Alucard A Legend.

[AlucardX60]

So you may be wandering to yourself, "Another story really Ace?" Yes another story.
See I want my other story to be much more epic then it is so I decided to start making another story that I can kinda play with till I get things right.
I was thinking about it when it hit me, seriously I hit me. I decided to make a story about my life on the forums. from how i got here to how I became a legend. And now your wandering "A legend you say?" yes reader, a legend. which I what I will be toying with.

But I'm talking to much, I should just let my story speak for it's self. (that is if you can make sense of it.)

Prologue A legend is born.

So there I was, walking through the most entertaining town on the web, YouTube. When I see and ad for someone's shop stating that you could play free Mario games there. This interested me, I went to the shop and the first thing I play was a NSMW rip off that was only three levels long, unsatisfied I play another, similar game, this didn't satisfy me either. As I was looking for a more interesting game I find one a little more retro. this was the legendary SM63.

After having a fair share of the classic, but still entertaining story mode I check out the LD. The first thing I thought was. "Dam*, this here be epic." and as I messed around with it some more it just got better and better. I wanted to submit my n00bish level so I had to go to Runouw city, there I became a official member of the city, and submitted my level, it got very bad reviews that I was not satisfied with. So I created my own gallery to show off my levels and let the people tell me what they think. It was only a week or so after that, that things started to change. Supplies started to dwindle, and no one knew why, except, of course, for Runouw himself. But he never said anything. He just stayed up in the great Runouw Tower everyday of every passing week.

As the supplies dwindle more and more, more and more members where questioning this Infamous Runouw, "Who does he think he is, starving us to death" "Is he just hogging all the water to fill his 200' swimming pool"
and other similar things where said. I must admit that even I was starting to question him. "I CAN'T TAKE THIS ANYMORE!!! What does Runouw just think we can live on 1 cup of water and a package of ramen a day!" I was humbly discussing the matter with one of my few friend, TheBetterGamer "Oh come on, one package of ramen is a lot for one such as your self" TBG stated. "I know, but sometimes I need me some mashed potatoes, you know what I’m talking about?" I replied "No... not really-" "WELL YOU SHOULD!!! How can you side with him at a time such as this?" I Interrupted him with a shout "well I-" "I don't want to hear it, you can just shut up. Gosh you think he's just gonna give us more supplies out of nowhere... ANSWER ME!!!" I again interrupted with an even loader shout "Well I think tha-" "SHUT UP!!!"

"Is there a Problem here?" It was FourInOne, one of the few remaining authority figures. "Nope no problem at all, my friend TBG here, and I where just practicing our lines for a play." I had replied. "Oh yeah I heard you two where in a play, what characters are you?" asked the mod "Well I play some gay sounding dude Romeo, and TBG here is some other gay sounding dude Juliet." "O_O You do know that Juliet is a girl... that kisses Romeo at some point." "WHAT!!! No one told us that, this is an outrage, this is ridiculous, this is facepalm, this is a Kodak moment. What's worse is that where both bound by contract. *disappointed look*" I replied shocked.

"Well you two love birds have fun okay." Four said as he walked away. "Well that got rid of him." I said with a sigh of relief. I was the that A GIANT SPAM BOT RIPPED THE ROOF OFF OF MY SHOP!!!
"whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa, whoa.... whoa. What are you talking about Alucard?" Said princespeach as I looked up from the story book. "What so a giant spam bot, that I guess Four didn't see, just rips the roof off of your shop randomly?" she continued "Shut up it's in the book!" I shouted "Yeah, that you wrote." replied princess "Oh just listen to the story."

So there we where just TBG and me against this giant spam bot, with our backs to a cliff- "You said you where in your shop." Princess interrupted "Do you want me to read the story or not!" "Fine, whatever continue." With little choice left we had to jump off and hope that we land in the river below, and that it was deep enough for us to land safely. It wasn't the end. "WHAT!!! Stopping there? This story just got started!" shouted Princess "You want more? Fine." I continued. I landed safely but the same could not be said for poor TBG.

Meanwhile at the Runouw city.

Blablob was placing a bucket on top of a door and was waiting for MOY to walk throug- oops sorry wrong part of he city. TBG and the other mods- "You just said TBG died, and was never a-" Princess had interrupted trying to bring sanity to this story "QUIET!!!" I shouted back, and continued. TBG and the other mods where having a lie shouting cake, when a Spam Bot tripped the sensors outside of Runouw Tower.


"So what happened next?" "You will find out tomorrow, NOW GO TO BED!!! Man I'm getting tired of this, just go to bed while I go get even more drunk at Demonik's Tavern.!"

[AlucardX60]

Chapter 1 Someone gets dead

"Hey there Ace, what will you be having today?" Asked Bartender MIC "I'll have the usual." I replied, After a while UsuarioTHF walked in and sat down next to me. "Man if I ever have to read another effin story I'm going to explode!" I said. "I know what you mean, they are pretty weird." He replied "But the kids like to listen to them." he continued. Then a rather shady man in a trench coat walked in and sat down at one of the tables and ordered a drink. "Hey MIC, do you know that guy?" I asked the bartender "What guy?" the bartender replied puzzled. "The guy at the table over there." I replied more puzzled than MIC "Ace, you and Usu are the only ones here. I think you've had a little to much root beer, I'm going to have to ask you to leave and sober up." So I got up and left, as I was passing by the man he looked up at me and gave me a evil grin. I know he's real, was looking at me for shadowsquid's sake. As I was walking home I noticed a man following me. I was passing a Sprite comic shop when he went in instead of following me more. 'So this was a coincidence?' I thought, then I heard screams coming from the shop, I raced inside to find the shop owner, SuperSpongerific, dead, and all of his comics and money gone. As I was still standing there shocked the mods, Blabblob, and MICrophone raced in.

"Ace where you that drunk!" Shouted MIC "I didn't kill him!" I shouted back "Well he sure didn't kill himself! Poor SS, he was just a happy comic maker just a few minuets ago. But you had to ruin that, didn't you." Blablob said backing up MIC "I told you I didn't kill him!" I stated again "Look whether you did or not, where going to have to take you in for interrogation." stated MIC as he put the handcuffs on me and put me in his car. Once in the station I was brought into a interrogation room, for, well interrogating. After sitting there for a few minuets Superyoshi walks in and sits down on the other side of the table. "So I hear that your a killer now Ace." He stated "I didn't kill him." I replied calmly "well all the evidence is against that theory, you where drunk, and the only one there for miles." Said the Global mod "I told you I didn't kill him!" I shouted "And it seems you have a temper. Here's what I think happened, you go in and ask for a comic, you think the price is to high so you ask him to lower it a little, when he doesn't you get mad, take out your sword and run him through. Does that sound correct to you." "No, and why would I kill SS?" I asked "I don't know, you tell us Mr. killer." replied Suyo.

As the interrogation continued MIC and Blab where behind the false mirror listening to the conversation. "And to think we almost made him a mod." said MIC to Blab "I know, this is very unfortunate, we were almost 'FourAce's and a MICroBlob' that would have been epic. *sad face*" "Oh well, I guess we'll just have to settle for 'FourMICroBlobs'" MIC said with a sad face "Hey want to go get a pizza?!" Blob randomly asked "Sure!" MIC answered.

Back in the interrogation room "Well I'm sorry Ace but I'm going to have to give you a 2 year sentence to the Ban log jail." Suyo said as he left the room. 'what is happening to me, this is insane, I know I didn't kill SS' I thought.
I was then that Suyo walked back in "It seems MIC and Blab are out for pizza, just when I needed them most too, and Four's on break. So I'm going to have to take you myself." Suyo said informing me of the situation. I had no choice but to go with him. As I was in the armored truck with some other prisoners, something strange happened 'Something strange is going on' I though- hey wait I just said that 'Oh sorry narrator. which is oddly me ' I thought. We stopped, the prison bus never stopped.

Then a force hit us so hard that the bus rolled a few times before stopping on it's side. I seemed to be the only one conscious... or alive. A man entered the bus, it was a man wearing blue jeans, a black tee-shirt and a open black leather jacket with a high collar. "You need to get out of here now!" the man told me "Wait who are you? What do you want?" I asked "I have no time to explain now, but I promise you that everything will make sense if you come with me." the man replied in a hurry. Seeing as I have no other choice, I went with him. He took me to the abandoned SMB.X city, which, to my surprise, wasn't that abandoned. The place was rather rich with people, there where plenty of shops and galleries. this place seemed like a utopia, In the center of the city there was a big building tall building. "That’s where we're going." the Man told me.

Once we were there I asked the man "Alright I fallowed you, but when do I get my answers?" "In do time AlucardX60." He answered. We took the elevator to the top floor, at the top was an office. "I have your man Red." the man told the a man sitting at the desk there "thank you Kaysarian." said the man sitting at the desk, "Why don't you have a seat Ace. You are probably wandering why I brought you here? Right? Well, we where developing a device that would let only certain people see and hear you, this device was to be used for me and the mods if we wanted to discuss somethings secretly. We only recently found out that this device was stolen by a man called 'LinkDroid' or 'L2'. From the intelligence we collected here we discovered that he was targeting you." "So did he flip the bus, him or Kasarian?" I interrupted. "It was Raymond, I got lucky and was able to shoot him with a tranquilizer, which is why we needed to hurry." Kaysarian answered "So why is he targeting me?" I asked "We haven't found that out yet, but where guessing that either the machine doesn't work on you, or he needs more power to control it and you have said power." Red continued "Great so that psycho who still thinks the mods are stupid, wants to take my power so he can use said device for?" I interrupted him. "We don't know for sure yet, but where guessing Internet dominance, or at least dominance over Runouw City." Red replied "Even better!" I said with obvious sarcasm.

[Megar]

Oh come on! Every story Im in I have to die?! DOH!

[MessengerOfDreams]

SuperSponge is the forum's Hilary Swank. O_o

Anyway, this looks too WTF for me to read.

[AlucardX60]

Only the prologue, after that thinks start to make sense again.May be I should change the title to "things start to make sense"

[MessengerOfDreams]

And your editing is as bad as mine used to be. I'ma take a paragraph of your story and show you the right way.

"Hey there Ace, what will you be having today?" Asked Bartender MIC.

"I'll have the usual." I replied,and after a while UsuarioTHF walked in and sat down next to me.

"Man if I ever have to read another effin story I'm going to explode!" I said.

"I know what you mean, they are pretty weird." He replied, and then continued"But the kids like to listen to them."

Then a rather shady man in a trench coat walked in and sat down at one of the tables and ordered a drink.

"Hey MIC, do you know that guy?" I asked the bartender.

"What guy?" the bartender (why do you call him MIC and then THE BARTENDER?) replied puzzled.

"The guy at the table over there." I replied more puzzled than MIC (oh great back to calling him MIC)

"Ace, you and Usu are the only ones here. I think you've had a little to much root beer, I'm going to have to ask you to leave and sober up."

So I got up and left, as I was passing by the man he looked up at me and gave me a evil grin. I know he's real, was looking at me for shadowsquid's sake. As I was walking home I noticed a man following me. I was passing a Sprite comic shop when he went in instead of following me more. 'So this was a coincidence?' I thought, then I heard screams coming from the shop, I raced inside to find the shop owner, SuperSpongerific, dead, and all of his comics and money gone. As I was still standing there shocked the mods, Blabblob, and MICrophone raced in.

There we go. In dialogue, always enter between speaking people.

Always call people by one name.

And watch your word organization. Aye?

[AlucardX60]

I never really liked that style for conversations, it just make everything feel longer then it is, and he is called MIC and "The Bartender" here because right now he has titles, calling him MIC all the time feels a little repetitive.

BTW, kinda late but, YAY POST!!!

[MessengerOfDreams]

I, and every other human on this earth, hate reading that cramped style.