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Re: The EL33T

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 11th, 2010, 1:33 pm

That, my friend, is a teaser.
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Re: The EL33T

Postby Worst_master » June 12th, 2010, 4:35 am

Well, good story...... Good length!

But the word is too hard for me, luckily I can translete them by the dictionary and google.
MessengerOfYahweh wrote:“Hey, you, shut up. I’m still really mad at you,” was the response.

“Can’t we just-“

“Zip it.”

“I mea-“

“Zip it.”

“C’mo-“

“Zip. It.”


Well, I have a trouble on it, wut does it mean???
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Re: The EL33T

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 12th, 2010, 5:09 am

TPG was being interrupted by Yoshi Boo, who wanted him to shut up. THanks for being so into it that you would translate it!
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Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
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It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
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Re: The EL33T

Postby Megar » July 5th, 2010, 10:02 am

Yes, A near month Bump, but I am the new author of the story. And I start here...

Chapter 5

So it happened. Aznchau and SS were dead, and only Salmo and Azn's murderer knew how.
"I'm not sure, Moy. We were the only ones around at Azn's death, but only Niklaw has a gun, and he's in the toilet..." Buff said to Moy, chatting about how it happened. "Well, I could say the bullet came from outside, and i'm pretty dang sure it was from outside." Moy replied.
"Well, wherever it came from, we find." Mic said, as they set off to find Niklaw in the toilet and tell him.

But in Runouw Heaven... (Du-Dun, CHI!)
"Ughh... Were am I...?" SS told himself.
"SS? How are you here?" Someone said. The person lifted him up. And that person was none other than Azn!
"AZN?" SS yelled. "WERE AM I! I WAS AT MY HOUSE A F-" SS said as he was interrupted by Azn.
"Shush." Azn said. "Were both dead, and in heaven, get it?" He mumbled.
"O_e" SS was thinking. "Your kidding." He then said.
"No. Im not." Azn replied. "We really are. We should go find the other users that the spammers caught, ok?" He said.
"Ok, ok, ok." SS said. "Come on, lets go!" He shouted as the two ran off.

"Ready to activate the fake SuperSpongerific and Aznchau4ever?"
"Yes, Master."
"Good, Runouw. Now activate them quickly."

Only the first of the 3 parts, mates. :awe: Only done it because it's my first part so yeah.
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Re: The EL33T

Postby MessengerOfDreams » July 5th, 2010, 10:05 am

The Runouw heaven... not the direction I would have gone for, but not bad. But, I will say this

1. SS's fake wouldn't pass because they already buried him and everything

2. Neither would Azn's because he's dead right in front of them.

3. Vandarx, YB, Salmo, Kimonio, K999, TPG and Venexis are the main characters of the story. Don't really see them.

Maybe... just maybe...

We should collab?
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My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

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This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
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Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: The EL33T

Postby Megar » July 5th, 2010, 10:09 am

MessengerOfYahweh wrote:The Runouw heaven... not the direction I would have gone for, but not bad. But, I will say this

1. SS's fake wouldn't pass because they already buried him and everything

2. Neither would Azn's because he's dead right in front of them.

3. Vandarx, YB, Salmo, Kimonio, K999, TPG and Venexis are the main characters of the story. Don't really see them.

Maybe... just maybe...

We should collab?

Maybe, Just Maybe yes.
I was planning the real ones buried, yes?
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Re: The EL33T

Postby MessengerOfDreams » July 5th, 2010, 10:11 am

Why don't you and I start over on Chapter 5, revamp it and we'll work on it! I'll give you advice on how it can stay true to the rest of the story, and you can do most of the writing! PM me when you want. Okay?
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: The EL33T

Postby Megar » July 5th, 2010, 10:13 am

MessengerOfYahweh wrote:Why don't you and I start over on Chapter 5, revamp it and we'll work on it! I'll give you advice on how it can stay true to the rest of the story, and you can do most of the writing! PM me when you want. Okay?

Sounds-a good. Tommarow though, K?
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Re: The EL33T

Postby MessengerOfDreams » July 5th, 2010, 10:14 am

Sounds good, man. :D
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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