The Replenishers-Chapter 7 Out!

[Buff_]

It's continuing alright, but it's a little confusing as to what's going on.

[MICrophone]

Plot's good…but…I dunno…I feel it's sort of empty. I mean…you sort of…it's really hard to explain…I just feel like your…maybe focusing on the story too much? I don't feel that there's a lot of character development…I mean…you have flashbacks and all…but even those are more a story than a reflection on character…good…but I feel like you don't really have a good grasp on this…it's not tight, if you know what I mean. It's not really well put together. Like Runouw.com Connection was really tight until the last chapter. Try and take some of that and throw it into this.

[MessengerOfDreams]

So, I'm stumped.


I never got further than this when I planned this out,

so for now, I'ma give this a slight suspension.

Plus the Runouw.Com Connection is working out too well in my head, so I am gonna make that my writing focus.

So, later, mates.