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Re: What Once Was

Postby MessengerOfDreams » August 20th, 2011, 9:08 pm

Chapter 2 out. None too exciting, just leads into the plot. :D
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Re: What Once Was

Postby Chaukai » August 20th, 2011, 10:12 pm

AND IN COMES MICROPHONE!

Well written, but, like you said, nothing too exciting. Although fairly interesting, I hope you'll get some information out soon. :O
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Re: What Once Was

Postby Aro » August 21st, 2011, 8:45 am

Well, I was hooked from the very beginning. :D
And this chapter was so KEWLZ, and not only because I was in it. :P

No but really, can't wait for the next chapter. :D Thanks! :)

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Re: What Once Was

Postby SuperMIC » August 21st, 2011, 9:05 am

OOH, NICE CHAPTER MOD! :D I won't do a review this time cuz I'm tired... but I'll score it!

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Re: What Once Was

Postby Zunar » August 21st, 2011, 9:53 am

Very nice, MOD. The story's starting to get very interesting. :) 10/10

I just hope he sticks me in there somewhere... Wait, is MOD reading this?! OH SHI- *is shot*
Oh, by the way MOD, if you need to know a little bit about me (real name, for example), just PM me. I won't give out TOO much information; just enough for the story. Okay with you? *is shot again*
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Re: What Once Was

Postby MessengerOfDreams » August 21st, 2011, 9:58 am

Just a note- I don't prefer to accept applications. I plan things out and handpick appropriate characters instead of doing it randomly. I'm treating this as if it were a real story, not just a forum story. Just watch what happens. Odds are there will be 16 characters in the story, at the most.
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

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This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3
Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
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Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: What Once Was

Postby Zunar » August 21st, 2011, 11:03 am

OK then.

I can still hope, though. However, I really should stop doing this because this might make MOD not want to include me in the story.
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Re: What Once Was

Postby MessengerOfDreams » August 21st, 2011, 11:08 am

I'm not deciding now. I've already decided ahead of time.
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3
Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: What Once Was

Postby Ridder » August 24th, 2011, 8:09 pm

JSlayerXero wrote:Niiiiice.

But I just want to tell you, if you dare add me, I will shoot you. Four times.

Yeah, I don't exactly like being in stories. (unless I'm writing in/am writing my character out) Then again, I'm probably the only person that would actually care to put me in one, so who I am joking. But for real, don't put me in.


If you haven't noticed, MoD is aiming for a real life sort of thing, and your whole "Hidden Power of Crimson" version of yourself isn't exactly realistic.

MessengerOfDreams wrote:Just a note- I plan things out and handpick appropriate characters. I'm treating this as if it were a real story, not just a forum story.
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Re: What Once Was

Postby brandoprojectm » August 24th, 2011, 8:13 pm

Oh hai Riddah. I didn't know you were transferred to a different department. No seriously, do not click on these links.
Just remember this, when you see her on the street.

I'm the cruelest girl you'll ever meet.
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