing a power even greater then Crimson itself. The power of balance.

There was a sound like nothing they heard before. A sound so loud that the ground shook. Power was flowing at a greater scale then any could have imagined. The two forms combined to make one. Requiem was pure good, Raymond was pure evil. The collision brought the universe in balance again. Now they were one. This new person was called Rayquiem. A perfect balance between good and evil.

The Crimson controller was destroyed in the process, causing time to reverse again. The Rayquiem was protected from the reversal, and they were still one when it went back to normal. The group was back. Everyone was healed. Runouw was no longer crazy. The universe was now in balance. The events are still remembered, though. The events of a future which will now never come. A future in which evil has almost prevailed. Umbra visited Nan again that night.

Nan: "You again?"
Umbra: "Yes. you have succeeded. Raymond and Requiem are now one. There is balance to the universe. I hope…"
"What do you mean 'I hope'? Are you not sure?"
"No. Evil always finds a way to knock the universe off its balance."
"Do you think, that there's another Raymond somewhere?"
"Well, your universe isn't the only universe."
"What do you mean?"
"Ever wondered where the Crimson army came from?"
Then Nan was sent back to his room. He thought about what Umbra said. About the possibilities of different universes.

Could there really be another Raymond capable of bringing as much destruction, or maybe even more, than this one had?

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I think this works as the ending for The Raymond Wars Part 2. For the Never-ending story however, something else will happen.

This was supposed to be the ending chapter, the conclusion of part 2, Maybe we can change it? I don't want to have written these whole chapters for nothing. Maybe the next Chapter can be for part 3.

Nah, part 2 is getting seriously big... Besides, my new chapter pretty much cancelled out a bit of that thought. Now, the members are trying to find a way to REVIVE Requiem. Sadly, they would need help from JSX. The must now go on a mission to retrieve his body from the graveyard.

Actually, Chapter 29 was written as the last. It won't get any bigger after this. And besides, My chapters work perfectly with yours.

Let's please not start an argument about this. We'll just end Part 2 here.

Now, lets start part three.

[Master1.0]

I think we ca definetly call this a part, amirite?

Sooooo...
Does anybody go with the "seperate Requiem from Raymond" thing?

I want part 3 to be the finale, where a villan also manages to turn REQUIEM to a villan.

Something epic.

[AwesomeJRFD]

I think we ca definetly call this a part, amirite?

So you're agreeing that we end here and start Part 3 next?

Does anybody go with the "seperate Requiem from Raymond" thing?

I want part 3 to be the finale, where a villan also manages to turn REQUIEM to a villan.

Something epic.

How about the Raymond from the alternate universe separates them and turns Requiem into a villain. Let's try to make sure everyone's ideas are used well.

[Master1.0]

Okay, part 3 has officially started!

I`m sadly on the DSi again, so somebody else needs to post the first chapter.

And if I`m not lazy, I may just make a pic for the title *cough*ifimnotlazy*cough*

Besides, it`s about 10:30 P.M. here in South Bend, and I really need some sleep.

(I apologize if there are a bunch of spelling errors, but my DSi isn`t well calibrated, so I often misplace letters, and sometimess it adds extra characters. If anybody can fix it in my new chapter, I`d really appreciate it!)

[AwesomeJRFD]

The Raymond Wars
Part: 3
The Epic Finale




Chapter 1: Uneasiness
It's been 3 months... Balance is now kept. Runopolis is still being rebuilt. Raymond is now known as Rayquiem; Requiem being the light half of him. Things aren't over, sadly. Everything isn't maintained for long...

Runopolis,
Demonik's NEW Tavern...

Rayquiem: Hmm... Things have really changed since I turned on you.
Star king: Meh, get used to it man. This place gets better, MOST days.
Master1.0: Hey Star!
Star king: Sup Master? You know, this the longest Runouw.com has been peaceful! It's because we did it. Saved you, Ray.

The tavern starts shaking. A small tremor has shaken the members of Runopolis a tad. Ruouw.com has never had an earthquake. Ever.

Limbo…

Everything in Limbo is a mess of crimson. No members have gone back in the past 3 months. Something tell us the war got the idiots shaken, and tried their best to stay out of trouble. We sadly didn't expect a certain something yet. A broken factory still stands. The crimson has finally broken, and a Raymond clone works its way out of the mess.

Clone: Our Master must come back. I'm the perfect clone. I will get him back! Requiem, you'll pay!!!

The ground tremors from his power, and this caused the slight quake back at the city, being the other side of Runouw.com.

Runouw.com,
Master1.0's Place:

God, I've never had more fun then today! *Ray walks in* Oh, hey Rayquiem.
Rayquiem: Master, does anything seem a little... odd?!
Master1.0: Of course! You're a good guy now!
Rayquiem: No… I don't mean that. I fell a strong sense of Deja vu…
Master1.0: Hmm… Are you sure?
Rayquiem: Never mind… I think I'll head home.

Raymond heads back to his place. The profile is still a tad dusty, seeing it was inactive for almost 3 years. He crashes on the couch from exhaustion.

Limbo,
Old Factory:

Perfect Clone: Yes, sleep Raymond. I will get you back, even if it means killing myself.

[JSlayerXero]

You know, when the Crimson army was introduced, they said Raymond "We are Crimson. Where is the evil one you call Raymond? He has destroyed our home. We will not tolerate this. He must die." Maybe we should build on that later in the story, cause otherwise that's a major plot-hole.

[AwesomeJRFD]

You know, when the Crimson army was introduced, they said Raymond "We are Crimson. Where is the evil one you call Raymond? He has destroyed our home. We will not tolerate this. He must die." Maybe we should build on that later in the story, cause otherwise that's a major plot-hole.

That's exactly why I was trying to introduce the concept of different universes at the end of part 1. I'm planning on doing something epic. It also explains how Raymond got his powers from the black hole. Do you think I would leave any plot holes in the stories I write?

[JSlayerXero]

Eh, true. We'll see where this goes. If I know us, FOUR people working on ONE story is going to end up with FOUR different takes on the same story, and thus we're going to be messing each other up. Ah well.

[AwesomeJRFD]

Eh, true. We'll see where this goes. If I know us, FOUR people working on ONE story is going to end up with FOUR different takes on the same story, and thus we're going to be messing each other up. Ah well.

That happened in Part 2, and it still ended well. The trick is to make sure everyones ideas are used in one way or another. That way nobody feels left out, and the story stilll has one plot-line.