Runouw's Library

[M M M M M MARIO]

EVER wondered, where Runouw is when He's seemingly nowhere?
Ever asked, WHERE THE HELL Runouw Makes his Games?
Ever Wondered, WHAT is Under Runouw City?

You'll find out...

NOW!

Runouw's Library

Chapter 1:The Keys: show

I wrote a Book about Runouw.

I a M M M M M MARIO, citizen of Runouw. I am living peacefully, writing a book about the town's mayor, Runouw.

MY STUDIES
Book by:M M M M M MARIO

Chapter 16:Runouw's Keys

Yes, another interesting thing about Runouw is that he has a special Key Chain,
full of keys.
I'll list them:
2 for his car,
1 for his office,
1 for the front door of the Runouw Tower,
1 for his wardrobe and.....
There's ONE KEY, that serves no known purpose.
It has the word "ROCK" carved in it, and it's VERY SMALL.
It's mysterious... .
No one knows what it does... .
But now...

I AM GOING TO FIND OUT ALL THIS INFORMATION.

Chapter 2:Runouw Tower: show

Chapter 2:Runouw Tower

I walked down the street. Fourinone Road, it was called...Not far away from my home.By the way, I live in a very strange place. In one of the only corners of the Profile part of the City.
Not many people can say that.
Returning to the previous walk, I got to the chat where -wierdly- was NO MOD.Nor any other Moderator.
The chat is a big room, with lots of space to sit. If you have a problem, want to talk, or just have to sit down- this is the best place to be.
When I arrived, there was 5 people in the chat.Or at least there SEEMED to be 5.
I said:
"Just for a second:Do you know anything about the "ROCK" key?"
Others:"No."
"Well,it's one of Runouw's keys."
"And......how...do you....know that?"-asked Zunar.
"ONE WORD: Research!"
"Oh."
I look around. No Staff in sight.
"I'm trying to break into Runouw Tower."-I said, quietly.
"WHAAAAAAAAAAAAAT?????!?!?!?!?!?!!??!?!?!?!!!?!?!"-shouted skjung.
"QUIET!"
"Okay."
"OMFGWTFBBQ!!!!"-said Master 1.0.
"Q-U-I-E-T!!!!!!!!"
MOD gets to the Chat.
"What are you doing?!"
"WE'RE TALKING."-I responded.
"About what?"
"Well......
...........
...........
...........
.....THINGS."
"SERIOUSLY.WHAT.ARE.YOU.TALKING.ABOUT."(RAEG FTW!)
"Runouw Tower."
Okay.Let me explain.Runouw Tower is Home to the News Channel, And the Runouw.com News.
It's one of the tallest buildings in the City. Runouw's Office is also there.
The back of it... well, Normal Users are rarely in there.There's one path to it, which is
really hard to find.It's the only way to Runouw when he's in there.
"Runouw Tower?"
"Yeah..."
"Well, I have to go.
...
...
...
...
OH! And BEWARE OF CHAIN CHOMP!"-left MOD.
"Beware of Chain Chomp? What does that mean?"-asked Star king.
DUH-NUH!

Chapter 3:BEWARE OF CHAIN CHOMP!: show

"Well, We'll find out..."-said Redlink, who was there the whole time, but he was hiding
very well.
"Whoa! How did YOU get in here without us noticing?"-said I.
"Got mah skills in hide 'n' seek, y'now."-he replied.
We walk outside, and what do we see?
A CRAPLOAD OF CHAIN CHOMPS RUNNING AROUND THE CITY.
Yeah, pretty much.
They came out of a building with a sign saying "CHAIN CHOMP HOUSE" above the door.
"I always wondered, what was behind that door."-said Master.
"Me too."-said I.
We laughed until suddenly I came up with an idea:"What if we catch them?"
"Let's GET'EM ALL!"-We said.
MUSICZ:


HOW MANY CHAIN CHOMPS WE FOUND:
RULES: 4
OFF-TOPIC: 20
GENERAL: 15
SMASH BROS. ENGINE: 9
OTHER GAMES: 7
FLASH PLAYER SHOWCASE: 12
MEDIA: 14
We Found:81
All:82


The Remaining one was running away from us.We followed it for very long, sometimes narrow,
sometimes wide streets,sometimes tall passages, sometimes little holes.We arrived at a
very tall building's back.

MUSICZ END HERE.

A Gate closed behind us.We saw a person with a moderator medal.
"HAHAHAHAHAHAHHAAA"-he said.
"What? You MODIFIED the gate?!?!!?!?"
">_< OMG THATS SO NOT FUNNY.
...
...
...Well, whatever. You're stuck in here FOREVER! HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAAAAAAAAAAA!!!!!!!"

Chapter 4: Key rain: show

A key chain fell from the top of the building. This accident has happened because the chain's owner sits in the window's frame.Little later he finds that it's not in his pocket, but that's not important right now.Halfway through the falling, the key... blew up.

*****

"What was that?" -said Zunar.
"Keys falling from the sky..."-said I.

Keys falling from the sky...
May not seein' it right...
Really wierd, why it happened,
I'm going to show wierd faces.


[refrain]Dancing in the key rain,
Grabbin' keys is a pain.[/refrain]

[refrain2]Keys fallin' from the sky...
Keys fallinfromtheskyyyyyyyyyyyyyy.[/refrain2]

[refrain][/refrain]

[refrain2][/refrain2]

(x2)

"O.O"-that was on the face of the others when I finished.
"Well, lookie what I got!"-With that, I showed them the key-to the back door of Runouw Tower.

[RedLink]

Is This your first story? If so then Good i guess. This was so short it was not funny. Also Chapter 16 to Chapter 2 o.o Try fixing the writing style and add some elements to your story like some humor. It was kind of dry reading this and I read it in 23 seconds. So Yeah... Fix it if you want better reviews I guess. 7.0/10
Also... WHY ME NO IN CHAT?

[M M M M M MARIO]

Is This your first story? If so then Good i guess. This was so short it was not funny. Also Chapter 16 to Chapter 2 o.o Try fixing the writing style and add some elements to your story like some humor. It was kind of dry reading this and I read it in 23 seconds. So Yeah... Fix it if you want better reviews I guess. 7.0/10
Also... WHY ME NO IN CHAT?

>_> There's a Book quoted in there.

so it's liek DAT.

I'll Add You in the Next CHAPTAHH!

And you don't have to say ANYTHING about the concept? >_>

[RedLink]

The Concept is interesting. I like to know where it goes though so hurry up and write more

[Master1.0]

Meh liek it.

6/10, not bad for a first story though!

[M M M M M MARIO]

Revivin' dis Topic. :3

I LIEK TO WRITE STOREEHHHHHZZZZ.

[SuperMIC]

Hm, well it's certainly interesting. I mean, definitely the concept/plot could be very interesting, and the conflict seems to be building up. Now, I'm not sure if you're trying to write this like one of Red's funneh stories, or as a serious one. Hm. If it IS a serious one, I'd really recommend you to add more description, and fix the spelling and grammar. If it's a Redstory (HAHA! NEW TERM GET!) then I'd recommend make it a bit less random.

REDSTORY SCORE: 7.5/10
SRSTORY (NEW TERM GET!) SCORE: 6.5/10

[*Emelia K. Fletcher]

Hmph. I could list quite a few things wrong with this story, but that would amount to insulting you in your view.

Ah, what the heck, it's criticism.

A. The syntax and spacing is odd.
B. Not much description is given, just OMG GOING TO RUNOUW TOWER end.
C. Grammar. ALWAYS grammar.
D. Aren't the chapters a little short? Combating B and filling it with good description would solve this.

So, all in all, I'd say 5/10. It's not bad for a story, but then again, not too good either.

*is expecting MoD-style reaction*

[RedLink]

Uhhh Bro....Whaat?

This story is to damn random and the writing needs to be improved A LOT.
Description needs to improve too.
The Plot like WTF BRO?
Is this random or serious?
I don't know about this story and again it is WAAAY too short.

6.5/10

Come on Bro you can do better : D

[Ridder]

No.










































This isn't the kind of story you should continue with this style. It's just atrocious and shallow., you've already read "What Once Was", an actually great forum story. Take THAT example, and look over your story you have here.





Just, please, if you're going to continue writing more for this story, do it better.