Ruby Swan

[Silver_Hide_Studios]

I co-writ it with Adrian and his friend Matthew:

Prolouge: ( Mine )
The wind was raging across the deserted fields. In the high grass an old Nazi prison, its rused doors broken. In the disance four bikes were zooming across the dusy floor. Each biker had a black hoodie, with a red chinesse dragon on the back. As they turned the corner an explosion shattered the silence. The central biker suddenly jerked the handle and slammed into a tree. The others looked scared and sped up. More explosions sounded and others fell down. When they stoped only two bikers remained. They rode on for a little time before the ground colaped under one of them. As he clammbered out the other looked a the river. After a while an explosion of paint slammed them both into the river. As they stood up Exing said "Call our alies, the war has begun!"

One chapter per two days.
(Sorry for the speling, my keboard is broken.)

[Silver_Hide_Studios]

Chapter 1 part 1 ( Adrian )

Barnaby Miller was walking down the main street of Newquay with his mother, Alison, and his step-dad, Percy. As he was walking he noticed a Japanese shop, "Hey!" he said stoping his mum, "A Japo shop!" his mother smiled as they walked into the shop. Barnaby always loved Japan, and he was amazed by the shop. He triped over and landed on a girl in a pink kimono. "Sorry" he hufed as he was getting up, "I am really sorry." He said again. The girl smiled, "Dosen't matter." Said the girl. Then she smiled, "Whats your name?" Barnaby hufed, "Barnaby. Whats yours?", "Yuki." As they looked at each other Yuki said, "Whats that thing on your neck?" Barnaby looked down, "Oh" He said, "My dad gave it to me when I was a kid." She stared at him, "The same thing happened to me!" She said. She showed him an emetrald necklase. "Weird" He said. They started walking out of the shop when they met his mum. "Barnaby!" She laughed, "I leave you for five minutes and you get a girlfriend!" Barnaby blushed. "MUM!"

[JacktheOrk]

Really cool, very descriptive, just try to write it like a real book like having speech on a different line ect.

[the imposter]

hi, i like the story and i will like illustrating it.