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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby MICrophone » March 15th, 2011, 2:04 pm

We assume out of the game for now MOY, as that's what the cannon shots have meant up to this point.

This is really, really good by the way. I'm kind of sad that I "died," albeit somewhat heroically, but that was a brilliant strategy on the part of the EK's. Very well thought out on your part. Also, the rest of the chapter was quite good as always. I do have one complaint; you have developed this mystery into something more and more complex as we go, while hardly giving us any answers in return. At 17 chapters in, it's starting to get to the point that the story is becoming more confusing than anything else, so hopefully soon you'll start explaining things a bit more. I feel like you're getting there (with perhaps the labyrinth being the final game), but I would perhaps make an effort to get there sooner rather than later.
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby Chaukai » April 2nd, 2011, 1:20 pm

Chapter 18 is out... Yeah... Ya know.
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby nin10mode » April 2nd, 2011, 1:37 pm

Daaaamn... We must've been in there for ages if Sax is already a level mod. o_O
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby Chaukai » April 2nd, 2011, 1:38 pm

It's sort of a mixture, I don't want to put a specific time period on this, since this technically happened after Last Legacy was released.
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby MICrophone » April 2nd, 2011, 1:40 pm

Love it. I like that you've started to explain things without giving away too much. Well-written and interesting as usual. 9.9/10
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby MessengerOfDreams » July 20th, 2011, 12:27 pm

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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby Chaukai » July 20th, 2011, 1:23 pm

*Cough* Embarrassing. Would it be better to mention I have a new story brainstorming in my head? :D
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby MessengerOfDreams » July 20th, 2011, 1:36 pm

...yeah sure we'll go with that. ;) Just so long as someday this gets finished.
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Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
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Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby Avo » October 28th, 2011, 6:59 pm

Knytemare wrote:*Cough* Embarrassing. Would it be better to mention I have a new story brainstorming in my head? :D


FINISH. THIS. STORY.

I want to read it so bad, but I ain't readin' it if it won't be finished!

Disregard the bump, focus on the story. From what I read in reviews, this story rules babies. So. Why leave this in a dumpster?

I know you might be working on something else. But, if I can't convince you to finish, then I'll keep asking you. :D
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

Postby Megar » December 14th, 2012, 7:44 am

why is this not being updated
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