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TheZunar123 wrote:Question Rem. Did you have any plans for people to change teams?

For them to switch teams? Probably not. Although I am tempted to search every 24murph, Ayrayen, and Megamario and replacing them with some people who are here now.... I don't know about that yet though. I also want to replace Kim's name with Shade, and TBG's with TrappedTime. I'll see if I really do or not.

You could do what I did in TRE and note their name change in the list. Like so:
Zunar [TheZunar123]

Okay, so I had a complete derp moment, and I had thought that I had posted the entirety of Chapter 16. Problem is, I forgot 3 Paragraphs! XD So... There are three more paragraphs at the end of Chapter 16. Also, Chapter 17 is out! Check it out!

And also, I'll probably be migrating all these chapters to a new topic some time soon, as they are everywhere and it's pretty sloppy.

LOLOLOLOL
Reading through it (I'm only on chapter 7, maybe 8), and I found this:

Avo hopped into the air and landed right on Avo

xD
But anyway, great story. 9.9999999/10 (Left out the .0000001 for the typos, even though some can be so ♥♥♥♥ hilarious)

Lol can you specify the part? I'll get to fixing that.

Nah leave it. it's hilarious.

Alucard, even with his bulky armor, danced around the bullets and even got time to taunt them, slapping his rear end and dancing for a bit.

“Alucard,” Blablob responded.

“Nero,” Alucard grinned as his heart started racing.

Errr wut?

Oops. Lol

I'm cutting Zunar's pay for this.

That part has been fixed.

xD

You're doing a good job... but is Foru DEAD dead or out of the game?

By far the best work of the story is the Krazy/Volcove segments. What I definitely look forward to the most. Love those two.

Keep at it!

RemnantAbyss wrote:I'm cutting Zunar's pay for this.

You can't do that. You don't pay me a thing to edit. I do it because I want to.

EDIT: By the way, shouldn't you change the topic title to the most recent chapter title?