Runouw's Final Destination

[xpo20]

"17/20" MoD, the judge of the 7th Last Legacy LDC, said.

"YES!" Avo screamed.

"Nice, Avo." I complimented.

"Nice." Chau said.

Newgen was sleeping.

"Your up, Newgen." MIA said as he shook him.

"Yeah, yeah..." Newgen said. "I hope its good" He rubbed his eyes.

"8/20" MoD said.

"Oh..." He sauntered over to the bench.

Blab walked in. "Oh, heres the level. Sorry, I had TONS of homework."

He handed it in, but then... it started.

Apparently, a car outside had hit a rock and oil was coming out. It was able to slip through the door, and started towards the fire place.

I stopped it. "Whoa, that was close." But, I made a horrible mistake of stepping on it, where most of the oil went into the fire place.

It made the fire big enough to cause a fire. The worst thing was... a gun was next to the fire on a desk. The desk caught on fire.

Barely, we made it out. Except Newgen, he was still sleeping. Also, Avo, he slept too. We have to remember the car was the source of the fire.

Chau ran towards the car, then I figured out where the oil came from.

"Wait, Chau-!" I screamed, but it was too late. The car blew up on him, his body flew towards MIA's head, and his head got blown off.

MoD and Blab ran towards the street, and MoD was hit by a car. Blab kept going, and then the explosion sent him flying over the roof of Niklaw's tavern.

I didn't know what to do, but then the LDC place blew up. It didn't kill me, it broke my back.

The roof of it blew off, and killed me afterwards.

"Oh-" Newgen said again.

"No, we're all gonna die! We gotta get outta here!" I blurted out. MoD and Blab didn't do anything, but everyone else including me ran.

"Huff, huff, huff..." We all took a breath. We were at Niklaw's tavern now, safe from the fire.

"What's all this about?" Chau said.

"I saw a vision... The LDC place is gonna catch on fire." I said, and it bursted up in flames.

"Hey, hey! My car!" Newgen announced as he went towards the car with the oil leak.

Avo noticed and screamed "STOOOOOOOOP!" He ran towards him to stop him... the car exploded.

Everyone went silent. No one would move an inch after they saw the discarded bodies fall in front of them.

"We might have a problem..." Chau said as we walked to the chat.

"How so? We're lucky. We didn't die." MIA said.

"No, he's right. Something is wrong. I think we were supposed to die then." I said.

Just then I saw, in my mind, a spammer, a cigarette, fire, and a beer can.

"Ugh... I saw another vision, but this one is not as descriptive. I saw a cigarette, a beer can, a spammer, and fire." I said.

"Ok... Good luck with figuring it out." Chau said as he walked off.

"Wait... Look out for spammers. All of you." I said.

I went on google and found that people have seen these visions, but they die in the same order they did in the vision. This was the first time it happened to Runouw.com.

I called them over and turned the TV on. What happened just as I called them... was crazy.

Chau was walking down the road when a spammer was in front of him.

"So... You gonna keep walkin' or ya gggonna get P4WN'D?!" The spammer said.

"Eh, I'll take the other one." Chau said as he flip-kicked the spammer.

He landed on his feet and went for a crotch shot. A crotch shot he got. It made the spammer go through a wall.

"How are you so good...cough..." The spammer asked.

Chau got his report sword out. "Im azn." He sliced the spammer as his cigarrete flew out of his mouth.

A beer can popped out of the Spambot and fell on the ground.

"Heh... Stay away from spammers INDEED." Chau said as he picked up the beer can and noticed the cigarette was burning th News building.

He quickly threw out the beer... But it was actually oil in a beer can so it got bigger.

"DAMN YOU, DEATH!" Chau said while being surrounded by the flames. Just then... It was 8:00 exactly. That means everything turned 8-bit. And just like video games, there were lives. He only had a minute so he had to kill himself...

But then fate kicked in. The fire turned into a boss. And then... that means if Chau couldn't beat the boss in under a minute, he would reappear at the same boss spot if he died.

Horrible fate... "Oh, please, this willl be easy..." He said as he slashed him. "No... I can't use my hands or feet... AND my sword barely hurts him?"

He got killed at that second... 8:00:48. He wasn't giving in so easily. He tried to destroy the monster with a level up; Mod!

He got the ban hammer, he almost hit him... at 8:01.

He was just on fire now... so he wasn't dead. He went back to a regular member, and got his ice sword. He sliced the flames, and left an opening so he could get out.

"Whoa... I guess I'm luck-." Then the news building fell on top of him. Wow. After ALL that and his head was STILL on fire. But thats beside the point.

Back at my house, MIA just got there. I still had the TV on, the news reporter told the whole incident, and I still wonder how the news reporter survived.

"Where's Chau?" MIA asked.

"MIA... Chau just died." I said.

"Yeah, now our lives are completely boring..." MIA said.

"I know whats going on... Your going to die." I said.

Three minutes of crying later, I got him to calm down.

"Sniff... But Im so young..." MIA said before I slapped him.

"WE BOTH WILL DIE. THERE IS NOTHING WE CAN DO." I announced.

"Ok... Who else will die?" MIA asked.

"I don't know. Whoever survived the LDC blow up." I said.

The news reporters were talking about a survivor of the LDC incident. It was Blab.

"Wait, he's supposed to be dead... Blab is next to die! First Chau died, and around that time Blab was running near the car! Thats it!" I said.

"Ummm... What're you talking about?" MIA said.

"Long story, lets go!" I said.

More coming soon.

[SuperStar X]

Nice Story Xpo, I like it 10/10 stars

[Newgeneration]

Wait a sec...I slept through all that? Sounds like what I would have done, though I can't sleep that well, I seem to ignore every thing around me as if I were in deep sleep... But yeah, nice story.

[xpo20]

No... it cought your head on fire, you ran around, then tripped.

[Buff_]

...it broke your back and yet you still ran. It would have paralyzed you if you still lived.. well something like that. Then it killed you, and you still ran.


Anyway, this needs loads of work. There are inconsistencies with your writing and it is very jumbled. Also you just state what is happening, there's nothing to it. There's no detail or anything and you just have random things happening. Nothing is explained and so I don't know what's going on.




Current rating: 4/10

[xpo20]

No, I broke my back and was un-able to move. Have you EVER seen a Final Destination movie? Your not exactly supposed to know whats going on until THEY figure out what's going on. Im sorry if I wanted to follow the rules of death. Chapter 1 coming soon.