The Eternal Brothers.

[lordpat]

I hate when people write things and then other comes and think I disagree with him. I wasn't asking only for good things, I was asking for both good and bad things.

[AwesomeJRFD]

I hate when people write things and then other comes and think I disagree with him. I wasn't asking only for good things, I was asking for both good and bad things.

I wasn't specifically referring to you.

[nin10mode]

Protip: It's usually better to make a completely different story than to write a sequel to an unfinished one that belongs to a different(and somewhat unorganized) group.

By the way, this is not a review, this is just some advice.

[JSlayerXero]

I have to agree with mode on this one. While this is (hopefully) just a spin-off, RW was unorganized the first time we wrote it. We've learned our lesson so we're doing a MUCH better job organizing now. Thank goodness you're not adding me or you'd see me when I REALLY get harsh. Trying to write based on something you didn't is pretty hard to do if you don't know the story well enough. Since you're basing it on the more... Plain version... This version isn't going to be based on the more organized version once we punch it out. So you might also want to be careful writing a sequel/spin-off bout a story that's only half made.

Also, I PM'ed you something I was going to post in your discussion about reviews before the mods showed up and locked it before I could put my say in it. (this isn't the first time they've done that to me)