Runouw.com: Raymond's Return (Story)

[Worst_master]

Well...good ideas, like the programming one, (Just the title).

But, remeber, it is too short... or it is jsut the intro..

[Zed98]

But, remeber, it is too short... or it is jsut the intro..

This is only the intro.

[Megar]

Me makey Chapter: (Cuz me can't be bothered waiting)

Chapter 1: The Meeting
After all this mess, with Runouw being kidnapped and Zed running off, SuperSpongerific invited Moy and Ridder over to his house to talk about the disaster.
"I can't believe he's back." SuperSpongerific said. "How is he really back? I mean, he was IP BANNED! TWICE!"
"Well, I don't know, but he's back alright." Moy said.
"Zed can't do it on his own." Ridder said.
Suddenly, an idea whizzed through SuperSpongerific's head.
"I GOT IT!" He thought. "Guys! I have an idea!" He yelped.
"WHAT?" Moy asked.
"Have a meeting, split up maybe into 2's, and find Raymond! It's are only chance!" SS replied.
And somehow, so mysteriously, as if it was forced by Chuck Norris, a smile glistened across Ridder's face.
"Looks like somebody likes it." Moy whispered to SS.
"Well, what are we waiting for! Let's go!" Ridder yelled.
"HOLD IT!" Said a voice. "Don't get to excited, kid." He said, as he walked around the corner to reveal himself as a Spammer!
"COME ANY NEARER AND I'LL WIPE YOUR FREAKIN FACE OFF!" SS screamed, holding up one of the 7 Legendary Super Stars.
But as quick as Sonicfan253, the Spammer knocked the 3 clean out, and took the Super Star. When they woke up, they started the meeting.
"Blablabalablalalalalal" Was all heard before the meeting.
"BE QUIET, DAMNIT!" SS yelled. Silence came to be. "Alright, so we all know Runouw has been kidnapped by Raymond, Zed's chased him, Suyo's went up for surveillence on what Raymond is doing, and we, we are doing nothing. I say we stop hanging in the tarvern, and get something done!"
"Yeah!" Yelled the crowd.
"So, I thought we shall revoloutionise!" Moy said. "We shall go in pairs, except SS, who will go on his own- Oh look, here's Suyo now! I was just about to say he'd be with four. It seems Niklaw isn't here as well, though.
"Do it for me smiling!" Ridder said, and with those words spoken, the building was immediatly empty, except for SuperSpongerific, who waited for the very moment. "Time to go. NOW LETS DO THIS!" As he rushed off.

[Worst_master]

GOod, but why taht still chapeter 1? I waited a long time.....Maybe too many chats?

[MessengerOfDreams]

I don't really think you nailed our characters...

[Megar]

I don't really think you nailed our characters...

I'm not cool with personalities. Really.

[MessengerOfDreams]

Ridder=dark and mysterious.

Moy=Positive

[General Guy 101]

I got 1 question can I be fought in the antartic or a really Cold place
That is where Nintendogeek64 Came from on his Journey to Zed's City

[Megar]

I got 1 question can I be fought in the antartic or a really Cold place
That is where Nintendogeek64 Came from on his Journey to Zed's City

Zed's City? WUT? This is freakin RUNOUW.COM.

[Worst_master]

I got 1 question can I be fought in the antartic or a really Cold place
That is where Nintendogeek64 Came from on his Journey to Zed's City

Zed's City? WUT? This is freakin RUNOUW.COM.

Yah, I have a suggestion, like if it is Runouw's city, but maybe you can make a "Zed98 area/ road/ street in the city".