Niklaw's Tavern(THE STORY!)

[Kimonio]

Niklaw's Tavern

Idea credit: MessengerOfYahweh

Writer: Kimonio

Number of Chapters: One long, neverending one.



It was opening day for the newest business in Runox. The Defenders of the Peace in Runox(Suyo Carter, Nicholas Fensten, and Foru Fista) had noticed a steady decrease in the economy of Runox and decided an action must be done.

The action, of course, was to open a Tavern. But how would it be made?


Suyo suggested they make it an arcade with soda machines and a snack bar. Foru suggested that they make it a bar with strippers, pole dancers, and lots and lots of beer.

The suggestion that gained all votes, however, was Nicholas's vote. Nick stated that the best thing to do was to make a tavern with everything(minus Foru's suggestion).


And so it was done. The name of the Tavern would be "Niklaw's Tavern". Nicholas decided to change his name to "Niklaw" to avoid suspicion by the residents of Runox.

As Niklaw was preparing for business, the doors burst open and a figure holding a banana rushed in.

"HALT!", the person shouted,"GIVE ME ALL THE NATURAL ICE BEER YOU HAVE, AND NO ONE WILL GET HURT!"

Niklaw shook his head and pulled out a shotgun. He placed a couple of bullets into the gun and aimed it at the person."Blablob, you have to the count of three to get out of here before I pull this here trigger....................One................................two-"

Blablob sprinted away shouting "MOMMY" the whole time.

Niklaw put down the gun and watched as people walked in with curious looks on their faces."Welcome to the Tavern! How may I serve y'all?"

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If it is okay with MOY, then anyone can type more to this. Just start from page one and add onto it. We are trying to record the whole Tavern topic in story form to make it close to a book......don't ask why. MOY said too. o_O

Well, enjoy guys! And please add to this!

[xpo20]

Good...Nice............you spelled runouw wrong

[General Guy 101]

*In chinese voice* Ho ho Vewy Good

[MICrophone]

Have I made it obvious enough? Good. Runox is what Kim chose to call the setting. It's not supposed to be Runouw.

That said, the story's all right, but the first part, where the mods discuss how to boost the economy, should've been told through dialogue rather than passive description. It makes it much more interesting than boring description. Otherwise, it's good.

[MessengerOfDreams]

I give permission to Kim to do it his way... as if I needed to. Dude, it's your story!

I will do a piece on RidderSalad later... >_>