Moderation

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Prologue

I had just woke up. I got dressed and left my account room, to head off to the forums. The room on the other side of the hallway was Forum 23. I always wondered just what was in there, and what was happening in there. Just before I opened the forum door, MOD walked out, depressed. I asked him whats up. "Nothing's up. Everything's down now." He mumbled.
"Why?" I asked him, without much of hestitation. MOD then thought for a moment, then he said;
"They decided to demote me, because alot of people flame me because I don't do the job right, so Suyo said it's the only choice. They also said to give my mod status to a trustable user of my choice. Most people probaly wouldn't listen. Thanks for your thought, anyway." He looked even more upset now. I thought I shouldn't of asked. Then an idea sparked into my head.
"Hey, MOD." I said. "I have an idea." He still looked sad, but this idea was oughta turn the frown upside down. "How about you give the status to me, and i'll try and get you your job back! Well, after a week or two, anyway." MOD took a slight smile. "Ok." He replied. "Heres my Moderation key. you use this to do what you need to do on the forums. Good luck. Go in and speak to Suyo and the others." He gave me the key. The wielder of a Moderation Key has responsibility over the forums, and must use his key wisely. It also gives access to Forum 23, which is were it all happens. But what we both didn't know was things would never be the same, as he gave the key to me. I walked into Forum 23.

I was greeted by a familiar voice. "Welcome, PurpleFawful." Said the Voice of Superyoshi. "I see MOD has chosen you. Well, first thing you need to do, before you can access the room where my voice is coming from, you must go and find a topic, and use your Moderation Key and do something sensible with it. Choose wisely." I decided this is what I must do, so I went and found a particular topic that seemed to be unsticked. But should be stickied. This topic was Demonik's Tarvern. It was probaly unstickied for the test. On the way back, I saw an innocent looking spam topic about to come through to access. I decided if I was to delete it, The other Mods would be pleased. I deleted the spam topic, and went back Forum 23. "You have done well, PurpleFawful." The voice of Suyo yet again said. "Please come in." I walked into the true Forum 23 place. If I was to tell you how it looks, you would seem to explode of excitement, so I shall just say It was Amazing.

End Of Prologue

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Hopefuly Chapter 1 will get me reviews.

Chapter 1: Forum 23
I walked into the room, which looked like a Tech Factory Of Ideas.
And in the center of the room-was the man of the forums. Runouw. He shouldn't really be much of a special person, because in other forums, there were admins like him. But something about him, made him special. He was annormal looking man, having blonde hair, glasses, a blue t-shirt and black trousers. No special machinery or anything like that shiz. "PurpleFawful. Welcome to Forum 23, where it all happens. Today, we have demoted MoD. We lied to hm, because we will re-hire him. We needed him to pick any user which he thought deserved a position. First order of buisness, is to re-hire him. We'll leave this to you, PurpleFawful. Give him this key. this is Mod K Model #361. Go on." Runouw said to me. I left the room. Moy was hanging in the chatroom. "MoD! Good news!" I said.
"What.....?" He quietly said.
"We decided to re-hire you!" I yelled. Moy boosted into an excitment super burst. "I knew it." I thought to myself.
"WAHOO!!" He shouted. "Let's go right now!" He said as he ran off. We both got back, and I deleted 1 or 2 spam topics on the way back. I couldn't stop thinking though, "I've been a mod for less than half an hour, and I've had to delete 3 spam topics?" We got back, and had another mystery on our hands. Where were Blab, Suyo, Foru and The Big R?

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Hmm…this is all right. It could use some work though. The story is not developed so well…you lack description, and so you're kind of telling us what is happening rather than showing us through detail. If you work on that, it will be a lot better. Also, your grammar could use some work.

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Thanks MIC. Im not the best, and I know that. New chapter should be up Friday-Sunday. Its gonna be a big one.