VAGs: Civil Destruction θNya~θ

[Chaukai]

I wonder if there's a secret plot under all of this.

I wonder as well... I wonder...

I don't know if I can survive the wait till Monday…

So... Eheheh... I DID post it on Monday... Just not in a... Time where you can read it. : D Please don't kill me? X_x

So! Mysteries. Yes. Mysterious Mysteries. What will happen in the chapter this time? :O Oh noes! You must read to find out right?! Anyways, a little note. If you HAVEN'T noticed, there is now a character list which shows who is in which faction. Although I may fix it to be a bit more organized in the near future, this will show any new characters in the PREVIOUS chapter. That means nobody in new in the Mysteries chapter will be shown in the character list. Ohh, this chapter dragged on for a bit. >_> I didn't expect it to be this long... But I guess it should be seeing as we should try to start reaching for those publishing expectations, eh?

[MessengerOfDreams]

FINALLY! A CHANGE! WAY TO GO!

[MICrophone]

*Kills azn.* I am not merciful.

That said, this was an excellent chapter. The writing is really clean and you threw in enough twists in this chapter to keep things interesting. Might I suggest however that on that chart at the beginning you note who's alive and who isn't following each chapter? That'll make it easier to follow. Anyway…you'd better have the next chapter for me on Friday…and before I leave too…oh, and I'm still anxious to see where I come in. Yes, where, because if you don't put me in somewhere more substantial than a commercial break, I'll kill you again.

[fourinone]

Whaaaaaat?!? No fourinone character? 0/10!

Nah, just kidding. Great story, chau! : D (And I'm guessing I'm one of those nameless people speaking at the beginning of every chapter, hehe.)

...and I just can't help but point out "V.A.G.s.". VAGS. Yeah.

Oh, and where's mah half of the cookie? I wants.

[MICrophone]

Ahem. Friday be ending, no? Shouldn't you have released another chapter of this? *Taps foot impatiently.*

[Chaukai]

Dude!!! I swear to god I'm sorry! >_< I just got home! And unless I can type up a story in 7 minutes until 12 AM Mountain, I will have to say that the chapter will not be released. But I'm pretty much free tomorrow, so... I'll have it done, I promise you!!!!

[MICrophone]

Hmph. Very well. Just don't let it happen again…or else…*slams fist into palm repeatedly*

[MessengerOfDreams]

As for me, oh well, life goes on. Still can't wait, hopefully It will be done before I am done caving.

[Chaukai]

Well... Chapter 6 is a bit late but... It's here! I'm again, so sorry that I had this one late...

Might I suggest however that on that chart at the beginning you note who's alive and who isn't following each chapter?

Now, I will definitely do that. But... I don't want to for the first game, just because if I DO want to make a scoreboard, I want to have ALL the players on. The first game does not identify every person in each faction, but I'll do it afterwards.... There will also be a little special deal after the first game, so be sure to stay tuned! : D

Anyways, thanks for the feedback pl0x. Monday. I promise you there will be one. : D

[MICrophone]

Very entertaining as usual. It will be interesting to see what happens when one man is left standing. Keep going!