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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 26th, 2010, 6:16 pm

Whaddabout me? Does all my planning go to heck? :cry:
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Canine » May 27th, 2010, 1:15 pm

Sure. But I can tell you this. Maybe you can help with the series, like the interviews and what-else.
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 27th, 2010, 1:17 pm

The thing is, I already had contestants, challenge-type-thingies and plots kinda forming in my head
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My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

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This might be like nothing you've seen before.
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Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3
Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
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Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Canine » May 27th, 2010, 1:19 pm

Go ahead. It's what you want to do, you do it. I don't care. Just try to keep it separate from my idea, OK?
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Canine » May 27th, 2010, 5:19 pm

Double post. I'm bad.

But Day One is out! For the Red Team..
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MICrophone » May 27th, 2010, 5:30 pm

That was…short. And not particularly interesting. I guess the excitement is yet to come. This isn't too bad, but you still need to proofread. The biggest problem with this chapter was that you kept switching between past and present tense. You need to choose one and stick with it for the entire story. Not bad though…keep going! :)
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Canine » May 27th, 2010, 5:35 pm

Yeah, I'm starting to get confused...I'll fix that up soon though! Again, thanks for the review! And the interesting parts come soon!
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MessengerOfDreams » May 28th, 2010, 1:57 pm

It gets better! Unfortunately, you captured the dynamic between Ridder and Me. ( I think she or I go first)
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My Most Recent Works: show
I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3
Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MICrophone » May 28th, 2010, 7:01 pm

Maybe there's a good reason why I never watched Survivor. I'm just not interested in this story. Nothing against you or your writing, just not my type, I suppose. So yeah. Writing was good and all, but I just can't get into it. Sorry. :(
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Canine » May 28th, 2010, 10:27 pm

Ah, sorry to hear that, MIC. We all like things, but we're not interested in another. Maybe once I finish the story, I'll go back and you can tell me what parts are boring.
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