The Runouw Files

[Chaukai]

I was checking the mail like I always

Hah. Me? Check the mail? HAHAH THAT'S FUNNY!

Lol, it was pretty good, but I noticed a few grammatical mistakes and a bit too many similes. o.o I'm not a fan of First-Person Narratives, so I can't really say much more without being biased. >_>

[MICrophone]

I couldn't read all of azn's story. Extreme run-on sentences killed my eyes. I don't know if you were going for a certain style or what, but I couldn't finish it. Story looked all right, but you need work on the grammar part.