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NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » December 23rd, 2009, 2:08 pm

:!: **WARNING!** :!:
DOES CONTAIN BLOOD, AND SOME FOUL LANGUAGE, BUT NOT TOO MUCH. THIS IS FOR MATURE READERS!

Chapter 1
Chimera Island, landing
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Just great, Mike thought to himself as he ran, Not even ten minutes on the island, and he was getting chased by a chimera that was half tiger and half snake. The chimera was on his tail, roaring as it ran after him. He turned a corner sliding on the dirt as he went.
"♥♥♥♥," he said, his armor getting covered in dirt.
The beast had no trouble staying right behind him. Mike jumped over a fallen tree, and the chimera took a giant leap over the tree. The ground shook a little from the creature's jump. Mike looked back after he cleared the tree, and when he turned around, he realized his mistake. He hit a dead end. He turned to face the Tiger-snake looking beast, raised his assault rifle, and fired in bursts. Blood sprayed from the beast as it hit the ground. Mike shot a single round in the creature's head, just to make sure that it was dead.
He lowered his rifle and went back to the spot he turned at, and went left. He listened to the sounds of the jungle, and still could make out the faint sounds of waves crashing on the shore. He came to a dirt path, and suddenly his mission popped back into his head. His assignment was to find his brother, and bring him back alive. And then the cruel part: no survivors could be brought back, unless it was the target. The target was Frederick Leireg. He was believed to be crazy, even crazier than Dr. White. But that old fart had saved mike's life. Mike looked at his right hand. After his retarted mistake, the Doc had replaced his right arm with a metal prosthetic made only to aid in combat, and everyday living.
He heard a roaring sound. It was loud and dark. He saw a pack of chimeras, and relized that roar was actually multiple roars.
"Oh, ♥♥♥♥," he said to himself outloud.
The pack of chimeras looked like a cross between a wolf and a fox. They had red and black fur, and had a fox's tale. Their fur looked amber in the light that crept through the trees. They snareled at him, with a grin of yellow teeth showing as they slowly advanced toward him, growling.
"I look tasty?" Mike asked as they kept advancing."Guess so."
No stall in their movements, as he expected, and he raised his rifle, and shot three of them in the head. One chimera lunged at thim and threw him to the ground. With one arm, he raised his rifle and shot it in the head twice. Another lunged at him, and bit him hard. It had it's paws on his stomach and chest. It was hard to breath. Blood covered his left arm. He started to black out. The chimeras started to bite him, and he couldn't move. Blood and dirt covered the torso and the side of his armor from the bites.His grip on the rifle failed. He heard a whistling sound and turned his head to the left a little. He saw one of the chimeras drop, and saw blood spray against a tree.The other chimera ran, wimpering with it's tail between it's legs. He saw a shadow, and it looked like a girl. She had a rifle resting on her shoulder, and was holding out her hand. Was she infected? Mike found the strength to raise his pistol, and tried to pull the trigger, but everything went black, and he passed out.

Eva ran as fast as she could from the chimera behind her. The creature was part elephant and part bird. She had to jump over fallen trees and rocks. The beast behind her didn't. It plowed through a tree, sending splinters and feathers flying. The elephant-bird had yellow and orange feathers, and basically still had sharp tusks, and it's trunk looked like it was made of a bird's beak. She turned to fire her G-21 Carbine, but swore and turned to avoid getting splinters in the face. Matt and the other HAZ-MAT Troopers were behind rocks. Eva dove, and screamed over the COM, "NOW!"
A Crack sounded. Spraying blood from it's head, the creature hit the ground, shaking it.
"Thanks Slip," Eva said over the COM.
The sniper waved at her. Matt looked to Matchstik, who had the map of the island. "So," Matt asked,"Where is the outpost at, Matchstik?"
"Here, about a few klicks northwestof our position," he said, pointing to the out post on the map.
Matt nodded. "Move out, double time it to the outpost, eyes open."
"Yes sir!" the squad replied in unision.
"Well then," Eva said already walking away, "let's go."
The group followed her, then passed her in a run, in which, she followed.

Mike opened his eyes. It was hard to see. He then remembered what had happened. He looked around, and heard the clack of an assault rifle.
"So," he heard a female voice say, "you're awake"
Mike looked to his left and saw a familiar figure. He recognized the body shape from the shadow he saw before he passed out.
"Where's my katana?" Mike asked in a dark tone.
"over there," The girl said, nodding to the sword, and the other weapons on the metal shelf on the left side of the room behind her.
Mike got up, and the girl kept the rifle aimed at his head. "Hold it Major" she said. Mike turned looked at her, with a cold stare. Was she a Rebel?
The girl had long black hair, blue eyes and again, a figure that his Brother would drool over. "Who are you, Spec Ops?" Mike asked.
"How'd you know that?" The girl asked. "Your DOG tags," Mike said, nodding to them. "Whats your name and rank Trooper?"
"My name is Sayaka Lolok. And I'm a sergeant, 567th division, Hell dogs." Mike looked at her in shock, he knew that name, Lolok. He stared at her in surprise.
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Re: New Story Coming Soon! NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » December 23rd, 2009, 3:07 pm

ok, so what do you think? It's short on purpose, Can't release too much information. Project still in development.
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Ridder » December 26th, 2009, 6:29 pm

Welll, four things.

1. It could have used a bit more speaking, certainly you can implement more dialogue than this.

2. You could have described some things more, like the condition of your clothes, your injuries, how clean you were (If you were completely spotless, it either meant you were having a cakewalk or you just got here, if you were dirty, well, it's easy to tell how you were doing) and the chimera stuff, like how did the jump caused by the chimera over the tree affect the ground? Surely it caused an aftershock of some sort if it was a giant leap. You could have described how the chimeras looked in the light and how it made Mike feel.

3.Spelling errols.


4. Exactly how many characters are there going to be? It seems I was the only one to get in to this, but that's what happens when you don't completely advertise this all over chat and have a sign-up topic.
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » December 27th, 2009, 12:57 pm

Like I said, Can't reveal too much info, not really sure about size of chimeras, and the project isn't COMPLETELY done YET. And YOU'RE telling me I have spelling errors? read #3! lol :lol:

And there are a TON, mostly my other friends. Just didn't put them in yet.

And I will go back and edit the chapter(s) some more.

thanx for the feed back.
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby spookyghost » December 28th, 2009, 5:25 pm

Ridder did that on purpose to kindave tease you. But the story is okay, just describe it more!
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » January 13th, 2010, 2:45 pm

ok. get it. But this isn't the final version of the chapter, so, more things will be added.
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » January 24th, 2010, 3:58 pm

next part.
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » March 30th, 2010, 4:08 pm

Chapter 2
Outpost Pewter, Chimera Island
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Lolok. Mike knew that name. He had read the report on the evacuation of this island, and the report of the only missing trooper during the evacuation.
"I'm guessing," Saya said, still pointing the gun at Mike's head, "that by the look on your face, that you've probably read the report on the incident that happened."
The incident. That's what everyone in the HAZMAT Corp. called what happened on the island two years ago. No one names the operation, or what happend, or says that the island even exists.
"Yes, I have," said Mike sitting down on the cot in front of Saya, who tracked his movements with the sidearm. "But, the report is incomplete."
"And?"
"Put the pistol down Lieutenant, that's an order"
Saya put the safety on and holstered the sidearm, and sat on the cot opposite of Mike.
"What do you want with me?" she asked with a bit of annoyance in her voice.
"I want you to tell me where the rebel outposts are," Mike said standing up.
"What makes you think I know where it is?" she asked.
"Because," he said unfolding a map and setting it on a table in the room, "you've been here for two years, and I'm guessing you've lived here. You've had to have known of their prescence on this island."
"Yes, I knew. I saw the dropships, but," she said standing up, "I only know that they went east, toward the moutain-"
They both turned to the doorway in alarm. "Where are my weapons?," Mike asked without looking away from the door. Saya pointed to the weapon rack and unholsterd her sidearm. Mike walked over to the rack swiftly and strapped his katana sheath on his back and turned to Saya, who nodded. Someone was in the outpost.
Mike stepped past Saya, and gripped the sword's handle. He saw a shadow approaching around a corner to his left. Saya crouched against the wall and aimed her magnum at the corner to their right. A rebel with an AUGH BAR was about to turn the corner when Mike unsheathed his sword, stabbed the man in the stomach, and ran at the other four rebels. They turned and fired at him. he dodged their fire and sliced a rebel's neck, and then swung left and sliced another soldier. The other two guards tried to track Mike, but were too slow and both got slashed in the chest.
Saya fired her magnum and ducked backed behind the wall. Mike put his sword in it's sheath and picked up the AUGH BAR and fired at the rebels shooting at Saya. He downed one with a headshot. Saya ducked around the corner and fired her magnum and downed another rebel. The last one shot at her and ducked around the corner. Saya reloaded her magnum and slowly turned the corner, and crept to the doorway.The rebel turned the corner. Mike saw a flash and the rebel dropped the rifle and dropped to the ground. Blood sprayed on the inside of the doorway.
"Phoenix!" someone outside yelled. Mike knew who that was.
"Dragon," Mike yelled back, and poked around the corner with his rifle at the ready.
"Major," one of the troops came up to him. "Sir," the trooper said, "What the hell happened to you?"
"Later, get the squad inside, Swiss." Mike said going back inside. Swiss nodded and gave the "Come here" signal and the rest of the squad came in.
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Mike took the AUGH BAR he brought with him origionally and inspected it. It looked fine. He had taken ammo from the guards he killed. Saya had changed into her Black Ops uniform. It had a black digital pattern and the black bullet insignia of the Black Ops. This was an old uniform. The new insignia was a Wolf with a knife in it's mouth, and the insignia was also black.
"Who are they?" Saya asked nodding to the rest of the squad.
"Well," Mike said not looking up from cleaning his katana, "the man on your eleven is Swiss. He's actually Italian, and is in the Mafia. He is the best person I've ever seen with an automatic weapon."
Swiss nodded, and reassembled his rifle. "And the two on your right are Matt and Eva," Mike said examining the blade. Matt looked up from the map and gave a curt wave. Eva just glanced at Saya and then looked back at the map.
"The one with a sniper on his back is Matchstik," Mike said putting the sword in the sheath. Matchstik looked over to Saya and said,"Sup?"
Now that they knew the locations of the bases Mike could plan their next move. He stood up and went over to the table. "What do we have Sergeant?" he asked looking at the map.
"Well," Matt said, "The outposts are scattered, but we found one that will give us a clear path to the mountain, while still giving us enought time to run to the door without hopefully runnung into any patrols."
Mike knew that it wouldn't be as easy as it sounded. They would more than likely run into trouble at the doorway. That was a given, but it would also slow them down, giving the enemy enough time to call in reinforcements, cornering his insertion team. He thought about it. "Okay," he said, "gear up, we're gonna hit 'em while they aren't looking, and we're going to do it fast."
"Sir!" the squad replied in unision. They stood , and readied thier gear.
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » May 1st, 2010, 7:23 pm

Outpost Burrow, Chimera Island
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Lt. Anji Kimura was smoking a cigarette looking out at the water. He could barely see it. He would be able to hear it if his stupid men weren't talking so loud.
He turned to them, and in Japanese he said,"Quiet! You are so loud I can't hear myself think! Now shut up and go inside."
His men looked at him, grumbled and picked up their rifles and walked inside the outpost. Anji turned to one of his men at the laptop, and asked,"Are the sensors still up?"
The soldier looked at one of the readouts, and nodded his head, then shook it. "Sir," he said, "there was a quick flutter in one of the sensors radars. It is probably our patrol."
Anji unslung his rifle, and threw the cigarette but on the ground, after taking a long puff. He smashed it with his boot."Or," he said, blowing smoke out of his nose,"the enemy." He called to his men inside the building, "Get your weapons, the enemy approaches!" His men dropped what they were doing and scrambled for their weapons, and got into their assigned positions outside the base. Anji looked into the treeline to the east, and saw one of his men drop to the ground. He looked and saw blood pouring out of his head. He crouched down, and heard one of his men fire an RPG into the treeline. He saw the explosion, and heard a bullet whizz by his head, and ran for cover inside the door way, and his men followed.
"Sir," one man said,"where is the fire coming from?"
Anji looked at the man and simply shrugged his shoulders. One soldier started firing out of one of the small rectangular holes. "I see one!" he said, and loaded the turrets' bolt and fired, sweeping left and right, in bursts. An explosion hit the side of the outpost, shaking the building. Anji fell on his back, and got up and ran for the radio on the corner of the room.
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Re: NECRO: Chimera Island

Postby Re4p3r 666 » May 21st, 2010, 7:51 pm

Mike saw his opportunity to flank the left side of the outpost. Eva was infront of him, crouched down firing her assault rifle. Both of the were behind a big tree that ahd fallen down. A bullet hit the tree's trunk barely missing Eva's shoulder. She was in the middle of swapping out clips, and she screamed "♥♥♥♥!" over the Comm.
Everyone heard her, and they all knew she didn't care. Mike was standing up firing an AUG HBAR, looking through the scope, firing in three to five round bursts, mainly getting headshots. The bunker's machine gun fire had Matt and Swiss pinned in a trench. They poked themselves out and shot at the slots on the side of the bunker when the machine gunners got distracted by another target. Mike had to move now, before they started getting annihilated. Mike set his hand on Eva's shoulder, and flashed his blue light and then his green on his Hud, signaling to the others behind him to cover him and those close to the bunker to take the other side of the outpost.
Mike ran straight towards the left side of the bunker, with Eva right behind him. Both of them fired at the rebels on the roof of the outpost. They retreated behind their sandbags, and one rebel fired an RPG at them, and ducked back behind his cover of sandbags to reload the launcher. Mike and eva reached the corner of the outpost, and turned the corner. Mike hit a rebel dead on, knocking him flat on his back. The other rebels turned and fired at Mike. He shot each one in the head, with quick snaps. Eva pointed her sidearm at the rebels head, who was still lying down, cussing at them in Arebic.
Eva shot him in the head, and walked over to the door, eye-balling Mike, and handed him a C-4 breach charge. He attached it to the door, sticking his middle finger up at her. They took positions on either side of the door. The charge went off, blowing the door off of it's hinges, took a few rebels with it, Mike and Eva fired into the room. Mike ran out of ammo in has magazine, and turned aroun 180-degrees, and slid away from the doorway, and reloaded. He turned back into the room, and saw that every rebel was dead. Eva was halfway through the room, and had her middle finger sticking up.. Mike chuckled. "You are such a ♥♥♥♥♥, you know that?" he said walking up next to her.
She looked at him. "Yes, I know" She said teasing him. He was about to say something again, when a bang sounded, and what sounded like and RPG being fired. They looked at each other, and went to the door on the other side of the room. The door exploded outward, throwing both of them back. Mike got off of his back, rifle aimed at the door. He could feel that his head was bleeding. The doorway was covered in smoke. He heard someone speaking in japenese, and gunshots sounded, along with screams of pain. A soldier in a juggernaut suit charged through the doorway, pumping a shotgun. Mike rolled onto his knees. The Juggernaut shot at him, and pumped the shotgun. The shots hit Mike's armor. He hit the ground hard. It burned, like he was cut with a knife. Eva was cruoched behind a table. The Juggernaut stood over Mike. He could still hear the gunshots in the other room. He tried to get up, and pain lanced across his back and realized a bullet got through his armor. Damn, he thought, and looked over at Eva.
Eva had a shotgun in her hand. Mike saw her pop up from behind cover, and shot the Juggernaut square in the chest. The Juggernaut staggered back, stood up straight and shot back. The shots missed, and Eva shot him again. He charged at her and ranned her against a wall. She couldn't move. Hell, she could hardly breathe. Mike finally had managed to struggle to his feet. He saw Eva getting crushed against a wall. He unsheathed his combat knife, and stabbed the Jeggernaut in the back. The knife didn't do anything, and that's what Mike wanted. The Juggernaut turned, and came face to face with the barrel of Mike's G-18. Mike pulled the trigger, and the Juggernaut took the hits, and knocked him down, after releasing Eva. She took a deep breath, filling her lungs back up with air. She saw another trooper in the doorway from the corner of her eye.
It was Slip. He had an assault rifle in his hands, and his sniper rifle on his back. He shot the Juggernaut in the head, killing him. The Juggernaut landed on Eva. She hit the ground. Slip went over and helped Mike up. Eva shoved the body off of her, got up and retrieved her shotgun.


~not finished yet~
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