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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Yoshi Boo 118 » June 1st, 2010, 3:41 pm

This can be a very good story, as long as you give more detail. Keep up the good work, Kirb! 7/10 :awe:
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 2nd, 2010, 2:08 pm

You are really making me dislike this. Really fast.

1. Kirby got 3 votes. Azn got 2. Why did Azn get voted off?

2. NO STRUCTURE
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MICrophone » June 2nd, 2010, 2:09 pm

Wrong MOY. Azn had six votes and Kirby had five, if I recall correctly. The second point I agree with.
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Canine » June 2nd, 2010, 2:13 pm

Gaahh! I'm starting to get crazy! Sorry, that was a miscalculation, I meant for azn to have 6 votes and me, 5. *sigh* EQAO, you've just screwed my life up again. >_>

And maybe I should work on the structure? Like maybe tonight? O_o
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 2nd, 2010, 2:14 pm

YES.
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Canine » June 18th, 2010, 12:39 pm

Sorry, this may be a bump, but I wanna work on it some more and it's falling behind. O_o
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Re: Survivor: Runouw Style

Postby Worst_master » June 18th, 2010, 8:05 pm

GOod! The red team and blut team idea is good! But there were many chat in the story, well.... I like that because it have many characters! Good job, and it is very long! (But all comment plus=few.)
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