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Judge Runouw

Postby General Guy 101 » June 14th, 2010, 12:36 pm

Detective:Fourinone
Cop 1:Niklaw
Cop 2:SuperYoshi
Judge:Runouw


Story Line:There Once was a Judge.His Name was Runouw.He never chats at all.
Chau and Shadow Blade

*Chau and Shadow blade goes into court*
Runouw Said "So Chau, you reregged" Chau said "Yes, Yes I did" Runouw Said "for what reason" Chau ">_> I don't want to talk about it" "He Pm'ed me and said that he wanted to be banned" said Niklaw."Really Chau, No I mean really Why" Said Superyoshi.Runouw Said "Guess like he ain't gonna talk" "Now let's get over to Shadow blade" Said Superyoshi "Time to get the detective".*Detective Fourinone goes into court*."So give us some information that we know that he is a rereg of Chau" Said Superyoshi in a Firm voice.*Chau sweating*."So we got the IP, Same and that is all we needed, Right" said Fourinone."Sure that is all we needed" said Superyoshi."Niklaw get the ban hammer" said Runouw."I'm sorry" said Niklaw while swinging that old ban hammer."Now you are vanished from runouw.com for all your life until Niklaw can't take it anymore" said Runouw."Cya Chau" Said the Crowd Sadly."So this is it" Said Chau"."Get Shadow Blade vanished too" said Runouw.WAM!! went the Ban hammer and hit shadow blade in the chest.
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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby General Guy 101 » June 14th, 2010, 12:37 pm

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Re: Judge Runouw

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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby Avo » June 14th, 2010, 6:13 pm

I can't really give you a fully detailed review since there is not a lot written. But it does interest me. Just watch for grammar. 7/10
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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby MessengerOfDreams » June 14th, 2010, 6:40 pm

Except he got it all wrong and totally went out of his way to insult one of our most beloved members
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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby Demonik » June 14th, 2010, 10:40 pm

I don't see how he's insulting chau here. It seems he's insulting the mods, because we all sounds like fools. By what was written, it seems as though we didn't look into it WHATSOEVER. XD

And Chau wanted to get banned for different reasons. He isn't a criminal. You might want to morph Chau's character a bit more to better suit him, I suppose. :P
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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby Worst_master » June 14th, 2010, 11:11 pm

Well, really, good idea, but... Nik's right. Aznchau4ever maybe not good for this.

Also, need longer, really short. Read in 1 min. (Quick eyes) :roll:
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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby Avo » June 15th, 2010, 3:04 am

True, maybe just make up stories like a bunch of Forum stories on here.
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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby MICrophone » June 15th, 2010, 9:04 am

Concept: :D :D :D
Everything Else: :( :( :(

Er…you need serious work on your writing. You need to learn things like grammar and paragraphs and indentation. You didn't develop this at all. The idea was really quite good, but this needs a lot of work.
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Re: Judge Runouw

Postby Worst_master » June 15th, 2010, 10:05 pm

Well, yah, why taht your first "Intro" jus thvae a lot lot lot of chat? Like a Chat box......
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