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Re: My World

Postby Blablob » November 27th, 2009, 4:51 am

Before I continue chapter 5 (which may not be soon) I must point out that this is likely to be the final chapter. :cry: :cry:


However, I don't plan on leaving the story where it is. I am gonna create a sequel, called "His World" that deals with more situations with Bryan and Alex. The story will leave off where My World is, so expect more plot twists when chapter 5 is finished. (Yeah, sorry about all the plot twists; I will try to fill them out as we go along.)
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Re: My World

Postby megamario126 » November 27th, 2009, 11:54 am

Okay. This would be an award-winning short story, though. :)
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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Re: My World

Postby Blablob » November 28th, 2009, 8:10 am

Another thing I'd like to say about the upcoming sequel is, the chapters will be longer. I will simply make the chapters in MSFT word, then paste it. I'm doing this because of the issues I've had with typing long messages.
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Re: My World

Postby megamario126 » November 28th, 2009, 8:14 am

Okey-dokey! :)
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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Re: My World

Postby Buff_ » November 28th, 2009, 9:02 am

Great story. It was different from the rest of the stories on the site, hence 1st person. And all the chapters were good, can't wait for the sequel.
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Re: My World

Postby MICrophone » November 28th, 2009, 9:11 am

Wow. Pretty good…but I feel like you left a lot open. I know that you're planning a sequel, but I felt that if you just tied up a few more loose ends and left the rest open it would have been better. Other than that, excellent! :D
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Re: My World

Postby Blablob » November 28th, 2009, 4:31 pm

marioiscool254 wrote:Wow. Pretty good…but I feel like you left a lot open. I know that you're planning a sequel, but I felt that if you just tied up a few more loose ends and left the rest open it would have been better. Other than that, excellent! :D

Yeah, sorry about all the head-hangers.
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Re: My World

Postby Kirby859 » December 1st, 2009, 2:48 pm

Nothing to really say...

EPIC SAUCE!

999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999/5 stars. Not really, but 10/5 stars. That would be crazy.
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Re: My World

Postby megamario126 » December 2nd, 2009, 5:44 pm

kirby859 wrote:Nothing to really say...

EPIC SAUCE!

999,999,999,999,999,999,999,999/5 stars. Not really, but 10/5 stars. That would be crazy.


Stop spamming, dummy. Anyways, I can't wait for your next story?
See my levels! http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic. ... 5037#p5037<--i may make a comeback to level-making
See my level series! (In progress!) http://www.runouw.com/forums/viewtopic.php?f=24&t=1011<--i still have the work doc for the world names, lvl names, all that
See my YouTube channel! My levels will be posted on there soon! https://www.youtube.com/user/VidGmr1996/videos<-- i lied
See my chatbox! http://www.xat.com/chat/room/76422579/ <--uhh..that's dead
UPDATE (Since March 31th, 2013): Coming on here may be rare. Yeah.<--'tis true
I'm that guy over there who seems to be the 12th Memeber of the Legendary 12.<--who cares anymore, i wasnt even a nice guy at the time (i was 13 at the time)
Y'know, I have infinite lives. (Using UltraGameSharkGenieActionReplayHax!) So, there's no reason to kill me. ;)<--...wha??????
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Re: My World

Postby Blablob » December 2nd, 2009, 6:02 pm

megamario126 wrote:
Stop spamming, dummy. Anyways, I can't wait for your next story?


You know, I've already started on it.
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