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Runouw war

Postby Bogdan » July 26th, 2011, 2:36 am

Chapter 1 - short introduction~
Once upon a time there was a beutiful country named Runouw.com but the king didn't know that most of citizens are spambots, the worse criminals in the world and one day the whole country was under control of the king of spambots Raymond and the spambot empire! They were living in the Republic Spam the most ugly country in the world.
Almost whole world thought that Runouw is a part of spambot empire but one day marshal Suyo and general Blablob said to all members of runouw society that:

Suyo: This is our country! This not Raymond's country and this is not a part of spambot empire!
Blablob: We decided that we will start a war with spambot empire, and we better die in this war than to be a part of spambot empire!
Suyo: Tomorrow we will tell king Raymond that from now on our country will kill al spambots!
Blablob and Suyo: Let's sing our anthem!

Everybody was singing the anthem then most of meber were recruited as soliders.

Next day Blablob was waiting Suyo with all the soliders recruited. Finally Suyo arrived.

Blablob: Soliders, in honor of Suyo, ahow the flags!
Suyo: Dear comrades, today we will go to the war! Colonel MoD and his soliders will go first, after them will go Blab's soliders with Kirby859 and some doctors!
we must destroy Raymond's watch tower and then we will go to the capital!

While Suyo was speaking i was feeling bad. I was a simple recruit with Scond Lieutenant rank, so because i was sick i went to a doctor to drink some water but Azunchau4ever saw me and start slaping me.

Azun: What means this solider? If you were now attacking the enemy and suddenly you are sick what will you do?
Azun slaped me again but Blablob saw him.
Blablob: Stop Azun! Not when Suyo is speaking!

While they were talking i went back to my place. Suddenly Suyo said that is time to go. I was one of Blab's soliders so i was first. The drums were playing and a lot of members were crying. After 2 hours we arrived in our new home. We were sleeping in tents, near the battle field. Blablob came and told us

Blablob: It's 20:30, go to bed now because tomorrow at 6:00 we will attack the enemy!

Suddenly was dark everywhere no fire, nothing only dark so we want to bed.


Chapter 2 ~ the attack ~

It was 00:25 and i went to the toilet but i heard some noises so i run to Blab's tent.

Bogdan: Sir
Blab:What, what is it?
Bogdan:I heard some noises like horses walking!
Blab:Where?
Bogdan:Come with me!

We climbed on a fence and we saw Zed98 with some soliders coming.

Blablob: Holy crap, solider!
Bogdan: Yes sir!
Blab: Go and say to colonel MoD that we need his cannons!
Bogdan: Yes sir!

i run and told MoD what's happening. In 5 minutes everybody was ready for attack.

MoD: FIRE!
And the canons shot some enemies so the returned!

Blab: Damn i was afraid of this! Everybody attack the Tower.
So we want to the tower, Zed98 told Raymond that the mission failed and some of the best soliders are dead.

Raymond: WTF? Some of my best soliders died? YOU'RE FIRED!

Zed98 was very sad because Raymond wanted to kill him so he took a white flag and went to our base.

Bogdan: Sir, i see n enemy coming.
Blab: Is he alone?
Bogdan: Yes sir!
Blab: does he have any weapons?
Bogdan: No sir he has only a white flag.

Zed98:Ohai
Blab: Are you lost?
Zed98: No, but i was fired so i need a home!
Blab: O really?Can you prove it?

Zed98 showed a poster with his face to Blab, on the poster was written "Wanted".

Blab: So you need a home?
Zed98: Yes sir!
Blab: With one condition, you will be recruited to my army!
Zed98: I accept.
Blab: Good now but on your new clothes and go to attack!
Zed98: Yes sir!
Suyo: Blab, do you think that's a good idea?
Blab: Yeah, even Colonel MoD was arrested but now he is a colonel!
Suyo: Ok but i still don't trust Zed98!

In 15 minutes we awere in front of the tower, but the enemy was to powerfull and we went back to base. A lot of people died and i was severy damaged!

Chapter 3 ~ In danger ~

Suddenly i woke up in doctor's tent.

Bogdan: what is happening
Doctor: it will be ok
Bogdan: Were are my friends
Doctor: Some of them are in the next tent
Bogdan: Ant the rest of them?
Doctor: they died
Bogdan: What?
Doctor it was too hard to destroy the tower, you will try this tommorow, now stay here.
Bogdan: no, i must go, i found something and i must give it to general Blab.
Doctor: I'll give it for you, were is it?
Bogdan: In my pocket!

The doctor found a box in my pocket and gave it to Blab.

Blab: What is that?
Doctor: I don't know, Bogdan found it.
Blab: Where is him right now?
Doctor: In a tent.

Blab and the doctor come to see me.
Blablob: Where you found it?
Bogdan: when we were in front of the tower i saw a little crack on a wall, inside was a room full of mabs and spam messages, suddenly i say a hidden box and i thought that is important so i stole it but somebody saw me and i was shot.

Blab opened the box and saw there was a golden key with diamonds on it then he gave me a bronze medal.

Blab: Well done! now tomorrow we will attack again the tower and you will hold the flag!

It was a very ugly night and i couldn't sleep.
Next they at 5:00 we attacked the tower and we conquered it. We captured enemy's flag and we have some prisoners, i was staying happy with the flag in my hands but i lost my eye glasses and i couldn't see anything. We were so happy and we completly forgot to tell Blab about our victory. But after 5 minutes the enemies came back with more ammo and more weapons. I couldn't see anything so i was still happy and saying "yay! yahoo!" but a enemy throwed a grenade and it exploded in my face.

TheRobbebas: Sir, sir are you ok?
Bogdan: No i'm not
TheRobbebas and another soloder: Doctor, come here!

The doctor watched me carefully and in final he said:

Doctor: He is not ok, he is blind!
Starking: But he lost his eyeglasses!
Doctor: Yes, but now he is really blind, anyway we must do something!
Starking: Use the cannons and tell eberybody to leave! Me and Redlink will plant some bombs here and run, when enemiy arrives, BOOM.

In ten minutes, all bombs were planted and everybody was back to base.
Blab and Suyo were watching the great "fireworkes".

Everybody was happy, even me but unfortunatelly i woon't be able to help them to attack the capital.

Chapter 4 ~ The Capital ~

After the "firework" stoped everybody went to attack Raymond's fortress.

LinkDroid: Sir, the tower was destroyed!
Raymond: How many soliders are still alive?
LinkDroid: Not many sir, we sent all of them to protect the tower.
Raymond: Damn!
LinkDroid: And the enemy is here!
Raymond: What?!? Impossible!
Linkdroid: They are trying to enter in our fortress.

In 5 minutes our troops killed all enemies and entered to see Raymond.

MoD: Raymond, your army is down you are not protected and you are now our prisoner and LinkDroid aswell!
Raymond: O really? Did you forget thet i'm a spam master? Now see spam!

Raymond spammed but MoD and Fourinone captured him and linkdroid and they were killed and the Spam Republic was erased from the Earth.

Chapter 5 Victory!

Everybody came to Runouw's capital to see the heroes.

Suyo: Welcome dear heroes!

From now on, Runouw is a country without spambots!

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Re: Runouw war

Postby Zunar » July 26th, 2011, 5:13 am

Bad grammar and spelling, not to mention shortness of the story.

3/10
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Re: Runouw war

Postby Bogdan » July 26th, 2011, 5:54 am

TheZunar123 wrote:Bad grammar and spelling, not to mention shortness of the story.

3/10

yeah i pretty suck at english, but i was lucky cuz i can learn this language :awe:
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Re: Runouw war

Postby Zacky » August 6th, 2011, 8:30 am

...I don't get it.

Zed was working for Raymond?
Suyo and Blabob singing an anthem?!
I'm not in it?!?!

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Re: Runouw war

Postby Megar » August 6th, 2011, 8:36 am

8 Bit Dude wrote:...I don't get it.

Zed was working for Raymond?
Suyo and Blabob singing an anthem?!
I'm not in it?!?!

Do you even know who I am?
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Re: Runouw war

Postby Ridder » August 6th, 2011, 12:29 pm

This story is over? Really? Good. Because it sucked. a lot.
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Re: Runouw war

Postby Panik! » August 7th, 2011, 5:47 pm

5 chapters in one post? What? How is this considered a story?

If you want to post a story, and I mean a serious story with a plot not meant for laughs, put some thought into it before you post. Actually, before you even start to write.
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Re: Runouw war

Postby *Emelia K. Fletcher » August 8th, 2011, 12:40 am

No. Just scratch this, put some effort into it, and USE SPELLCHECK.


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Re: Runouw war

Postby Zacky » August 8th, 2011, 8:06 am

You left some very important people out. Like:
Runouw (WTF you left him out?!?!?!)
MKSTAR26
Panik
Ridder
TheZunar123
8 Bit Dude
Master1.0
Republic
"Avo"
Megaboy
And many more, like me!!!!111!!!one!!11!...

Second, why are you writing a Runouw War story? You don't even have 50 posts yet. No one even knew you were doing this, and you didn't get permission from anyone to put them in the story. It's really odd, because in the story, people treat you like the president. But outside the story...
I'm sorry, I'm just pretty pissed off about the stuff in this story. And sorry for my arrogance, but who is "TheRobbebas"?
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Re: Runouw war

Postby Republic » August 12th, 2011, 4:42 pm

WTH I become "Spam Republic"? >_>

Ah, but ah....Really, place it in a Word file and it will automatically check spelling for you. 4/
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