The final war.Chapter 1 out!

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The final war.Chapter 1 out!

Postby Silver Sonic_106 » June 6th, 2010, 10:07 pm

Sorry for not continuing the Paper Mario 2 crossover,but i had no ideas+no one had interest.This new story will make you cry,it will make you laugh.Hope you enjoy!
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Ah,yes.The beautiful city of Runouw.It was a time when everyone was happy.But..........one day a horrible fate destroyed this city,but in the cost of many people it was freed,but never the same............You want to hear the hole story?Well if you insist.....

Prologue.The end of the city of Runouw.

Like any other day,Alex was jogging around the city and after he gets tired he goes into Niklaw's tavern to order his favorite food-beef jerky.He talked to Niklaw about how there has been a burst of spammers lately.
"Yeah,something smells fishy here..."-said Niklaw with a serious face.
"Maybe we should boost the guards."-answered Alex trying to help.
Niklaw stood up and went to forum 23."I just hope nothing too big happens....."-said Alex with a worried face.

At forum 23.
Niklaw entered the forum and saw Runouw and Superyoshi discussing something ."Haven't seen you in while Runouw."-Said Niklaw also taking a seat."We were talking how our guards found the corpse of an average member near the gate."-Said Suyo watching Niklaw."Allot of spammers have also been able to past them.*Clang**clang**smash!*
"What s THAT?"-asked Niklaw and rushed to the window.Some spammers were shooting the building.
Runouw held up his hand and a green ball of energy appeared."Neutral.....BLAST!"-Runouw screamed and threw the ball right at a spammer's head.The other ones were scattered around with major injuries.Niklaw heard his mod phone.-it was Four."guys,get over here,the gate is about to break!"Suyo quickly grabbed his ban hammer and rushed there."Runouw,what about you?"-asked Niklaw."I'll stay here and protect this forum,you go!"-answered Runouw.

At the gate.

As Niklaw arrived at the gate,he already saw Suyo killing tons of spammers.Niklaw started to swipe spammers with his home made knife.After 25 minutes Suyo was too tired to continue,but still hit just as strong.Niklaw looked at the distence an saw how so many places were burning and being taken over by spammers.How countless members were being killed.After that he turned back to the fight.He saw a shocking sight-Suyo was so tired that he was about to faint,yet still taking all the hits until a spammer stabbed him in the back-He fell on the ground and screamed from pain."HOLY SHIZPICKLES!!!"-screamed Niklaw taking Suyo on back and running for shelter when they saw Four.They ran to a very old forum from the time of cave members that only Mods could go trough.After that all was lost-Runouw was captured and 45% of the members killed-it was the fall of Runouw city.

Chapter 1.Five years later.

"The spammers have stopped their attack"-said a serious voice.
"Good.Let me know when the groups will be set for the war of the century."-said a man with a cape.
The man with the voice was non other than Alex,who has spent 3 years in jail for being spotted trying to strangle a spammer.While the man in a cape was Niklaw who was the major of the freedom fighters.Alex slowly walked to a group of 8 men-MIC,Ridder,Brandobrawl,Blablob,24murph,MOY,Avolerators and Star-Fawlful.Everyone still remembers that horrible day....and the capturing of many powerful members such as Yoshikid and SuperSpongerific.Alex explained everyone the place they have to go by two.
Ridder and MIC-the desert.
Brandobrawl and Blablob-the ice forum.
MOY and Star-Fawful.-The execution forum.
24murph and Avolerators-the jungle forum.

In the desert forum.
Ridder and MIC were ridding on a vehicle for them.They have been there for an hour and a half.They were running out of water and were very tired."........0___________________________________________0 OH C***!"-screamed MIC grabbing Ridder and jumping out of the vehicle.suddenly it exploded.They looked in the distance and saw a tank.MIC charged a freeze spell,but did not have much effect on the tank.Ridder took out his crystal sword and slashed the tank a few times before getting knocked way back with injury.MIC tried a lightning spell and had a big effect on the tank.He then tried a healing spell to help Ridder.They them fired a duo beam attack,but got blocked by a shot from the tank.MIC once again charged thunder in his hands for another attack,but missed.The tank then fired again hitting MIC's third attempt to fire lighting at it.Ridder tried to attack it with a powerful plasma beam wrecking the tank.The tank then exploded and Ridder saw the flaming body of the spammer inside it.

In the jungle forum.
Avo and 24murph were ridding in one of his few survived pixel cars shooting every camera in sight.24murph took a secret turn to avoid the road block,but was forced to stop due to the large wall of vines.Avo quickly cast a fire wall spell on the vines clearing the way.They were ridding without a problem until 24murph felt a hit from the back.A spammer truck was trying to hit them of the road.24murph took a sharp turn in hopes for the spammer to get hit,but was unsuccessful.Avo tried a fire wall ,but had nearly no effect.The spammers continued to attack until they took a turn way sharper than they expected.The car took a direct impact with a giant tree and the front of the car exploded.24murph was sent flying lifeless and was then dragged 20 meters by the spammer truck.They fought of Avo is dead because of the explosion,but was still alive and after the the truck was off sight he quickly reported with the last of his power trying to keep himself alive with a healing spell.He laid down and with the first-aid kit trying to keep the injuries at minimum size waiting for the medics.

Chapter 2.The funeral.

~Coming soon~

!The main character is Niklaw!
Last edited by Silver Sonic_106 on June 10th, 2010, 3:19 am, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: The final war.

Postby YoshiKid54 » June 7th, 2010, 12:34 am

I'm already interested in this story, Aleksgospodinov. Keep going.
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Re: The final war.

Postby Worst_master » June 7th, 2010, 12:41 am

Good story, but a shortly one to another story.
The five years later is really mean after this 5 year?
I think the "Prologue.The end of the city of Runouw." of the one and second paragraphs is too many chat, also can be longer of each paragraph.
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Re: The final war.Chapter 1 out!

Postby SuperStar X » June 10th, 2010, 3:56 am

This story is interesting and cool...Keep it up Alex
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Re: The final war.Chapter 1 out!

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 10th, 2010, 6:33 am

Usually, first time stories never grip me.

I am utterly shocked to say that despite a bit of grammar and spacing issues, and just outright awkward silliness, this is a great story. Keep it up! 8/10
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