Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

[Megar]

Well, if you guys got it, I respectfully resign as the storyboard writer.

You've done a good job.
But Zed did say in the topic he'd be doing this, so it's either
1. You couldn't be bothered making your own.
2. You haven't been reading the topic.
It definately one or two.

[StarF]

Your aware of my plot ... Yes?

[MessengerOfDreams]

AND MINE?

[StarF]

AND MINE?

You haven't even been confirmed yet. But if i can have these permissions I can accept you.

[Sonicfan253]

Zed, I already made this topic! WHY...WHY!!!!!!! MY TOPIC HAS 0 REPLIES AND YOU JUST COPY IT?

[Blablob]

Zed98 is the creator of Runouw.com: Raymond's Return. His story follows the actual storyline of the game, whereas yours is just fan-made.

[Sonicfan253]

Well its not fair that I have 0 replies and its been over 74 HOURS!

[nin10mode]

Gee, let's looks at some of your responses to others in this sub-forum, Sonicfan:

Oh come on, internet explorer is not that bad! im using it right now! *internet explorer haters start mobbing me*

Buffoner! YOU COMPLETELY COPIED MY THREAD! God. Why Buffooner?

Im really disappointed right now

Ill join *raises hand measly*

I am going to help Kimonio finish this story. Sorry for the big bump!

Only once have you written a real review.
Only once have you found something positive to say.
At least be glad someone actually included you in a story for once Sonicfan.
Stop thinking only about yourself. Review a good story for once, because I'm sure that LIAL is nowhere near a good story. Read TLT, Cylce, TRC... And then, write POSITIVE REVIEWS instead of stating the negative of things, or saying things as if you didn't even read the story.

[MessengerOfDreams]

Okay! I'll stop whining and being rude and everything! (possible paraphrasion)

>_>

[nin10mode]

Okay! I'll stop whining and being rude and everything! (possible paraphrasion)

>_>

I wasn't there! <_< Either that, or I wasn't paying attention to the chat. <_>
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Looking at the story now, I'm not sure if this'll be a long one. You pretty much summed up the conflict in 3 paragraphs. o_0 I hope the chapter will be a lot longer, which it probably will, I assume. I won't give you a rating yet, because there isn't much to rate. But when this gets longer, I'll be happy to make a full review.