Runouw's Forum - Intro: Chapter 1

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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby Buff_ » September 26th, 2009, 6:51 am

Cool story. Now all I do is wait for you to get more free time so you can carry on. :D
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby PhyscoKamek » September 27th, 2009, 9:04 am

The best story ever!
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I would be honored if I was in the story. (XD)
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby TrappedTime » September 27th, 2009, 1:30 pm

Chapter 2


Suyo, Four, Niklaw, and Brando look at Nero with shock on their faces.

"I knew this would happen. But how?" Asked Four.

"It......it was...." Nero tried to say.

"No! Don't you SAY it! If you-" Said TheOne.

"It was...... TheOne......." Said Nero, but he fell to the floor with a thud.

Niklaw exclaimed "I told you to go to the Rules Fortress! But no. You just spammed me out of the way! This was all of your fau-"

Then Suyo stepped in; "No, Niklaw just stop. We can't do anything about him while we're already having a war."
Then Suyo erects his arm with quick speed, knocking another troll's head off.
"Look. I told you, Niklaw told you," Niklaw shakes his head in agreemant, "And I even gave you warnings. But look at what you did. You spammed the fortress so much, it just blew apart. I'm sorry, but we have to execute you."

Ridder steps in front of TheOne, claiming "Hey! You will NOT kill one of our members, JUST because he killed one of our fortresses. Look, *cough* he still has time to learn. He even promised he would change. So, don't *cough* execute him. Please, for the sake of-"

But a troll stabs TheOne in the back.
"Nooooo!" Yelled Brando.
"Aaaugh!!!" And Brando roundhouse kicks him in the back of the face.

"By the way Brando, did you close the gate?" asked Niklaw.
"Was I supposed to? 'Cuz I did *sob*" he asked.

"Good, now all we have to do is get back and keep them out." said Niklaw.

And the gang leave the field to go hide in their secret sanctum.
"Guys.....? I think we forgot Ridder..." Said Suyo.


To be continued...

Hope you liked my addition.
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby super smiley bros » September 27th, 2009, 1:44 pm

This is AWESOME I mean, like, totally.could you include...me, pwease :lol: .
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby Eliwood 1 » September 27th, 2009, 2:47 pm

and me!
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Though Matthew, Sothe, Heather, and Colm are better
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby XThecommander » September 27th, 2009, 7:46 pm

include me also....
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby Demonik » September 28th, 2009, 7:22 am

TheBetterGamer, nice chapter, but isn't this brando's story? :P
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby TrappedTime » September 28th, 2009, 11:07 am

Yeah, but I love writing, and wanted everyone to see how creative I am.

Sorry if I messed anything up... :?
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby brandoprojectm » September 28th, 2009, 11:14 am

Well, you didn't cause any harm or anything, but since I already got a plot going and stuff, it doesn't count as the real story. Your writing is well, but it could improve, too. ;)
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Re: Runouw's Forum - Chapter 1

Postby victor12 » September 30th, 2009, 6:43 am

include me pl0x? its boys' day today, so... you know.
WOOT IM IN RUNOUW'S FORUM!!!i mean the story
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