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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 11th, 2010, 6:30 am

Oh sh*t

This gets better and better.

I like the addition to the teams, but what really keeps me reading is the Volcove-Krazy thing. They have such a dynamic that is impossible to ignore.

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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby MICrophone » June 11th, 2010, 12:12 pm

100/10. I'm in it…that's all that matters…and I'm super awesome too! :D

Nah, seriously, this was a great chapter. The inclusion of the mods and I was a great twist I didn't see coming, and the Volcove - Krazy aspect, as MOY said, is excellent, though somehow Krazy doesn't strike me as the type of character that would wear a skirt. Anyhow, you're really dealing now…keep it up! :D
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby General Guy 101 » June 11th, 2010, 12:14 pm

marioiscool254 wrote:100/10. I'm in it…that's all that matters…and I'm super awesome too! :D

Nah, seriously, this was a great chapter. The inclusion of the mods and I was a great twist I didn't see coming, and the Volcove - Krazy aspect, as MOY said, is excellent, though somehow Krazy doesn't strike me as the type of character that would wear a skirt. Anyhow, you're really dealing now…keep it up! :D

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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby MICrophone » June 11th, 2010, 12:14 pm

:facepalm:

This new chapter was just written by azn…new chapters will continue to be posted because he's sending them to MOY via his forums. MOY explained that.
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 11th, 2010, 12:15 pm

:facesuicide:

Chau sends me chapters over other networks. THAT WAS A NEW CHAPTER I POSTED TODAY!
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Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
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It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
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Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θUnknowingθ

Postby Zunar » June 11th, 2010, 12:19 pm

But don't you think you should post a new topic and put all the chapters in so you can change the Title like Chau did?
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby MICrophone » June 11th, 2010, 12:20 pm

That's actually a good idea…MOY, if you were to do that, would a mod then lock this?
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby Zunar » June 11th, 2010, 12:21 pm

I actually could do that because I am...well used to be the editor for the story. I'm just not sure if Chau still wants me to edit the new chapters...
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 11th, 2010, 12:21 pm

Uhm... that doesn't strike me as an altogether great idea... what if a mod changed the users? Then the previous reviews and an a**load of work would be saved!
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My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

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Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
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Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
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Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
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Re: VAGs: Civil Destruction θImpulseθ

Postby Zunar » June 11th, 2010, 12:22 pm

Even better! :D
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