Distortion-Chapter 4 released

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Re: Distortion

Postby MessengerOfDreams » February 18th, 2010, 2:17 pm

Wow, just... wow...

I feel like such a pathetic writer all of a sudden.

Lol, J/k, man, very professionally written, clinching storyline, I feel like I'm watching the movie.
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Re: Distortion

Postby Buff_ » February 18th, 2010, 2:28 pm

Yeah.. kinda hard to come up with something original. Meh... I actually thought this was a weaker chapter, but eh...
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Re: Distortion-Chapter 4 released

Postby MICrophone » February 18th, 2010, 4:09 pm

Actually…I thought it might be the strongest yet. The others have been a little confusing, though this may be intentional and necessary for the purpose of the story, but I feel this chapter was the best written and developed. That said, I'm not gonna suddenly commit suicide because you've taken away all my self-esteem, unlike MOY.
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Re: Distortion-Chapter 4 released

Postby PuppetOfMisery » February 20th, 2010, 4:25 am

Really good :) . 9/10

Keep the other chapters good aswell ;)
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