Internet Explorers:Chapter 2 Part 1 (Kept ya waitin', huh?)

[Worst_master]

Wow! Good..... Very long! The idea is very good!
Although the tielt "Sex in the city" Make people think bad thing.

[MessengerOfDreams]

It makes me think of a certain movie that tanked at the box office.

[nin10mode]

It makes me think of a certain movie that tanked at the box office.

Never seen it. Only heard of it. BTW, Chapter 1 Part3 is finally done.

[MessengerOfDreams]

Where'd I go? Seriously?

And I worry about my character... I fear all his development is gonna be focused around L2-Linkdroid the ♥♥♥♥♥♥♥. Kill him off early, all right?

8/10

Still good, although I doubt Mic'd get into a fight. Be a bit plausible, too.

[nin10mode]

Remember: I have 16 main characters. 17 if you count bluestar so far. I also need time to develop them all. I won't be able to fit everyone in every chapter. I'll make sure you and the rest have a chapter all to yourselves.

Were you half-asleep when you were reading? (Or was that just me while I was writing? xD) The two didn't know they were fighting each other. It was too dark during the night, and neither of them bothered to talk, which means they have no idea who they're fighting. Also note that Mic ran when he saw the others. I intended that to be a sign that Mic doesn't like fighting friends, nor does he like being held responsible for a bad event.

Although I see where you could've misunderstood. I put "It was my first fight with a friend" While I probably should've been more detailed and wrote "It was my first fight with a friend, even though I didn't know it." Maybe that could've cleared things up a bit.

[MessengerOfDreams]

Yeah... my bad.

Seriously, Kill Linkdroid or make him a villain.

[Zunar]

Can I be in the story? I mean, I AM the editor for it, so please?

[nin10mode]

I'll let you be a recruit when someone dies. o_o Or I could just put you in a sequel. Whichever works out.

[Zunar]

Ok!

[nin10mode]

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