Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

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Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby Zed98 » June 8th, 2010, 3:34 pm

This my first story I posted here. Please comment, and I hope you like it.



Intro:

It was Super Mario 63’s 1st Anniversary, and everyone was at Niklaw’s tavern celebrating with the administrator, Runouw himself.
“I can’t believe that SM63 has reached its 1st anniversary!” said a user of Runouw.com, named Zed98. He was chatting with his great friend, SuperSpongerific.
“I’m going to start a huge level series tomorrow!” Zed said to Spongerific.
“May I help?” Spongerific said.
“I guess a level designer could use some help. You’re in.” Zed said back.
Then, without a warning at all, the Moderator alarm went off.
“What happening?” Zed started to freak out.
“He’s back…” Said a Moderator called Fourinone.
Zed then knew why the alarm went off. Raymond1996 was attacking Runouw.com.

Raymond joined Runouw.com and made an unnamed volcano level with the SM63 level designer. But one day, he posted a topic that Suyo locked. Furious, Raymond spammed like ultra-crazy and almost destroyed the forums. At the last second, however, Runouw used a ban hammer to perma-ban Raymond. But Runouw missed him. Runouw used it again, this time whacking Raymond so hard he was perma-banned and blocked from every stepping on Runouw Island again.

Raymond returned to the forums on the day of Super Mario 63’s 1st Anniversary and kidnapped Runouw, and when Niklaw tried to save him, he fell into a trap built by Raymond. When Zed98 saw this happen, he raced forward at nearly 45 MPH to catch up with Raymond. Zed then remembered a legend that there are 7 powerful stars called the Super Stars. Anyone who could get all of them would be so powerful he/she can destroy entire counties! Zed then went to get the Super Stars before Raymond could destroy Runouw Island…



Chapter 1: The Meeting
After all this mess, with Runouw being kidnapped and Zed running off, SuperSpongerific invited Moy and Ridder over to his house to talk about the disaster.
"I can't believe he's back." SuperSpongerific said. "How is he really back? I mean, he was IP BANNED! TWICE!"
"Well, I don't know, but he's back alright." Moy said.
"Zed can't do it on his own." Ridder said.
Suddenly, an idea whizzed through SuperSpongerific's head.
"I GOT IT!" He thought. "Guys! I have an idea!" He yelped.
"WHAT?" Moy asked.
"Have a meeting, split up maybe into 2's, and find Raymond! It's are only chance!" SS replied.
And somehow, so mysteriously, as if it was forced by Chuck Norris, a smile glistened across Ridder's face.
"Looks like somebody likes it." Moy whispered to SS.
"Well, what are we waiting for! Let's go!" Ridder yelled.
"HOLD IT!" Said a voice. "Don't get to excited, kid." He said, as he walked around the corner to reveal himself as a Spammer!
"COME ANY NEARER AND I'LL WIPE YOUR FREAKIN FACE OFF!" SS screamed, holding up one of the 7 Legendary Super Stars.
But as quick as Sonicfan253, the Spammer knocked the 3 clean out, and took the Super Star. When they woke up, they started the meeting.
"Blablabalablalalalalal" Was all heard before the meeting.
"BE QUIET, DAMNIT!" SS yelled. Silence came to be. "Alright, so we all know Runouw has been kidnapped by Raymond, Zed's chased him, Suyo's went up for surveillence on what Raymond is doing, and we, we are doing nothing. I say we stop hanging in the tarvern, and get something done!"
"Yeah!" Yelled the crowd.
"So, I thought we shall revoloutionise!" Moy said. "We shall go in pairs, except SS, who will go on his own- Oh look, here's Suyo now! I was just about to say he'd be with four. It seems Niklaw isn't here as well, though.
"Do it for me smiling!" Ridder said, and with those words spoken, the building was immediatly empty, except for SuperSpongerific, who waited for the very moment. "Time to go. NOW LETS DO THIS!" As he rushed off.
(Thanks SuperSpongerific)
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 8th, 2010, 3:36 pm

...so I'm fired?
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby Zed98 » June 8th, 2010, 3:38 pm

MessengerOfYahweh wrote:...so I'm fired?


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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 8th, 2010, 3:39 pm

...but you are... so...
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Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
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It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
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Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby Zed98 » June 8th, 2010, 3:42 pm

MessengerOfYahweh wrote:...but you are... so...


You can make your own verson of this story. (Just don't use the title of my title)
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 8th, 2010, 3:44 pm

I created this storyline though...
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Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby Zed98 » June 8th, 2010, 3:50 pm

At least part of it however...
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby Kimonio » June 8th, 2010, 4:30 pm

Can I say one thing?





I wanna be fought in that volcano level! :awe:
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby Megar » June 9th, 2010, 11:17 am

Might do some writing for this, myself.
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Re: Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 9th, 2010, 11:23 am

Well, if you guys got it, I respectfully resign as the storyboard writer.
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I switch my signature a lot. If you wanna see some of my past ones, here you go.
Silent Conversations and a Crow's Final Song!
My latest story, and one of my personal favorites. A girl bound in silence finds the words to say to her prospective girlfriend as they visit her religious father in a dusty town on the edge of Kansas, where the crows' migration south brings forth anchored memories, the path to resolution, and a new start.

Form (25quared)
This might be like nothing you've seen before.
Updated Works! Some of my past best and current stuff: show
Writing Works!
Fanfic: Shut Up and Dance
why do I write so much about dancing you don't dance you've never danced in your entire life
lying little ♥♥♥♥ with your ♥♥♥♥ story ♥♥♥♥ you
also Diddy/Lucina <3

Fanfic: Worth a Thousand Words
Because the world needed a Samus/Dedede story
Fanfic: Ecstatic Silence
Just wanted to write and ♥♥♥♥ like this happens, you'd think I'd know better.
Fanfic: Far From the Edge
It's a dance that's been a long time coming for a brand new man and an unchanging woman, but once one takes the plunge there's no falling back up.
Original: Jealous Ghosts of the Mississippi
The story of Rachel meeting Amber after a lifetime of silence and being shunned
Original: Your Hand in Mine
One of my most personal stories about a dangerous romance. Now to be published in a college lit journal!
-------------------------
Recent LDC Work:
Level Series: Leaves From The Vine (ft Star King)
For the 29th LDC, a theme of grassland taken through the growth of our designing society. Won the 29th LDC!
--
Levels at Large:
Level Topic: Collection of MoD's Levels!
If you've ever wanted to see any level I made worth a damn, go here! From the quiet 14th LDC entrant Finis to the megasmash level series Dark, you can find links here!
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