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Re: What Once Was

Postby MessengerOfDreams » August 24th, 2011, 8:25 pm

I'm crying cause if all the posts that weren't reviews were reviews my life would be complete. :troll:
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The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
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Re: What Once Was

Postby Ridder » August 24th, 2011, 9:03 pm

Brilliant work. I feel as if characterization isn't quite what I'd imagined, and the whole car and LEAVE NOW thing going on without nothing more than exposition kinda builds up a lot of anticipation, but nothing ends up happening.

It's great, but........
I dunno, I don't think action is really your forte.

9/10.
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Re: What Once Was

Postby M M M M M MARIO » September 3rd, 2011, 5:25 am

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Re: What Once Was

Postby Avo » September 5th, 2011, 8:09 am

Just read Chapter 2. Simply amazing. YOU MUST CONTINUE THIS MOD
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Re: What Once Was

Postby JSlayerXero » September 5th, 2011, 10:34 am

This is probably the only story you've made that I actually give a crud about. MAKE MORE!

NOW!

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Re: What Once Was

Postby Ridder » September 5th, 2011, 11:03 am

See what happens when you try to show us an intelligent and beautiful story that doesn't involve the forums, MoD? No one besides Venexis, Myst, Doram, and Blablob will give the story a single ♥♥♥♥. But as soon as you start talking about the forums, everyone will swamp the story just to read it to see if they're included. :lol:
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Re: What Once Was

Postby JSlayerXero » September 5th, 2011, 11:13 am

I'm not reading to see if I'm included. Personally, I'd rather NOT be included.

I'm just anxious because this is the first time I actually give two ****s about what MoD's writing.
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Re: What Once Was

Postby MessengerOfDreams » September 5th, 2011, 11:18 am

Ridder wrote:See what happens when you try to show us an intelligent and beautiful story that doesn't involve the forums, MoD? No one besides Venexis, Myst, Doram, and Blablob will give the story a single ♥♥♥♥. But as soon as you start talking about the forums, everyone will swamp the story just to read it to see if they're included. :lol:


LMFAO, sadly, you're right. xD
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My Most Recent Works: show
I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3
Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
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Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: What Once Was

Postby RedLink » September 5th, 2011, 12:11 pm

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Re: What Once Was

Postby MessengerOfDreams » March 12th, 2012, 10:14 am

Chapter 3 would be up right about now. :P
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My Most Recent Works: show
I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3
Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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