Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ
Posted: March 15th, 2011, 2:04 pmWe assume out of the game for now MOY, as that's what the cannon shots have meant up to this point.
This is really, really good by the way. I'm kind of sad that I "died," albeit somewhat heroically, but that was a brilliant strategy on the part of the EK's. Very well thought out on your part. Also, the rest of the chapter was quite good as always. I do have one complaint; you have developed this mystery into something more and more complex as we go, while hardly giving us any answers in return. At 17 chapters in, it's starting to get to the point that the story is becoming more confusing than anything else, so hopefully soon you'll start explaining things a bit more. I feel like you're getting there (with perhaps the labyrinth being the final game), but I would perhaps make an effort to get there sooner rather than later.
This is really, really good by the way. I'm kind of sad that I "died," albeit somewhat heroically, but that was a brilliant strategy on the part of the EK's. Very well thought out on your part. Also, the rest of the chapter was quite good as always. I do have one complaint; you have developed this mystery into something more and more complex as we go, while hardly giving us any answers in return. At 17 chapters in, it's starting to get to the point that the story is becoming more confusing than anything else, so hopefully soon you'll start explaining things a bit more. I feel like you're getting there (with perhaps the labyrinth being the final game), but I would perhaps make an effort to get there sooner rather than later.
Just so long as someday this gets finished.