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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θWaking Upθ

Postby MICrophone » March 11th, 2010, 3:43 pm

Nor does TLT then?
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θIntelligenceθ

Postby Chaukai » March 11th, 2010, 3:50 pm

Thank you for all the feedback! :D Chapter 2 is out! :D Expect Chapter 3 on Monday!

brandobrawl wrote:Anyway, it's looking pretty good so far. A bit of confusion with verb tenses at the beginning, but pretty much great!

Just remember, I haz teh flying pink elephant if you're thinking of killing me off....


I know that I have a problem with verb tenses. >_> I dunno, it's just how I am. XD Hopefully I'll get better but...
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marioiscool254 wrote:Killing you off? Hah! You're lucky. I'm not even in this game so far…you should just be happy you're in it, you ungrateful swine! :evil:

Er…just kidding, I suppose… :roll:


So far.... *cough cough*
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θIntelligenceθ

Postby MICrophone » March 11th, 2010, 3:57 pm

EPIC PICTURE = EPICNESS OF CHAPTER

Really good. I love the story. This chapter may not have been quite as well written as the last two, but still very good and very fun to read. :D
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θIntelligenceθ

Postby Yoshi Boo 118 » March 11th, 2010, 4:07 pm

YAY! This story reminds me of some good books I've read...well anyway, keep up the good work! ;)
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θIntelligenceθ

Postby MessengerOfDreams » March 12th, 2010, 2:10 pm

This ranks up there with the best of the best of the best. You know, with RF and TRC and TLT and stuff.
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θWaking Upθ

Postby Buff_ » March 12th, 2010, 2:14 pm

marioiscool254 wrote:Nor does TLT then?

That does. I did say 'about' though.
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θIntelligenceθ

Postby Kimonio » March 13th, 2010, 5:52 pm

.......Out of curiousity, does my chapter have to do with the insanity that MOY,MIC, and Buff discovered in me? :D


I actually like this story!*bookmarks it on my phone and sees the little space left*.....Crap...*starts deleting my music while crying*
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θIntelligenceθ

Postby MessengerOfDreams » March 13th, 2010, 5:53 pm

:lol:

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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θMano-a-Manoθ

Postby Chaukai » March 15th, 2010, 1:46 pm

Thanks for the amazing feedback! :D

Yoshi Boo 118 wrote:YAY! This story reminds me of some good books I've read...well anyway, keep up the good work! ;)


By any chance did you read Hunger Games or Ender's Game? Just like when I wrote Demi-God, I try and base the styles off some books that I really like. In this case, it's Hunger Games and Ender's Game mixed together. They are both about different things and have different writing styles, but if you've read either, you would understand.

Now then, Chapter 3, Mano-a-Mano is out! It's a little bit shorter then the last chapter... :/ See you next Friday!
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θMano-a-Manoθ

Postby MICrophone » March 15th, 2010, 1:53 pm

I continue to love this, though your grammar this chapter was a little worse than in previous. Still, lovin' it! :D
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