Runouw's Secrets 2: Spam returns CHAPTER 4 OUT!

[Sonicfan253]

Welcome to the sequal of Runouw's Secrets! this time I will make longer chapters, more details, and other advice that you all gave me. So have a great time reading the thrilling sequal to Runouw's Secrets!
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Runouw's secrets 2: Spam returns

It had been a year after I had beaten spam, for what I thought, would be once and for all.

The mess continued on a bright, and somewhat boring, uneventful day.

I was sitting on top of a building in Runox, watching the sun just sit there.

"Nothing ever happens around here," I said, staring at the sun, oddly thinking a meteor would crash into it. Or it would start turning black,

Suddenly I heard a loud crash! It was coming from the direction of the chat.

"What was that?!" I gasped, Almost falling off the building.

I climbed down and began running toward the chat. What had happened?

Oh no. The chat was on fire! I ran quicker.

Suddenly I saw my motercycle, I hopped on and slammed down the pedal.

People were evacuating from the chat, I parked and went inside to see a mess of flames.

There were men in black, WHERE HAD I SEEN THEM BEFORE?!?!

The guys were stealing files and leaving things everywhere.

I tackled one of them and he said "HEY KID! GET OFF!" I grabbed a file from his hand and shot him with a lazer gun. The other one ran away, "Hey come back here!" I yelled. Too late,

Suddenly, I lost my breath. Smoke floated everywhere.

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An hour or later, I dunno how long. Forumers carried me away,

As soon as I woke up, The forumers yelled complaints at me. "SONIC WHY THE HECK DID YOU DO THAT!?!" yelled [L2],

I had NO idea what what was going on, I finnaly ended the arguing by saying "GUYS! I DIDNT DO IT!".

"But why do you have a file in your hand?" said Kimonio, I looked at my hand and saw that I was still clutching the file I rescued.

"There were *Cough* Black men stealing *Cough cough* files." I said wheezing heavily,

"Those guys again?" said Buffooner.

I nodded, And then I blacked out again.

Little did I know, things were happening while I slept.

Chapter 2

I woke up later, to see everyone on the floor, and the file was gone from my hand.

I jumped up and smelled something.......weird? It was like poison.

Then I realized the truth, the black men were following me.

I ran down the halls of the building, "I have to get out of here" I said.

Hurrying faster, I tore through the doors of the building and leaped onto my motercycle. They could've been tracking me at that second,

Flames blasted out of the axels as I ripped down Runox, I needed to get far away, Where I could think.

Suddenly the motercycle bumped and threw me off, I went flying off the motercycle.

I landed hard into a lake, I sunk deeper, and deeper, and deeper, and deeper,

My mind went crazy, I saw Runouw, Kimonio, Buffooner, [L2], Aznchau4ever, and Messengerofyahweh.

I woke up and saw myself at a golden temple, There was a mirror at the other side.

I ran toward it and touched it, I suddenly saw MYSELF?!?

He had fangs, and red eyes, Then he pulled up a gun and fired.

The mirror shattered and I felt myself being knocked backward.

I woke up again, only I was on Runouw Beach with Kimonio.

"Sonicfan, Are you ok?" asked Kimonio, patting my back.

I coughed water and said "im fine Kimonio".

"I had to dig deep into the lake to find you" said Kimonio.

"I-I saw a mirror and I was in it, Only I was-" I got cut off by Kimonio.

"WHAT?!?" he gasped,

"I dont know what happened" I said.

"Lets get you back to the chat" said Kimonio.

Chapter 3
Sorry for this short chapter, I was in a hurry.

I felt like a jerk, a total jerk. Flipping off into a lake? Stupidest thing I had ever done.

I sat at a chair and read the Runouw news, Spam, and more spam.

Its weird, I thought I had destroyed it. It seems that every time I finish something, Something else pops right up.

I went to a glass case and got out my old gun, Yep. The one with the three colorful bullets,

I remembered using each one to defeat the giant spambot, things were going to happen again, only worse.

The black men were following me, I knew it. Suddenly I heard something, a small beeping sound. "Huh, whats that?" I said as I found a small microchip wedged behind a painting. "Oh my go-" Suddenly it created a blinding flash of light.

It exploded, sending me flying into the wall. My head busted on one of my mirrors, shards flew everywere. I cut my arm and blood was dripping from my head,

"I liked it better when I wasn't getting smashed around" I said as I rubbed my head,

Somebody was trying to get me killed, not the black men. Could it be someone I trusted?

Suddenly more bombs smashed onto my house and it shook and ceiling tiles fell everywhere. "Yep, someone is trying to get me killed".

I ran outside, Unluckily for me. There were more,

Chapter 4

"Whats with you guys?" I said as I made a mad dash.

I didnt know WHERE I was going, but anywhere was better than my home at that moment.

Soon I found myself at the....Graveyard?

Graves of old dead posts and threads sat everywhere.

I have to admit, this place was creepy. I was about to ditch this dump when suddenly...I got drawn close to something.

A grave...it was glowing! I rubbed my eyes, But it was still glowing.

I walked over to it and saw some kind of keypad.

Suddenly a voice rang through me like a broadcast on the news "Goooooo awaaayyyyyy"

Oh. my. gosh. What just happened?

I dont know what that was, but I rocketed out of there like a bullet bill.

Not turning back, I just flew into a wild run. I didnt know where I was going, What I was doing, and whatmore, Not knowing what might happen next.

I had experienced rick rolls, and screamers. But this......Terrible.

Suddenly something flew out at me "HEY IDIOT WHAT THE HEC-" I tried to say, but they slapped Duct-tape over my mouth.

They threw me somewhere dark, I dunno where because I was too scared to look.

Suddenly, I felt dark. And alone.

[MessengerOfDreams]

Grammar is a tad bit better, story is much more cohesive. Work on teh character development! 6/10

[Sonicfan253]

Thanks, MOY. I knew a sequal had to come, So I decided to make aonther thriller.